You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2011 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Lie....

Oh NO Michael! You didn’t just throw out you wife and the baby on the street! And kissing Lisa right after Ana left? I hope he didn’t sleep with her! I must agree with a moonwalker, I just love women who can stand their grounds! And she is more of princes than those faking everything around! I hope Michael will get some sign that it was a lie and feel guilty for what he did to his wife. Great chapter girl! Please continue! :)



Author's Response:

Annalissa is a very strong woman. I wanted to write a woman who knew how to take care of herself and didn't depend on a man especially in a time that women had no rights or voice. Thanks hun.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2011 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Lie....

This chapter made me cry from beginning to end..

Damn and I thought the prince was gonna stand by her once again smdh wow not so cute anymore lol jk

I applaud Anna for being a strong woman and telling Michael how it is..First She didn't throw a fit and begged anyone to believe her, nor did she go running crying after Michael to hear her out. He told her to get out and that is just what she did! She picked up her things and left just as she was told too. Love how she didnt go back inside when he asked her to, but best part was

“If you don't know by now then you don't deserve this child” she said walking away from him and entered the carriage." OMG I LOVE THIS GIRL!!!

She is so strong and didnt give into him AT ALL.. He didn't stand up for her, trust her and her word then he is the one who doesn't deserves her.

Im glad that she found her real father and the truth about the story, I really do hope it's really her father and that he is a good guy.. Not some sick trick James is planing..

Author's Response:

I love Annalissa's strength. In real life, I wish I could be more like her. With out her past and story, of course.

I love that line too. I picture her saying that with conviction LOL

Thanks hun for the review. xoxoxo

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2011 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Lie....

wow i cnt believe mike



Author's Response:

I know right? He would learn...

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2011 11:39 am Title: Chapter 20 - The Secret Passage....

I really like this chapter. I loved how Michael reassured her that she was the one that he loved and that she was the one that he wanted no matter if she was different and had grow up differently than he did.. That becaus of the reason she was like the way she was different than all the others he had fallen in love with her..

Author's Response:

thx hun. Michael is a sweetheart, isn't it? :)

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2011 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Enemies Have Arrived....

Ughh I hate James!!! What a pervert!


I’m scared for Annalisa……



Author's Response:

yeah he's not a good person and me too

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2011 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Enemies Have Arrived....

That was so good!

Lisa sounds a little more mature than Priscilla.   At least she wants to move on with her life. 

James is a slimeball.   Can't believe he watched Michael and Annalissa while they were having sex.  What's the purpose of killing her?   I sure hope nothing happens   Michael better keep an eye on him.

Can't wait for more.  But you already know that!

Love ya girl



Author's Response:

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2011 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

Hi girlfriend {{{{wave}}}}

You know I'm here!!

Great chapter!! Next chapter looks likes it's going to be even better.

Hope they find James before there's anymore trouble

 

Love ya always



Author's Response:

haha {{{{wave}}}}

I know you are here, that's why I love ya. you are so loyal !!

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2011 12:31 am Title: Chapter 18 - The past has come back....

!

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2011 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 17 - The Revelation....

Hey girl, I guess I found your other story :)


I must say I love it; it’s like a fairytale, but with adult content lol


Pleas continue…..


Oksana ;) <3



Author's Response:

"it’s like a fairytale, but with adult content " <-----LOL

Welcome to the other side of my world....xoxo

Reviewer: Ceannxxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2011 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 17 - The Revelation....

I'm still with ya, love :) I just always read from my phone and the site doesn't let me comment that way. I can't believe Anna's pregnant! Well actually I can since they didn't use protection lol. I can't wait for more, I love this story :)



Author's Response:

LOL I guess they forgot about the protection but it's better if they have a baby don't you agree? xoxo

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2011 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

That bitch!!!  How dare she poison Analissa...so glad she and the baby will be ok!

At least James isn't guilty of the poisoning.  but he is of Ramsey's demise.  Thank God for the journal.  

This is so good and getting better!!

MORE PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

thank you <3 James's secret is almost out.

Reviewer: mjjfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2011 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

No, please continue the story. It's in my favs:)



Author's Response:

Thank you . I'm glad you are enjoying it. I will continue. The next chapter is up.

Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2011 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Shocking News...

I knew it!  I knew she was pregnant! :D

I love this story!  I can't wait for the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

I guess you guessed right...xoxo

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2011 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

I'm back, was a little upset about you wanting to stop.

Who's poisoning her?  and Why?   Jealously?  Hmmm!!!

Please update soon.....♥



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, honey :(

Don't worry I am not stopping. I wasn't sure if you guys were enjoying it.

New chapter is up xoxo

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2011 02:49 am Title: Chapter 16 - The Shocking News...

Still here, no no don't stop! Now it's where it gets better, this story is fantastic!! Very intriguing and it keeps you at the edge. Please don't stop! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you hunnie. I will continue because of reviews like yours. xoxo

You must login (register) to review.