Date: Sep 05, 2015 09:16 am Title: A Thin Line In Between Love And Hate
Girl this update was fucking FIRE! I'm talking pure FLAMES! First off, fuck Chloe and them heavy ass bags under her eyes. Bitch looks and built like a prepubescent Vietnamese child worker. She got a lot of nerve trying to talk shit when bitch you are the SIDE BITCH! How dare you call Ayanna stupid when your retarded ass was fuckin this nothing ass nigga knowing he had someone else and don't and will never love you? If a man will cheat with you, his ass will cheat ON you too. So I was actually happy that X bum ass shitted on her when she brought her tired ass to his apartment. She's a fucking basic thot and she deserves everything that happens to her. And I'm glad Ayana slapped the dog shit outta her too. Also, I hope her and X both will look and feel a damn fool with the fact that Michael fucking Jackson wants Ayanna, and in time he will have her too. They both will wonder, how and why and know that that is some shit way outta their league. So Chloe can have bum ass X with his skinny ass. I'm just so glad that Ayanna found out th me truth. I really am. Karma is a bitch and X and his ho will have it coming ten fold. The gag is X still won't be with Chloe and treat her like shit and the thot she is, and Ayanna will actually be happy now. That's the best revenge--HAPPINESS. Not to mention when she actually does get with Michael. X will be pressed as fuck because he can't compete in anyway at ALL, and that bitch Chloe will be seething because she thought she was doing something slick by fucking Ayanna's man and "taking" him from her, all the while she did her ass a favor! So the laugh really is on X and his ho chile. As for Ayanna, I really hope she blocks X's number from her phone, and moves out of her apartment. And I also think she needs to take Michael up on his offer. Go to New York with him and have some fun. Take her mind off the bs. I think they'll even get closer behind it. Lastly, as for Michael... It's good to see that he's really being respectful with Ayanna. I think he truly does like her and is falling for her. And I'm sooooo glad he didn't go and fuck another bitch. Just watch playboy and jerk one off, yassss Michael! He knows he will have to clean his act up if he wants a shot at a woman like Ayanna. Only thing bad I can say is, there is no reason for Ayanna to hang with bitches he fucked. Sheryl and Tatiana? Hell no. She don't need to be mingling with his side bitches, that's a recipe for drama and that will turn Ayanna completely off. She's dealt with enough dog ass niggas. So Michael better be smart about this. Anyway, I cannot wait til the next update! Michael really does care about her because he actually exercised some self control and didn't let things go too far after that kiss. Ayanna gotta be real with herself, she's feeling him and liking him too. Especially since she initiated that kiss. Get yo life girl! Lol. Great update girl!
Author's Response:
Your right Chloe is basic and she talked a lot of shit. She wanted to rile Yana up and def worked as you saw. But she actually assumed that Yana was a weak bitch and was going to to stand there and take her shit. Hell no! Yana gave her a lil taste of wat is come in the future.X's ass is done and ducted frfr. His has lost Yana and he has to accept that. Lol girl I really loved reading review as you had a lot of thing to say and it was funny as hell. You spoke nothing but truth. X straight dogged Chloe and she didn't like it whatsoever. Ermm...yeah she got her revenge as she exposed him. But she still lost too coz his still don't want her. Don't worry these two will get wat's coming to them and that is a promise, But when it will happen I really can't say right now. Chloe is pregnant so she is safe from Yana's raft for now lol Mike is really wanting to dig in X's ass for wat he did to Yana. Trust me when I say that will happen and you have not seen the last of X and Chloe. I am not done with them yet. I agree with you Mike does need to be very careful about how his deals with Yana coz she is different than other women that his used to messing with. So here hoping that he doesn't do anything stupid. I'm excited about writing the next update and I can't wait until a week is up. Thanks for reading luv :D
Date: Sep 05, 2015 03:28 am Title: A Thin Line In Between Love And Hate
Glad Yana finally broke up with X
Cloe should be happy she's pregnant cause otherwise she'd be in the hospital
Agree with Rachel, Yana begins to have feelings for Michael
That ending, that kiss, I'm sure both of them enjoyed it a little too muchWWon't be surprised if Yana visits him in NYC
Can't wait to the next update
Author's Response:
Oh yeah his is history. Yana finally had enough. I think that Chloe knew that Yana was gonna dig in that ass y'know so of course she had to run her mouth coz she knew that it would really puss Yana off. Lol mmm...yeah I think that they did too. Maybe she will. You just never know :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2015 10:09 pm Title: Trapped in The Elevator
Wow that hospital would have lost quite a few patients in real life if it took 3 whole hours to get the back up generators working. Lol.
It was pretty great that Michael knew what to do to help her in her time of need. As for X he's the definition of a piece of shit. I hope Chloe takes his ass to court over that baby and just when I thought he couldn't sink lower, he goes ahead and hits Yanna to top it of. Ugh.
