[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2015 07:36 am Title: Not Impressed Because Your A Celebrity
Well. She was like I'm not impressed negro. Lmao. He was being sweet though offering to pay the damages. I'm sure when they do meet at the concert he's going to let his cockiness take over. I can see it already.
I feel bad for Ay and her miscarriage they can be rough to handle so I understand her pulling away. X should have been a shoulder instead of sticking his diddly into a stripper.
I wonder if her relationship with Rachel will change once Rachel sees Michael is interested in Ay.
You have a reviewer for life here!
More soon! <333
btw I appreciate you reading my stories. :)
Author's Response:
lmao ikr? Yeah that really sucks and X should have been there for her when she needed him the most. Hmm...another interesting question and that will be revealed in the next update. Really? O_O oh thank you and the same goes for me. I just love your stories :)
Date: Aug 14, 2015 02:13 am Title: Not Impressed Because Your A Celebrity
Lol i love Rachel she's funny, smh at X, can't wait to see everyone's reaction at the concert and when Rachel finds out she already met Michael and when Michael sees her at the concert
Author's Response:
Lol Rachel is a trip. I agree X was wrong for what his did. That is an interesting question and it will be answered in the next update :)
Date: Aug 14, 2015 01:13 am Title: Not Impressed Because Your A Celebrity
She shouldn't have told him her name. Just to screw with him. He's used to getting what he wants. She's good for him:) this should be interesting. she will HAVE to admit hes sexy and talented after seeing him perform. Rachel will obviously get pissed if she finds out Ayanna and Mike met already. Update soonn!! And btw Ayanna needs to stop X's as somewhere. He just expects her to wait on him hand and foot. Total dick.
Author's Response:
lol maybe your right about that. You really don't like X do you? I am guessing that your TeamMichael&Ayanna :)
Date: Aug 09, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Prologue
Omg that was breathtaking! That was amazing the love scene is perfectly detailed! Plz keep writing this story cuz im already in love with it!😊
Author's Response:
Why thank you luv and I will. Hopefully I will have another update sometime today :)
Date: Aug 09, 2015 12:17 pm Title: Unofficial Girl
Lovvvveee this!! Esp the part where hes convinced Cupid shoved an arrow up his ass cuz he cant stop staring at her
Author's Response:
Aww thank you , luv. I'm glad that your enjoying it :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2015 09:49 am Title: Unofficial Girl
Very nice chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2015 06:32 am Title: Unofficial Girl
Yayyyyyy. I'm glad you did update. This is my favorite kind of Michael. Cocky, self assured and a bit of an asshole. Lmaoooo. You would love my storys Brown Eyes' Blues Inked and Inked over. That's exactly how my Michael is in those. Not like the sweet gentle guy from Cradle.
Lets get into the meat of this. I'm LOVING it so far. Michael is such an ass having Tati there and damn bear jerking off to Brooke on the phone. Nasty ass. Well it seems like Tati has bitten off more than she can chew because Michael is not having it. One trip down town and some doggy style and her ass was purring like a cat.
Hmmmmmm. I can just imagine that this new beauty is in the music biz cause they will meet again. I wonder how she will react when she finds out it was Michael she bumped into.
More soon Hun. I'm so down for this!
<333
Author's Response:
Awww thank you luv. I am so glad that your enjoying the story and yeah lol Mike is a mess. And that was messed up what he did to Tati. I love cocky, bossy Mike and a bit of an ass too as well as gentle sweet Mike. Personally I think that his sexy anyway coz his Mike :) You know what I never thought about that regarding Ayanna. But i am considering it and I owe it to you so thanks for the idea. I hope that you keep reviewing as I love reading your comments. They make my day and I will defintely check out those stories today :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2015 01:57 am Title: Unofficial Girl
Lawd so Mike is a player. Smh. I understand he's been heartbroken but it doesn't mean that every woman was going to do that to him. But I mean, he's a man with needs and blah blah blah. Tatiana has no reason to get mad at Brooke. You knew how he was from the get go so.... at least Brooke understood her role with him if Tatiana wants more then stop being a regard and leave Mike for some damn happiness.
And now he finally runs into Ayanna. Whoo, she was mad about her cappuccino though, lol. But for him to stare at her so hard and get caught. But it seem like she's not the type to give up poon easily so Mike don't try anything if you see her again.
I can't wait for this story to progress.
Author's Response:
Your right and I agree with you coz not every woman will do him dirty but he hasn't met her yet. Lol his definetly has needs. Yeah Tatiana has no right to be mad with Brooke coz Brooke knows that what Michael is about and she doesn't really expect more from him. but Tatiana she wants more that Mike is willing to give and that is not cool to him. Lol yeah Ayanna is defintely not the type of girl who gives up her cookie easily XD
Date: Aug 07, 2015 11:48 pm Title: Unofficial Girl
Hey, really like how this is going so far. So Mikes a womanizer....hmm maybe Ayana will change that? I like her personality. She'll put him in his place. more soon dear <3
Author's Response:
Yep his a player. Hmm...maybe she wil. But we will see :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2015 06:21 am Title: Prologue
Man!!! This is gearing up to be soooooo good!! Please update. I need to see where this all goes!!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Thank you. That means a lot to me. You really good too as I mention b4. I'm really not kidding :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2015 03:39 am Title: Prologue
Loving it, babe! Keep up the great work 😍😍😘
Author's Response:
Thank u, i have more planned for these 2 :)
Date: Jul 26, 2015 08:43 am Title: Prologue
Love the sexual tension! So hot XD
Author's Response:
Thank u I tried to show that. I'm glad that I pulled it off :)
Date: Jul 25, 2015 04:01 pm Title: Prologue
oooh I'm liking her character already!, you defend yourself girl! XD
can't wait to read the next chapter !
Author's Response:
She is feisty isn't she? Lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 03:01 pm Title: Prologue
Oh, I like the start of your story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank u. I am working on it as we speak :)
Date: Jul 25, 2015 02:30 pm Title: Prologue
Great start, love it already
Author's Response:
Thank u. Its just a sneak peak of what's to come :)