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Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2011 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Horse Ride.....

My thought: UPDATE NOW PLZZ!!! I WANNA READ THE NEXT PART!!!!!

Author's Response:

hahaha I'm working on it :)

Reviewer: mikespyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2011 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

This is wonderful! Loving the idea of this new story girl!



Author's Response:

thanks hun. I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Marialovesmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2011 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Horse Ride.....

Absolutely cant wait for the next part :)



Author's Response:

thanks I'm working on it :)

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2011 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Horse Ride.....

Ooh things are definitely getting spicy! I love it.



Author's Response:

Michael works fast huh! haha

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2011 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

So sad Michael feels he has to  lie about who he is.  

What she said about how her mother died, that's probably what she was told.  

 He's a prince and she's a princess and she doesn't even know it.  I wonder if she'll find out.   

He is falling in love with her more and more each day.    So cute she had no idea what an orgasm was; and there's Michael explaining the whole  experience to her. 

Girl I love this story....thanks for the update. I'm really curious what's going to happen.    You rock!!



Author's Response:

she thinks Rhonda, the woman who helped her mother give birth to is her real mother. I know Michael and his trust issues and yeah haha the orgasm part I wasn't sure at first to add that and then something made me give in.

xoxo

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2011 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Horse Ride.....

love this



Author's Response:

yay!!! I'm glad you do!! xoxo

Reviewer: lovetoread Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2011 11:32 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Secret...

So annalisa is actually a princess?! Wow, cant wait for more!

Author's Response:

story twist huh! haha and thanks for reviewing and reading. :)

Reviewer: Ceannxxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2011 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Secret...

It's so sad what happened to her mother. I can't wait for her and Michael to really get to know eachother. (:



Author's Response:

I know :(..new chapter is up :)

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2011 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Secret...

i loved it more!!!



Author's Response:

thx. new chapter is up. :)

Reviewer: MJ_pop50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2011 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

I love how the story goes ;)



Author's Response:

thank you xoxo

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2011 01:49 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Secret...

That was so good and so well written

Ramsey was killed by the town's people  never proven innocent.   Annalissa was brought up by two strangers and what no one knew  She was also royalty!!

Like this story more and more....                                   You rock



Author's Response:

thank you hunnie. You are words are too kind. Crazy beginning huh! Working on more. :)

Reviewer: MJlegacy14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2011 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

b34;I think I might go insaneb34;Lol...i think this story just captured my eye...and my heart.I just found it and I'm already drawn...update SOON.So if she's a PRINCESS...then there will be no problem with her and Michael being together...yay.I thought it was going to be a forbidden love story.Michael's kisses 'thrill' me and hes 'fiesty'.lol

Author's Response:

no wait don't go insane lol I'm glad you are enjoying it so far :) and yes lol mj's kisses are "feisty" and "thrilling"

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2011 12:36 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Secret...

Oh wow, Annalissa's beginning's were tough. Her poor mother. And her. How sad.



Author's Response:

yeah the big dark secret that haunts her past but how will Michael or Annalissa respond to it, is the question. xoxo thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2011 11:59 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Kiss...

OOoh things are heating up. Me likey!



Author's Response:

hahaha I'm glad you are liking it. I will have more soon. :)

Reviewer: mjjfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2011 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

Of course, he's a prince and then a King!!!!!!

Keep writing!



Author's Response:

exactly. thank you. I am working on the next chapter. :)

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