So Yanna and Michael have decided to be friends. It took some balls for him to lay things on the line like that with her. This is an interesting developement.
Lets see how long Tati decides to stay away. I'm guessing it won't be long especially when he starts getting closer to Yanna.
Sheryl, Turkle, X all y'all trife af!!!!!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Lol I know so I fixed it as I want it to sound as realistic as I can make it. Tut girl I really enjoy reading your reviews coz they are funny as hell. Yep Mike and Yana are friends now. Hmm..that is an interesting thought about Tati and we will see wat happen in NewYork City. X is beyond pathetic. I just can't discuss him right now coz i hate him and his my dam character lmao lmfao! Yeah I def agree with you there. Just updated luv and I hope that you enjoy it :D
Date: Sep 01, 2015 04:21 pm Title: Trapped in The Elevator
Yasss i LOVE THIS!! Theyre sooo cute!! Ok done fangirling:) he got his chance to play hero and impress her. Glad Rachel talked to him about Yanna. Love that he wants to be in her life even if hes just a friend to her:) that was really sweet. Bubbles will lovvve her:) hope she dumps X's ass for good.thank u for updating!!
Author's Response:
Wow thank you. That means a lot to me :) Yeah his Def impressed her a lot and she is beginning to see him in a whole new light. Michael is happy coz he gets to know Ayanna. But at the same I think that his hoping that their friendship will blossom into love. But whether that happen or not only time will tell. I am working on another update. Here hoping that I will have it done by Thursday as I love reading you guy reviews :D
Date: Sep 01, 2015 01:25 am Title: Trapped in The Elevator
Finally they are talking instead of fighting,
She should dump X for good, she gave him one too many chances and he keeps fucking up, i hope she doesn't give him a chance again after what he did
How long will they be just friends? I bet Michael can't wait till she sees him as more than a friend, he's so in love with her, loved how Rachel told him it's obvious he loves Yana
Loved the update :)
Author's Response:
I figured that I has tortured you guy enough lol So that why I decided to put Ayanna and Michael in a situation where they had to be civil to be other. X is really making you guys mad huh? Your right that she has given his so many chances. And for him to deliberately mess up is beyond anybody's comparison to understand. Lol yeah Rachel can be very direct and blunt. So if she sees something she will say something. More coming soon b25;
Date: Aug 31, 2015 10:39 pm Title: Trapped in The Elevator
About time! I was hoping what would it take for this boy to get somewhere. That's how you do it Mike. Smooth and subtle. And X trifling ass is gon make this easy for him by the dumb ass shit he continually does. Not only is he cheating and getting hoes pregnant, but this nigga not even going to work when he supposed to?! Hooters food is nasty AF! BYE! Man can Ayanna please break up with him? Idk how much longer I can deal with him. Ugh! Anyway, I'm so happy she's finally gonna be friends with Michael. He's already so sprung so I know he's ecstatic about her finally giving him a chance to get to know her. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
You be kiling me with your reviews lol Ikr? After what Mike did for her, it would be so messed up if Yana continued to dislike him don't you think? I am curious to see how far their newfound friendship will go myself. X...I can't even atm His is continuing to fuck up more and more like you said. And Ayanna does deserve better than him. But believe me when I tell you that I have something planned for Xavier Muahahaha!!! XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2015 11:59 am Title: The Struggle Is Real
When his fly came down lmaooo That's one of my favorite memories I swear. he looked so cute omg lmaoo
He cares about what she thinks cuz he likes her so much. Of course she's gonna see him again. That's not how this life works girl. You know you're gonna see him again. Just let it happen. Let it be. Let it beeeeeeeeeeeeee
I'm also dying over "hey girl, what are you wearing?"
You could have at least asked how she was doing, Michael!
Author's Response:
Lmfaoo I am cracking up as I read these reviews. I am so glad that you guy like this story. I am working on the next one as we speak and hopefully it will be up tonight or tomorrow. Yeah its very obvi that his got it bad for Yana. And your right once again she is going to see him again. Lol Michael is a mess atmXD
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2015 09:52 am Title: Driving Me Crazy
This dude out here having fantasies lmaoo Bye, Michael. Please go somewhere! I'm just dying cuz this dude swears he doesn't want Ayanna, but he's sitting here seeing her face everywhere. Come on, dude. He's cracking me the hell up though. He needs to figure his life out and get his shit together
Author's Response:
Lol I couldn't agree more. His is really delusional atm and so very true XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2015 03:11 pm Title: Prologue
I really like this story. Keep this up Jade
Date: Aug 28, 2015 02:38 pm Title: The Struggle Is Real
The whole time I'm reading MJ's POV I was like this dude has foot in mouth disease. When I read that you wrote that he had it I was LMAO. He has it bad for real.
