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Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2011 04:01 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Wedding...

Girl, well let tell you that.... AHHHH OMG THEY GOT MARRIED!!! That is so figgin awesome!! Wow I didn see that coming I thought it was gonna happen wayyy later!! Happy it happened now.. O_____O WAIT DOES THIS MEAN they are gonna finally MAKE LOVE!! Oh shit!!! But I'm soo worried that now they are gonna be looking for her too so if they find them or see her they are screwed for sure!!
Great job as always babe!

Author's Response:

LOL yes they are married haha........you were expecting it? whoo hoo!! so I surprised you yay!!! thx hun btw :)

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2011 01:45 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Wedding...

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OMG That was so beautiful!!!! I love their vows.  I'm sure their wedding night will be just as beautiful and romantic.♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

I  hope they can keep going without being found

That soldier makes it sound like Michael is a fugitive, when all he is doing is running away from his duties as king

Thank you ....always waiting for more!



Author's Response:

yes that soldier takes his duties to seriously haha. I googled pictures of 1800s weddings and everyone looked so simple, it's amazing.

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2011 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Wedding...

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM SO HAPPY GOT MARRIED!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

wow...your quick. haha I just added a video of MJ as a king. Watch it as I go and work on the next chapter :)

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2011 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Captivating Pond...

just thinking......I would love an update......



Author's Response: Should have it soon. I'm working on it :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Captivating Pond...

Aww I love it.! & dang the towns people found out quickk, im happy her and mike are together. Theyre adorable :)! Cnt wait for the next part

Author's Response:

those towns people are nosy huh! and thx. working on the next part. :)

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Captivating Pond...

awwwwww plzz update!!!!!! asap!!!



Author's Response:

working on it :)

Reviewer: coolkat123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 08:46 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Captivating Pond...

I love this story

Author's Response:

Aww Thank you

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 06:50 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Captivating Pond...

Loved it.    They're on their way. 

The truth is coming out.

Nothing like being Mrs. Mihael Jackson. 

Can't wait for more!!!!

Your writing rocks and so do you.



Author's Response:

LOL I know right....who wouldn't want to be Mrs. Michael Jackson ;) thanks hunnie love ya

Reviewer: Call_it_bliss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 03:18 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Captivating Pond...

LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!!! :D can't wait to read more update soon!!!!

Author's Response:

Aww Thank you. I'm working on this next chapter :)

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 02:22 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Captivating Pond...

<3ing this story right now.



Author's Response:

aww thanks :)

Reviewer: Marialovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 02:10 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Captivating Pond...

Ahh sooo good I hlget tingles in my stomach when I read this story :-D 



Author's Response:

That's good right? hahaha I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Ceannxxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2011 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Talk...

Yay, she's gonna run away with him (:



Author's Response:

haha YAY!!!!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2011 11:11 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Talk...

I think them getting away should be like a chase haha dont make it to easy, its always nice to read suspense in stories :) youre doing a wonderful job! Keep it up

Author's Response:

aww thank you :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2011 11:03 am Title: Chapter 5 - The News....

Omg i wonder if she'll find out ramesy is her real mother and i wonder how michael is going to get himself out of this one. Cnt wait for the next part

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2011 10:55 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Horse Ride.....

I love this :) i love that she was opening up to him about her mother and he was opening up to her about his parents, though he didnt tell the whole truth its a startt

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