Date: Jun 06, 2020 06:59 pm Title: Not Impressed Because Your A Celebrity
bardadians arent latin........as a barbadian, that line made me annoyed af, theres no rodriguezes and we speak english.........
Date: Dec 09, 2015 12:24 am Title: Author's Note
My thoughts are with you, sweetie!
Date: Nov 30, 2015 03:36 am Title: Author's Note
Hey there is no worries at all. Take all the time you need to take care of your mom. It's a delicate time in your life and not knowing what to do is ok. When you're ready you should find a love one you can trust and talk to them. You are not alone. If writing is your outlet you should do it if not it's ok to take a break and take care of yourself and your family. You and your mom are in my thoughts. Take care love and be strong. I have faith in you. <333
Date: Nov 29, 2015 05:53 pm Title: Author's Note
Im so sorry ur going thru that. Hope your moms doing ok.
Date: Nov 29, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Author's Note
Oh my gosh Jade now I see where you have been I will be praying for your mum in my prayers be strong hun! I was worried where you flew off tol if you wanna talk find my email on here ill be waiting when you have time, im here for you hun <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2015 03:51 pm Title: What Your Man Gotta Do With Me?
Wow! X is worst than I thought. I can't wait for Ayanna to dump his trifling ass! That's exactly what he gets for doing her wrong a second time.
And Michael is really feeling her. Ayanna actually has no reason to be this rude to him. I think it's because she likes him too but is in denial because she already has a man.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2015 12:36 pm Title: Not Impressed Because Your A Celebrity
My heart goes out to Ayanna. Dealing with that miscarriage really had to be tough but I can tell she's a really tough woman.
X reminds me a lot of my ex boyfriend lol. He can be a real jerk one minute and then the sweetest guy two seconds later. It's enough to drive any woman mad lol.
Rachel winning those tickets is pure fate! I can't wait to see their second encounter.
But just so there's no surprises....maybe Ayanna should tell Rachel that she met him already.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2015 11:27 am Title: Unofficial Girl
Damn! Mike is indeed a little player!
You did a very good job with incorporating real facts in here. I especially liked when you mentioned him as a kid trying to save that girl from sleeping with Jackie. I remember reading about that, as well as the other facts you provided, but that story always appealed to me the most. It just shows how innocent and sweet young Michael was.
But it sucks that his past relationships are what caused him to be so negative towards women. I wonder how Ayanna is going to change him. She already seems to be someone different than what he's use to. She's going to be a challenge for him. I just know it. And that's going to make him want to pursue her more probably.
Can't wait to read on :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2015 11:02 am Title: Prologue
Very captivating prologue. Can't wait to see how things got to this point. I liked how assertive he was, despite how much she tried to lash out and retreat from him.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2015 08:34 am Title: Karma Is A Bitch
Lawd these two in each other's head like bad. Lol.
I'm glad he dismissed Brook. She thought she had him too but guess again chick!! Michael is growing and it shows that he's willing to put all those other people behind to focus on Yanna. But him saying he found "the one" and still denying he's in love? That's BS. So what does he plan on doing with her if not love her? That's so way off in left field. He needs to straighten out his head. If he's going to go through with this thing with Yanna he better be serious otherwise he's stringing her along for heartbreak. Exactly what she's trying to avoid.
Looking forward to see what comes out of this date.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Lol they Def got it bad for each other like hardcore. Michael is avoiding the l word like it's a bad rash. But I think that it's clear his in love in with her and everyone can see it. I agree that he need to admit that he loves her. Coz Yana wants something real and substantial. His need to remember that she thought that she had it with X. Only to find out that wasn't real. So if his does that to her then the reaction that he gets may not be one that he likes. Another update is coming luv next week. It's less crazy with mid terms and I can finally write more :D
Date: Oct 29, 2015 08:12 am Title: Karma Is A Bitch
Yet again Tatiana got her bony ass sat down! Michael is actually making me proud by tryna be a changed man. I woulda been pissed if he had sex with Brooke ol giraffe ass. Flat assed heffa. Anyway, Mike and Yana are getting closer and I am here for it! The first time they finally have sex will be explosive and it's gonna happen the way it's suppose to. Not how it was going to in this chapter. Their first time should be special.
Author's Response:
Lol yep I had to do it. Yana is tired of her. Tatiana was trying to relvant which we all know is no longer the case. Well it never was. Brooke got her feeling hurt. She thought that Mike was going to give in to her. But his sprung and there is really is one girl that he wants. They are getting there and when they make love; it will be off of the charts. And it will be special :) More soon :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2015 12:17 pm Title: Karma Is A Bitch
I loved this chapter. Good for everyone for getting back at Michael and Bill.
And super YES for Yana getting into Tatiana.
Please update with,again soon
Author's Response:
Lol I enjoyed writing that part. It gave me an idea about a prank that I'm going to play next yr *snickers* That was very funny. Maybe Yana was being petty. But once again Tatiana had to be put in her place as the basic bitch that she is lol More soon you guys :)
Date: Oct 28, 2015 01:56 am Title: Karma Is A Bitch
Love love love it
@brooke she really thought he was going to call her again when he changed his mind? He's not changing his mind
Loved the donut joke lol, must have been really disgusting lol
I bet it won't be long before they actually do "it" they can't deny it that much longer
Author's Response:
One thing about Michael is once his mind is made up he doesn't change it. Lmaoo the donut joke was funny as well as disgusting. And I feel bad for Bill and Mike. But has Michael learned his lesson? You guy will find out
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2015 11:45 pm Title: Laying My Cards On The Table
Happy belated Birthday!
I'm glad she's finally honest about her feelings for Mike. Then Mike was honest with her about errrrrrrbody. Like, damn, he went all out. In the end, it's about what he feels now. I think he's sincere about her and their relationship so I'm wishing him good luck on that.
I can already smell more drama coming from Tatiana. I smell that fresh drama in the works!
More soon sweetie! <3
Author's Response:
Aww..thank you. I had a great b-day and being 25 is not that bad lol Honesty is the best policy and Mike knew wat happen with Yana and X. His is determined to show her that he is different. Yeap Tatiana had only begun to get started with her BS. i wish Michael good luck with Ayanna. For now thing is working out for him. But will it stay that way? Or will his do something to screw thing up? You guy are going to find out :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2015 08:55 pm Title: Laying My Cards On The Table
love love it
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you love it :)