Date: Oct 13, 2015 10:43 pm Title: Unofficial Girl
Poor MIchael turned into a womanizer from his many shares of heartbreak, very common to some womanizers. I know he was blown when he bumped into this woman who didnt recognize him lol
Date: Oct 13, 2015 10:25 pm Title: Prologue
New reader! I love a different take on Michael and how he could potentially be what we all thought he wasn't. I'm pretty sure he could get what we want when it came to women. He just didnt show it. This story sounds awesome! Off to read more!
Date: Oct 13, 2015 06:09 am Title: Laying My Cards On The Table
First of all happy (belated? ) birthday
Love the chapter, that hotel looks good, same for the Jet, it's a complete apartment lol
Glad he admitted his feelings for Yana, just a matter of time acs she admits it too
As always love your updates, can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Lol thank you I really appreicate all of my b-day wishes. They bith have feeling for each other. Ikr? Your so sweet BG and thank you babe I love reading your revies as it puts a smile on my face :)
Date: Oct 13, 2015 02:46 am Title: Prologue
Forgot to wish u happy birthday!! Hope you had an amzong birthday:)
Date: Oct 12, 2015 10:40 pm Title: Laying My Cards On The Table
I LOVE THIS! And yes that was REALLY funny when michael bitched out tatiana:) lovve where this is going!!! Actually cant believe he and Trump were friends or acquaintances 😒. Glad he fessed up to her about his intentions towards her and that shes keeping her boundaries like not getting sucked in too quickly. Love the description of the hotel
room:) i think they could've come up with a better prank but i HOPE they get him
GOOD. Lovvve love love this!! Update asap!! Love that she left him all hot & bothered too
Author's Response:
Lol that was funny right? Tatiana should have kept her dam mouth shut. Yes Michael and Donald were cool back then. And I think that his was friendly with all of the members of the Jackson family. The hotel is awesome right? I wish that I could stay there but its expensive as hell. Hmm..I'm thinking that they can too. LMFAOOO well Yana had to be a tease. There is another update up :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2015 10:21 pm Title: Laying My Cards On The Table
Happy Birthday love!!!! I hope you have a great time out this weekend. You deserve it!!
Finally Yanna is open about how she feels about Michael. Lol she was battling hard there in the end not to just jump his bones. I'm impressed Michael told her about Tatiana. That's good. He didn't have to tell her about the others though because hey everybody has a past. But he did anyway so I guess he does want to make a change for Yanna. I'm more than sure that Tatiana is going to traipse her no hips having ass out of line come concert time.
That drama is coming for sure.
It will be funny if that baked beans prank works. It's basically the same as the water prank tho. We'll see if Joker gets caught up in a prank he perfected.
(Just a little side note the Jolie Levine that worked for Michael was a different person than Jolie Jones Levine, Quincy Jones' daughter. I thought they where the same person for the longest too.)
More soon!!! And again turn down for what? Happy BornDay!!! <333
Author's Response:
Tut you are the sweetest and my b-day was amazing!! It wws def turn up time lol Michael realizes that if his wants Ayanna being a playa playa is not the way to earn her trust and eventually her heart. He did it coz he figured that if he didn't other ppl would tell his business and that would not be good. So he decided to man up and tell her himself and was that was maturity as it proves that his wants to change. Will it stay that way? That will be revealed. I changed the part about Jolie coz I didn't want to confuse ppl. once again thanks for having my back i love ya for that :)
Date: Oct 12, 2015 08:33 pm Title: Laying My Cards On The Table
Yessss! Now it's getting good. I'm glad Ayanna is admitting her feelings and more importantly acting on them! I'm happy she didn't sleep with him yet cuz he still needs to earn it, but they're taking steps in the right direction. I'm proud of Michael for stepping up and checking Tatiana bony ass, as well as being upfront and honest about his ho'ing around. That's a big move and I'm happy he did it. He's right that it's better she hears it from him vs somebody else, and most important it's the past now. His focus is on Ayanna. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
He wants Ayanna and he is willing to do anything to prove to her that his feeling for her is genuine. Tatiana had to be put in her place coz her head had got too swollen and his ha dto show her whpo is the boss. More to come :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2015 07:26 am Title: The Woman That You Love
What the hell is he doing still in her house?!?! What kinda noise is this mothafucka on? Then he's all in her business about Michael. Sir, really? SIR! You can't be serious right now. Get on please, cuz she's out here having dreams of Michael anyway
Goodbye! *waves dramatically* Get your no good ass on please. We don't need you here, Sir. Byyyyyyyye
She's about to see him again and you know that's about to be something else
I am ready
Author's Response:
lol you kill me. And yeah his is no good low down dog, talking about who she talking to. Like Xavier boy are you for real rn? Boy pls whatever bye! lmaooo she is def having those wet dream, talking about that there is nothing going on in between her and Michael. Ok Yana whatever you say. And you are about to see wat will happen in the next update which took me like a wk to do coz school is kicking my ass esp with mid terms coming up
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2015 07:30 am Title: The Woman That You Love
X has balls. I will give him that. He had the nerve to still be up in Yanna's crib like he didn't get the boot. He thought he was smooth enough to bullshit his way back in. FOH!! Then he had the nerve to be asking who's Michael like he was screwing some other chick and impregnated her. KneeGrow please.
Yanna having dreams and what not about Michael. She feeling him no matter what she says. Lol. Now she's about to go to NYC to see him and things will start hearing up. That just friends thing will be out the window.
I just hope Michael don't get all trife. Lol.