And yes Michael you are an idiot. You're there wondering why Tati gets on your nerves but every time you want some you chase her ass down. Stop stringing the chick along and maybe she won't be around to "annoy" you so damn much. Good grief Charlie Brown!!!!
I Wonder who it was he booty called. It can't be Tati after that hostile exchange he had with her over the phone. If it is his, ass deserve for her to haunt him the rest of his life.
More soon!!<333
Author's Response:
Lmfao oh yeah he def has that diease really bad. The man needs help like frfr. That is some good advice and he really need to follow it. But we'll see what happen in the next update and you will find out who the mystery girl is in the next update :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2015 02:13 pm Title: Driving Me Crazy
You can't really add videos here anymore I don't think. I've tried a few times but nothing. As a gif you add it just as you add pictures.
Now to the story...
I love that story about his first taste of wine. So cute. He went over board poor baby.
Poor Yanna she's so lost as to what her man is up to. I hope home girl blows up his spot and soon. She's there making plans to get married and he's out here harvesting coochie and sowing seeds in other chicks. So Trife.
Tati is a damn sap. One touch to the cooch and Michael has her abandoning all principles She got props for walking ou the first time but as soon as he got back in her ear she was spreading like peanut butter. Not even knowing that he ain't even thinking about her.
<333
Author's Response:
Thanks I really appreciate that and I am going to find a gif with Mikey's zip down and add it later. X is very trifling and I have no love for him or dudes that act like him. Tati is insecure and has low self esteem and her feeling runs deep as you will see later. Lol that story is funny and David Gest published it in his book but I don't know the name of it. Lmfao Tut you have me rolling here. Spreading her legs like peanut butter which is so true as that is what happen
Date: Aug 28, 2015 10:28 am Title: The Struggle Is Real
I lovvvvee this!!! Love the dress too! Shes def got him whipped XD he was being a total jackass as he thinks that works for him. Kinda hate that he ignores Rachel like doesnt pay attention to what shes saying. I do get that, that kind of reaction gets REALLY annoying and old after a while which is why he likes Ayanna so much, he couldve at least said a little bit more to her you know to impress her because we all know you have to impress the best friend of the girl u like. Thats so cute he gets nervous around her she thinks its an act. She also needs 2 dump X like NOW. Hes an asshole and she can do better. Update thisssss sooon
Author's Response:
Really? That is great new to hear! These reviews are really making me smile today. Yeah Mike has been rude to Rachel and I am going to see if I can fix that soon. He really and I mean really like Yana but of course his still denial about it all. You got it luv. Another update will be uploaded this week :)
Date: Aug 28, 2015 09:04 am Title: Prologue
Well this looks interesting! Can't wait to read the rest...great start!
Date: Aug 28, 2015 08:07 am Title: The Struggle Is Real
Lmao smh Mike you are truly in the world of thirst bruh!!! No matter what woman you call or fucking on, Ayanna face will still be right there. The struggle is truly real and I almost feel sorry for the boy, almost. Lol he wants Ayanna so bad, he can't even talk. That definitely won't be the last time he sees her again. Shit since he's MJ, I bet he'll find a way to get her number or at least find out her whereabouts. And if Rachel don't see the chemistry between them, she's crazy. Anyway, I wonder who he's calling.. Lemme guess, giraffe ass Brooke. Michael need to get it together.
Author's Response:
ROTFLMFAOOO Ikr? Ermm..lol you will find out soon XD
Date: Aug 28, 2015 07:58 am Title: Driving Me Crazy
Lmao!!!! Michael ass is feening, Tatiana bony ass is basic, and Ayanna needs to know the damn truth about her cheating ass boyfriend. A hot mess across the board. She's talking about they'll probably get married. Girl bye. Sorry to break it to you, but your man is trifling as hell. I seriously hope she finds out SOON! As for Michael, he is really wanting some Ayanna BAD. Tatiana skinny ass and her boring ass pussy aren't enough for him clearly. I'm not surprised she can't ride dick, I mean look at her! Lmao. When he finally does get an piece of Ayanna, he's gonna be sprung as hell. Tatiana is so dumb and clearly lacks self esteem to be dealing with that smh. I wonder how this meeting will go and if Ayanna will notice the anaconda growing in Michael's pants. Lmao
Author's Response:
Dam you guys are killing me with these reviews todsy. I am for real. Tears are pouring as I read them XD Your right about Tatiana. She does have low self esteem like frfr and she is not getting the job done lol Mike is trying to hide the fact that his wants Ayanna but the question is how long can he stay in denial? Guess we will see. As for Ayanna, I feel sorry for her as she is clearly living a fairy tail right now and Xavier will be exposed and it will be epic :)