[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 09:45 pm Title: Fools Rush Out
Oh Michael, Michael tsk tsk tsk wat are you doing great dude? Really? Your leaving? I can't believe you. Now I get that you have been hurt b4 coz of Diana and Brooke. But bruh get it over it coz Charlie isn't like them. I don't think that running away is a good idea. No scratch that it's one of the stupidest thing that you have ever done coz Charlie has fallen in love with you. So no the grass is def not greener on the other side and you can't have your cake and eat it too. Here hoping that his does not revert back to his old ways and he comes to his senses b4 it's too late. Girl this update was definitely worth waiting for. Can't wait for more. Laters luv :)
Author's Response:
He's being a coward to the tenth degree. He's been hurt like everyone else but he gave himself so much in those situations he was sure they would last forever. He feels so strongly for Charlie that he would fall apart where it to turn out the same so he's making a preemptive strike and leaving before it can happen. Now we will have to see how long it takes him to figure out what he's doing is bullshit. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 07:49 pm Title: Fools Rush Out
Michael. Joseph. Jackson you weak ass coward... take that wondering ass dick of yours and SHOVE IT UP YOUR REAR!!! Nevermind at all how Charlie might be feeling right now... just go run off cause that makes sense!!! Idiot!
Is he for real about to up and run off after spending weeks with Charlie?! Is he at least gonna give her an explanation or just disappear?!
What do I think he'll do while he's away??! Fuck about 30 different bitches to try and get his mind off of Charlie is what I think.
Do I blame him YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVERYONE gets their heart broken when they're young. People are too confused at that stage to know what they really want. Charlie deserves better than him she needs to never speak to his stupid ass again! Quit the tour and everything.
UGH!!! I can't with this guy...
Author's Response:
Lmaooo you went in and he deserves it. He's being incredibly stupid trying to hold on to a wall that already has been weakening with Charlie. He lowkey loves that girl already. Not only is he hurt from the past but he knows himself now and he Ian t secure that he won't be stupid and mess up with her and have her hate him. There is no logic in his thinking because he's hurting her doing what he's doing now. But he's running that's for sure. Just a little more drama to go. Lol <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 09:12 pm Title: New Territory
Once again you have impressed me with another amazing update like only you can. Every day Michael is falling for her. I think that Charlie really enjoyed being in that helicopter. Being fucked against the walls like that was so hot.*fans self* And I think that thing are going to get even hotter at Neverland. Call it a huge hunch lol Girl you are so modest but there is a reason why you won those awards. That why I asked if you ever wanted to be a professional author coz your so talented at it. You already know that I can't wait for more. Later luv b25;
Author's Response:
You are the sweetest!! Thank you so much for your compliments. I appreciate them more than you know. I don't think I'm together enough to be a professional author but I appreciate the thought.
Michael and Charlie can never keep their hands off and to themselves. Let's see what this trip will bring them! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 06:24 pm Title: New Territory
These two are head over fucking hills in love. Lol! I love how she says she's losing her religion because she is giddy lmaooo she's a mess. Michael is definitely sprung. In love. Caught. Hooked. Burried. Deep. He so lost HE don't even understand. That sex was soooooooo good. Take me to neverland and have your way with me. Yes, daddy. Lmao! He is so sexy.
Author's Response:
She was a giddy ass mess and so was Michael to be honest. They can't keep their hands off each other long enough to have their brains work properly. Trying times to come. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 03:47 pm Title: New Territory
So, it's obvious that Michael and Charlie are realizing what they have isnmore than what they think by just not acknowledging it. Michael loves Dr I can tel. The things he doing now he would have donw for another woman and he knows it.
I really think things make a take a bigger turn for them now and hopefully, they'll put a name to what they are. It's has to be a relationship. If they're doing less ducking and more talking/getting to know one another that's showing signs of them being in a relationship. Imo it is.
I can't wait for more soon.
Author's Response:
They're both seeing there is more to what the have than sex. There is a bigger turn coming with her being at Neverland. Huddles get crossed but not before the stumble a few times. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 06:31 am Title: New Territory
"Erotic side" More like be prepared to shower after reading every chapter. I shouldn't have read this before going to sleep. My dreams are gonna be a mess probably. Inspirational hopefully lmaooo
I'm ready to see these two get to know each other waaaaaaaaaaay more. I mean, they know some stuff but they don't know some stuff. I'm excited.
Who knows? I mean, they're both unsure of things right now I guess. Michael's falling, she's falling. She admitted to being in love too. I need to know more on Michael's end. I know he's shocked by his feelings though so that says plenty.
Either way, bring it on. I'm ready for all of this!