More soon!<333
Author's Response:
Ikr? His just need to stop like pls. Coz ain't nobody trying to hear wat he is talking about. Like byebyebye. Yana is being stubborn about her feeling. I'm excited about writing the next chap. Right now I'm updating WHIVSIV but I will have another update this week for this story. We will see wat happen in NYC.I will try to update as soon as I can luv :)
Date: Sep 19, 2015 10:24 pm Title: The Woman That You Love
Well its about time god they swapped saliva haha XD. I LOVE that he risked his wellbeing by going out in public without a disguise to go get her and make sure shes ok. Winning some major brownie points dude 👍🏼
Date: Sep 19, 2015 04:51 am Title: The Woman That You Love
I can't believe X bony ass had the nerve to be in her apartment when she came back! Smh. I'm glad she slapped the shit outta him, and quite frankly he wouldn't have the opportunity to come back and get his shit cuz I woulda thrown the rest of that shit outside. He would NOT step foot in my apartment again. Period. I know Yana is hurt but she's definitely gonna move on. And it'll be soon I think :) chile she up here having dreams about Michael. she needs to stop fooling herself! She know she wants him and he wants her too. More than friends. They have real chemistry. I'm so glad she's going to New York because I think they'll get even closer, and she will come to realize her feelings for him. And bish boo bye @ Xavier asking who Michael is and having the audacity to say she moves on fast. Bitch please! Says the sorry ass nigga who got this basic ho pregnant. He can't say shit about ANYTHING. Period. None of his concern ever cuz his ass is DONE. I hope Chloe gives him complete hell. Anyway, can't wait to see Michael and Ayanna in NYC :)
Author's Response:
Ikr? Like nigga pks stfu coz your trifling. Like we get that your jealous but oh wells coz nobody cares and you lost Yana. Lol I might make her put his shit out and if his don't come get it;then too bad XD Chloe most likely will make Xavier's life miserable lmao Anyways moving on to Yana and Mike. Yana is denial right now. She knows that she has feeling for Mike but she is too stubborn to admit it. Maybe that will change when she and Rachel goes to NYC but we will see. More will be coming soon :)
Date: Sep 19, 2015 01:47 am Title: The Woman That You Love
Not fair to stop there lol
Rachel is right, Yana is beginning to have feelings for Michael
Author's Response:
You think so? Lol maybe your right and in the next update you will see why I did like an twist XD
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 12:43 pm Title: A Thin Line In Between Love And Hate
It was explosive for sure. Damn!
She broke all of his shit. I mean, she was fed the hell up so I completely understand. She's been through too much with his ass. Bye, sir!
But they kissed!
I'm sorry. It made me so giddy
I can't wait to see what happens after this
Author's Response:
I really love these gifs! Your on PT with them XD Oh yeah girl she was sick of him and his fucked up ways. His shady self was begging get like Keith Sweat lol Yes ma'am Mike and Yana kissed and I can't wait to see eat happen next :
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 12:19 pm Title: Trapped in The Elevator
I'm glad he was there for her. X ain't shit though and I hope she realizes that soon!
Author's Response:
Michael was not going to leave Ayanna alone as his figured out that something was off and he was scared and worried. Lol X is pathetic. Hmmm...you will see wat happen next XD
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2015 11:13 am Title: A Thin Line In Between Love And Hate
Sorry Chloe but how about not being a trifling hoe and fuck someone else's man hmm? How bout that, then these little signs wouldn't have to matter. Thanks but no thanks for your little tutorial. Yanna gets no respect for expecting fidelity from her man and she's dumb?!? You're hoe ass out here being triflin af. FOH!!! Have the decency to have a little shame in your game. Her and X deserve each other hoes of a feather Thot together. Triflin asses. Ugh.
Came there all cocky handing out shitty advice. Girl assess your damn life!!!
Poor Yanna I went through a hurricane when I was young in Jamaica and I remember throwing up when the eye of the storm came around. It was mad scary!!! So I can see why she developed a complex.
I'm team Michael too though he's trife too. Not as trife as X and Chloe. More Trife Lite. Lol.
Lmaoooo Michael had a jacket that had Doo Doo embroidered on it so I don't know why he being all shy about it.
Chloe claimed to hate dudes like X when not earlier she was giving advise on how to keep dudes like him happy so they didn't end up in the beds of chicks like her. Fuck...Outta...Here!!!!!
Good riddance to bad rubbish Yanna don't cry too much over that fool.
Just so you know only things like rugs etc can be Oriental. Not people. Oriental is kind of a slur when used referring to people. Eurasian, Indian or Asian are better labels.
So she found Chloe and socked her? She deserved to be chained to X for life. Ugh!!
I was lmao at Michael's dick moving around in his pants like a cobra then imagined it breaking through the zipper and looking around. So DEAD!!!!
Wow a KISS!!! Wasn't expecting it and what more I wasn't expecting Michael to be so easy about letting her go after that. He was actually a gentleman.
Lets see if she goes to New York now with all the new developements.
I wrote my review while I read because I didn't want to forget my thoughts lol.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Lol Tut you want to be my editor? jk I really appreciate that your trying to help me so good looking out girl :) X and Chloe need their asses kicked like frfr. They are so ratchet and trifling. I want to come in the story and do that honour myself y'know? Like nah Mike and Yana I got this lmfao Chloe really do need to stfu. I mean she is a real hyprocite and yeap Yana slapped the shit outta of her coz she tried her big time. I think that Yana will be fine as you can see her feeling for Mike is slowly changing even if she doesn't realize it. LMFAOO I did not know that lol. Yeap I had to give you guy a little sneak peak of their evolving relationship. lol it weren't easy for Mike to be a gentleman. Pls trust and believe that. In the next update we will see if Michael can persuade Yana to come to NYC. More to come soon luv <3