Boy, a lot of drama in that chapter! Isaiah sure wanted Jesse! That dream was very sad but sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Loved this one and one question, if Isaiah is black, then does that mean that Jesse is black too?

Heyy sorry i didn't review yet for the last chpt. Ill do this first. i wont even ask how u  photoshop a txt convo like that thats cool af. Yea her sis is a brat. I love how symbolic the dream was she asked isiah to help her rid of her posters and any lasting reminder of him. She saved his life he rejected her, so shes rejecting him and any reminder of him. and Isiah helped her do that. He still doesn't seem good for her, like in it for the sex, not exactly a great emotional support. I mean there was a reason why they broke up to begin with. i loved that last chapter when she's picking Chuck up from the hospital, she seems him of course being the stubborn ass he is insists on leaving before he should. i like how theres that moment when he sees her, and she flicks him off and is like i don't fucking need you anymore, i saved you and now you can go fuck up your life as you please, essentially i don't care what you have to say, you're not worth my time. isiah seems to trying to push her forward in the direction he wants instead of considering what she wants or actually needs. Like her sister, isiah are all demanding things from her without apology or consideration for how she feels or whats shes going through. Shes there to make them happy almost parallel to mj he probably felt like he existed solely in the people around him's lives to make them well "financially happy". But she still would save him no matter what and without apology. I liked that he didn't say anything to her and brushed her off cuz like he may be pissed off cuz she took away his only relief he wouldve had or been able to come close to and yet again he has to live in this life not wanting to confront anything really even though obviously he should.  this is awesome thanks for updating:) btw what are you majoring in, in school? I havent picked one lol. 

Really good job. Like the way they meet each other everytime and as always MJ remains a mistery.

Damnnn why is he being such a Jerk? Please update ASAP

Why are you portraying him in such a bad light?
I mean it is fiction alright, but still connected to his name. What is next,will you clarify and get him to talk to her

Author's Response:

Well, to be quite frank, I've always portrayed Michael as this sweetheart and caring man who could do no wrong. I almost did it again. But, I want this story to be like nothing ever written! I want people to remember this story in years to come and say "she did something different from everyone else". And like you said, it's fiction. The power is literally in my hands. 😉 Stay tuned. Storms coming.

I'm so in love with this story! I think what makes me love it so much is that I can fully relate to Jess... I'm probably not the only reader thinking that either. Plus your descriptions of Jess' emotions are perfectly written. Love your different take on Michael too by making him the asshole haha. Jess' flip off at the end was classicccc. He deserved it. And I actually really do like Isaiah, I wonder what will happen between them if Jess & Michael keep up with with their interactions - whether they're good or bad. Really excited for the next update! 

New reader!  You have definitely piqued my interest!  Who wouldn't wish this to be true!

Very well written!  Now why was he so mean?  That's the million dollar question!  Certainly not the Michael we all believe we knew!

Looking forward to reading more!

Yayyy u updated this! this story has been stuck in my head for months i always wondered what would happen next. Im actually really glad he's pissed cuz it wouldnt be as realistic, idk honest or raw if he was like super happy you know? Think about it hes been in pain, physical emotional otherwise for a long time, death would be as close to any relief as he felt like he could get. I dont blame him for not feeling like being nice to a fan he probably doesnt feel like putting on the mask so to speak and acting like everythings fine and being under the pressure to act how a fan would expect their fav celeb to, in a typical fan encounter. He also just woke up i assume not too long ago from being dead, he's probably frustrated and still feels as awful and stressed out as ever having to deal with all of his problems and these vulture like people trying to get whatever they could out of him. His mom shouldn't have asked her to come so soon after he woke up but later after he was feeling better. She was trying to cheer him up which i get. As for our lovely protaganists reaction at first i was annoyed then i was like ya if i was her id be pretty pissed off too you know? Like that he just brushed her off. But im different and if i did do something like that i wud perfectly ok with not getting a thank you. But just knowing it was the right thing being enough:).  Like this is my idea of her thinking, MJ, you mean a hell of a lot to me you did so much to encourage me as a person yet you wanna treat me like im nothing cuz youre used to not acknowledging peoples efforts to genuinely help you. Knowing me i wudve sassed him off and made him look stupid for assuming i was there to get something from him and not just be there to make sure he's ok. Which is why i think she went.  Yaa like you expect this person to be at least oh idk nice? And respectful at the VERY LEAST then he pulls that adolescent shit? Like ya ok no. He also did have a bad substance abuse problem which causes people to act way differently than who you are and if youre not used to it its shocking and scares u to be around. Wow i just reread what she said bravo to her! That was awesome! He totally deserved it. She should apologize i mean damn its like hes unaware that we get bullied for sticking up for him too. Anyway i cant wait to read more this is soo good! One of my fav stories on here:))