Author's Response:
Yup "erotic side" lmaooooo. This is what this trip will be, them getting to know each other. Things get hectic though so look out...a watch out! There both stumbling about in the dark right now. Both avoiding the light. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 10:49 pm Title: Sweet Sweat
I'm going to be honest with you. At first, I was mad at Charlie for giving in but then I started reading the love scene. Next thing I knew, I had all kinds of butterflies stirring inside me lol. Excellent job on the chapter. Really had me feeling some kind of way if you know what I mean😉
Author's Response:
Yeah most were disappointed that she gave in but in the end she was the one who made the decision for her. She wanted him so she went for it. And like the warning in the beginning says. It does veer on the erotic side so you'll see a lot of that in the mix with drama. Not too over the top drama but enough to give twists and turns and have lessons learned. Mostly by Michael and his wayward self. Lol. I promise by the end you won't be disappointed at the growth. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 09:57 pm Title: So Close I Could Taste
Michael being a gentleman to her doesn't surprise me because it's obvious that he feels more for her than he does for anyone else. I like him being chivalrous. Hope to see more of it.
Author's Response:
He's not a total dick at all. He hides behind this persona but he is a sweetheart at the end of the day.<333
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 08:57 pm Title: Gelato...Cold Then Hot
He was extremely bold but I think Charlie and I both secretly enjoyed it Lol.
Author's Response:
So bold and sure of himself!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 08:28 pm Title: Ich Liebe Dich Mehr
Lol yeah, Michael is a whore but hopefully he'll be a changed man before the story is over with.
Author's Response:
Michael is a man whore and you will come to see that but he does move very far from it by the end. He has his slip ups in the beginning but he straightens up! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 07:56 pm Title: Leaving On A Jet Plane
Michael is a player! ...But why is that somewhat attractive to me? LOl I think I have a thing for naughty Michael 😁
Author's Response:
I have a BIG thing for naughty Michael. So you are not alone. Pun intended. Lmao. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 07:17 pm Title: Wanna Be Startin Something
Oooh! I'm liking this one too!
Author's Response:
Yay welcome to this story too!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 07:07 pm Title: New Territory
OMG THIS MAN AND HIS EGO!!!! Let me in this story so I can take it down a couple hundred notches.
King of the wandering cocks... hate hate hate this guy!!
Charlie, girl, don't even feel guilty because Mike has almost fucked a girl too...
As far as them being on new territory, I think that it will be a good thing. I think all EGOs aside, once Michael shows who he really is Charlie will fall so much harder and vice versa.
Michael and his arrogance right now, though... SMDH!! But hey, he does put it down like a God.
Author's Response:
Knock him on his ass girl!!! He's Super Ego man if he was a superhero. He does serve up that love right tho. Jeez Louise!!!! It's never boring. Lmao. Both him and Charlie have their little slips so neither can get mad at the other. He's going to be a big ass teddy bear soon trust me!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 06:58 pm Title: New Territory
Okay.. Soooo.. I have a love/hate relationship with all your stories. Please see below for the reasons.
1) they're so fucking good that it leaves me wanting MORE & MORE
2) I can never wait for the next update because I'm like a crack addict when it comes to them
3) THEYRE SO ADDICTIVE!!
I seriously tried to remove myself from this site, BUT for some reason I decided to visit your page and see what's been up (BIG MISTAKE) because I just read all of these chapters in one hit & damn it now I want more! :(
Anywhoooo- YOOO seems like Mike isn't the only one with a dirty little secret. If he finds out about her little incident with Cato he better not trip over his balls cause he knows damn well that he has a dirty secret of his own. Someone needs to pull the wool out of their eyes cause it's bloody obvious that they're so in love with each other just like Kanye is with Kanye. Tsk tsk.
Author's Response:
When I started reading I was like 'Oh noooo she doesn't like this one' but then I continued reading and I'm smiling and blushing because you DO like it!!! Awe thank you so much love!!! I'm glad you're feeling it. Lucky for you this story is already written so I update it quite often so I sling my crack in a timely manner. Lmaoo. I have another short story going that you would absolutely love called Soul Seeker. Check it out if you can.
Yessss both her and Michael have this little secret. But neither of them can trip about it. They are both head over heels and can't keep their hands off each other.
Lmaoooo. We both know nobody love Kanye more than Kanye!! Stick around bb the ride only gets more interesting!! <333
Date: Sep 24, 2015 01:42 am Title: Close Call... Come Away With Me
He just cant go without her amazing pussy for 2 months. Thats whats up here. Wait so he had that intention to cheat on charlie with coco but decided not to go through with it?
Author's Response:
Lol it's more than him not being able to be without the kitty for 2 months. He invited her to Neverland to stay and he's never done that with any other woman before. It's significant but Charlie doesn't know that yet. She's having her own battles with just how strong her feelings are for him. The attraction they have is mutually strong. They're both being idiots about it though. Things get real, really soon. Stay tuned love!! <333