[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2015 09:21 pm Title: LAOT: Electric Relaxation
Yassss. I have been waiting for the at when Kai was.gonna go off on Kira for Her low down dirty schemeing ass shit. Kai, you the real MVP. Told that girl off and like it is. Kira ain't know what to say but where the Hell did loving Michael came From on her part? I was takenaback a little bit because she said she only still had feelings for him, the big L was nowhere in sight. Smh.
And Mike trying so hard although he's bedridden and cripple, to get his girl fully back. Kai is really distant right now. But eventually she's gonna take him back soon.
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2015 08:16 pm Title: LAOT: Electric Relaxation
Very nice chapter.
I was over here laughing my butt off at Michael's mama being all nosy and stuff. Lol but I can't talk because I probably would have been doing the same thing. I mean, the two of them were having the conversation right there in front of her so that was actually a normal reaction.
As for that home wrecker Kira, she got lucky because if she and Kai were anywhere else, Kai would have really put a number on her! But I think Kai handled that as any mature person could have. Although the temptation to beat her ass down was there, she didn't succumb to it because like she said, "I'm a growing woman." I loved that statement. It shows so much class and maturity.
And little Mar Mar dancing to music videos was adorable. Loving music jus like her daddy. I see the apple doesn't fall too far from the tree. I love the bond MJ has with his daughter.
My favorite moment was their phone conversation in the end. Michael really knows how to sweet talk. Kai should take his advice and give him a chance to fix what's broken between them. They made it this far so it's damn near foolish to give up now.
Nicely written. As always, looking forward to the next chapter :)
Date: Nov 06, 2015 06:47 pm Title: LAOT: Electric Relaxation
Real best friends stay together no matter the bullshit it might take a while but hopefully they bounce back
Date: Nov 05, 2015 06:08 am Title: LAOT: Love Yourz
Gosh I freaking love this story. Every character feels so real to me. This is definitely the best story that I have read on here. You are an incredible writer, keep it up.I'm like so addicted to this story, I just can't get enough .😍😍
Author's Response:
Awwww really?! Thank you lots I appreciate it! Stay tuned girl :) and thanks again
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2015 04:20 pm Title: LAOT: Love Yourz
Joseph with this lowkey shade he throwing though. I mean, couldn't you not keep that to yourself. Already about to cause some shit between him and Mike.
Kai and Mike are once again ending their relationship. Well, more like Kai suggested they take a break. I do feel bad about it but then again she needs that break because she gave up everything to be with Mike and she wants that back including her happiness. She has a major point. I can see Mike already stirring up a plan to get her to change het mind. That if he does....
Author's Response:
Joseph loves to throw shade but as you can see when Michael dished him his own medicine he had nothing to say! Smh typical.
Kai is most likely talking out the side of her neck, she's still highly emotional about everything that's going on, and the way Michael is feeling I don't' think he's gonna allow her to 'break them up' haha his ass already going crazy.
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2015 01:13 pm Title: LAOT: Mirrors
I dont know how I overlooked this chapter but I did completely. Lol my bad. Now things make a little more sense to me because at first I was like I feel like I missed something lol.
Trey is an awesome friend. And like Kai, I was about to curse that lady behind the desk out too. I mean she just told her that she was the mother of his child! Thar right there should have granted her access to him. And then Cali and Kira had yhe nerve to show up.
Seriously, I'm soooo ready for this Kai and Kira encounter lol.
Also, I wonder where Honor is....
Author's Response:
Haha girl I was about to say, I think you missed something but I'm glad you found it! Haha . Yeah Tret is a very good friend, very good. Kira is just...tuh right now things aren't looking so good for her right now, she just better be prepared for Kai when Kai isn't all emotional anymore because that's when shit is gonna get real! Real quick .
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2015 01:00 pm Title: LAOT: Love Yourz
Ugh! These two are on and off again more than I can keep track of! I sort of get why Kai is saying this but what difference is any of that going to make if they still going to be living together and raising a child? I feel that it's pointless to say you're taking a break when the only thing that will be different is the label. If Kai wants to clear her head then she needs to physically get away for a while. Maybe she, Trey, and Honor can vacation somewhere for a while. This way, she can release some tension and figure out what she wants to do with her life.
Also, I'm more than ready to see her confront Kira about this ish. It's Kira's fault why he's hurt in the first place! Does she even feel guilty?
And what about Ghost? Did Jimmy do something to him or did he get caught? So many questions but overall, I'm thrilled that Michael is alright.
More soon.
Date: Nov 04, 2015 07:57 am Title: LAOT: Mirrors
Kira really didn't do anything wrong she was just holding the keys she didn't know this was going to happen and I'm glad mj is okay but you can't blame Kira she didn't shoot him and I think there's something more going on with her idk
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2015 10:40 pm Title: LAOT: Mirrors
Why the Hell the the bitches of the wicked west showed up??? Like why. Why????? Anyway, that lady was rude as shit to Kai and when she clearly said she was.Mike's girl and mother of his child, still, the lady was being stubborn and a bitch. Ugh!!!!
See I'm thankful for Trey because if not, Kai would have reach her breaking point in public and went on a rampage foreal on all three of them. Just crazy.
But overall, I'm so happy that Mike is alive and well but injured but alive to be with his family. Imo, I know he was done with the thing life for sure Kai just needs to see that and know that what happen isn't his fault. And wherever the hell she was about to say she better not or ima come in this story and beat her pretty ass. She just speaking out the side of her neck.
Now we gotta deal with Joseph since he showed up. Nice of him to bring balloons and whatnot.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2015 09:24 pm Title: LAOT: What's Next?
And this is why I love me some Jimmy. He speaks some realistic, especi when it comes down to his niece and nephew. He don't play about them. He's exactly who mikes need in his life to get his head on straight and think about things.
Now I was not prepare for this shit girl, lol. Ghost seriously shot my homie and all hell is about to break loose from where I'm at. I hope Jimmy come in and pop some caps in his ass. This is getting ridiculous!!!!!!'
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2015 08:46 pm Title: LAOT: What's Next?
Now this was a twist I was NOT expecting! WTF????!!! Since she can't have MJ, she just gon go and screw Ghost? And how does Cali and Kira know Ghost like that. I know Kira is a horrible friend but I didn't think she was an evil person who would be down for someone shooting up MJ. Drama just elevated to a whole new level and now I'm pissed off all over again. Please don't have me in the dark for too long. I really need to see what's going to happen next.
Date: Oct 31, 2015 04:59 pm Title: LAOT: What's Next?
Don't tell me they finna rape him!!! This some bull I knew Ghost was trippin I knew cuz his name is ghost!!! This mess up girl this better not jeopardize his relationship with Kai, and Jimmy better come and help him!!!!!
Anyway Good Update!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2015 02:31 pm Title: LAOT: What's Next?
Nice chapter.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2015 07:36 pm Title: LAOT: Refresh to Restart
Im so glad things have finally simmered down but I'm like Trey and still ticked off as hell lol. I'm ready for Kai to face Kira again and tell her off VIGOROUSLY!!!
MJ is such a sweetheart. Just so ready and willing to do all he can to get her smiling again. I so want a man like that.
...But preferably one who doesn't flirt as much as Michael though lol.
Very sweet chapter.
Date: Oct 26, 2015 04:56 pm Title: LAOT: Refresh to Restart
Damn that's all fucked up smh Kira should have never done that but she couldn't help her feelings and she just wanted to get it out of the way instead of holding it in that's messed up to Kai but damn , and now everything is messed up but they shouldn't be calling Kira out like that since they supposedly her friends but I see why they feel a way she should just go with her baby father and leave them is they really that mad at her