[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2015 03:12 am Title: What Your Man Gotta Do With Me?
This dude said heaven lost one of his angels. If he don't take his ass on somewhere
Michael better sit down somewhere. Ol controlling ass. I'd be ready to kick him square in the nuts if he talked to me like that. Tatiana should do that. I would cheer for four hours. It ain't her fault you're crushing on a girl who's not givin a half a damn or hell about you, sir
Date: Aug 28, 2015 02:59 am Title: The Struggle Is Real
So not the last time she sees him
Almost had a conversation, but then Tati had to call him, put that phone on silent the next time lol
Happy for Rachel for not fainting :)
Author's Response:
Good advice and yeap she didn't faint so congrats to her for doing that :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2015 01:32 am Title: Not Impressed Because Your A Celebrity
Can't stand X already. Of course you know I"m rooting for Michael, so I have to be a jerk straight up when it comes to X. Other than that, he just rubs me the wrong way.
I'm ready to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Lmao lots of ppl don't like X and I don't blame you guys. What his done was so fucked up that's it beyond ridiculous SMH. Lol your TeamMichael? Awesome :D More will be coming today and here hoping tomorrow too :)
Date: Aug 27, 2015 06:50 am Title: Driving Me Crazy
I know what you mean life is annoying sometimes when you can't have time to write
Love Yana and Rachel, hopefully she don't faint this time
Lol at the dreams about Yana, he's so into her
Oh if only Tati knew what he's thinking about her
Oh can't wait to see what happens next, who's gonna say something first? And what? Lol
Author's Response:
Yeah they are a mess. Lol his is feeling something for her and he is tolerating Tati. His doesn't want to hurt her. Working on the next update as we speak :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2015 06:36 pm Title: Unofficial Girl
I didn't even know I was behind I'm so sorry. This is a great first chapter!!
Author's Response:
Aww...thank you and I enjoy your stories too girl :)
Date: Aug 21, 2015 12:56 am Title: What Your Man Gotta Do With Me?
MJ Being Domaniering is really strange, like this is him behinds the scenes a player and basically all around dick. You know looking up to MJ all these years being kind hearted all about healing the world. Just hard to think that A: His a smoker 😕 B: A player.
This is very different to other fanfiction I've read on various site, but I am gonna see where your gonna go with this and maybe you will show us the guy we loved and respected....
Author's Response:
I understand what your saying and I'm not trying to offend anyone. I love Michael and respect him. His is beyond amazing, phemonal, electrifying, sweet, sensitive, caring, cute, sexy as hell, etc. He is a bunch of other words that I cant think of right now. The reason that I made his a player is coz his been hurt. He's been in love with Tatum O'Neil, Theresa Gonsalves, and Diana Ross. So right now his not believing in love. But then he meets Ayanna and his view about love changes completely. His doesn't realize it yet, but he is already starting to fall for her. I really appreciate that your reading my story and I hope that you will enjoy the next chapter :)
Date: Aug 20, 2015 01:41 pm Title: Prologue
Oh wow reading Michael being an ass is a little strange. Guess that's how you want to portray him. Then again this is prologue. Let's see how this plans out.
Author's Response:
I appreciate you for giving my story a chance :)
Date: Aug 18, 2015 10:00 pm Title: What Your Man Gotta Do With Me?
This is getting good now. Ayanna needs to find out about X's trifling bony ass ASAP! She needs to throw him out on his ass and not even hesitate to look back. Trifling ass is not only cheating AGAIN, but got the bitch pregnant?! Whoo chile NO. Smh. Ayanna deserves better. I guess there won't be any good men in this story lol smh. I hope she finds out very soon though. X is mad trifling. Lol at Rachel passing out backstage. Maybe it's for the best since she didn't get to see the way Michael is pressed and lusting after her friend. And if Michael thinks Ayanna is gonna be some easy lay, he's got another thing coming.
Author's Response:
She will find out and that is a promise. She def deserves better than X. Mike is a manwhore and his has sex on the brain atm lol at least that is what he is trying to tell himself that is all that he wants from Yana
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2015 09:10 pm Title: What Your Man Gotta Do With Me?
X is living that trifle life. Ugh I hope Chole does rat his ass out. He deserves it for being a lowlife scum bucket. 1) Cheating (2 getting the chick pregnant and 3) denying the baby when you know damn well it's yours. That's the biggest sin right there.
Put his ass on Blast Chloe!!!!
Michael morphed into a complete cheese ball. Lmaooooo. "Heaven is missing an angel..." Boy if you don't get your corny ass on somewhere. Lmaooooo.
Hes obviously just tongue tied and awkward because he actually is attracted to her on a different level. He won't admit it tho.
What makes him think that all of a sudden tomorrow Ayanna is just going to fall on his dick and make the world a better place???
Keep dreaming my dude.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Girl you are so right his is living so foul. Its bad enough that he cheated on Yana again, gets Chloe pregnant, and then he has the audacity to deny the baby. like that is a no no no right there. Chloe is pisssed off and I'm thinking that she is planning on exposing him. As for Mike I def agree 100% that what he said to Yana was totally corny. And yeah his feeling are more about him getting it in than his is willing to admit. And Yana is not like Tatiana or any of the girls that he's used to dealing with so his def has a challenge on his hands lol Another update will come soon luv :)
Date: Aug 18, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Prologue
-when your ovaries explode- <3
Author's Response:
i love it! his is so cute :D
Date: Aug 18, 2015 01:28 pm Title: What Your Man Gotta Do With Me?
Great update. Eww @ X like wtf. Ayanna needs to dump his lame behind.
Im dead at Rachel wasting her entire meet and greet fainting. lol. Well I guess that let Yana and Mike have their lil moment.
Looking forward to more :D
Author's Response:
Yeah X is pathetic right now SMH and maybe she will but we will see what happen. Yeah poor Rachel she just got too overwhelemed didn't she? lol Oh yeah they had a nice lil chat lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2015 12:57 pm Title: What Your Man Gotta Do With Me?
Looooove it lol
Author's Response:
Aww thank you luv :)
Date: Aug 18, 2015 12:03 pm Title: What Your Man Gotta Do With Me?
Dude its obvious you're in love with her
Smh at x (again) she should leave him, she's gonna find out he's cheated on her again I'm sure of that
Lol aww poor Rachel, she wanted to meet her idol so bad and when she finally did, she fainted but I've a feeling she'll see him more often in the future
Author's Response:
You think that his loves her? Hmm...maybe your right about that. Ikr? He sucks right now. Yeah it sucks that she fainted
Date: Aug 14, 2015 05:34 pm Title: Not Impressed Because Your A Celebrity
Lmao I am loving this so far. Michael is about to be pressed as hell other Ayanna. And frankly, who wouldn't be? She's gorgeous! Can't wait to see what happens when they meet again.
Author's Response:
lol getting Ayanna will not be an easy task believe me :)
Date: Aug 14, 2015 11:59 am Title: Not Impressed Because Your A Celebrity
Good job girl..nice start.
Author's Response:
Thank you girl. I appreciate you saying that