[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2015 12:50 pm Title: The Beginning Meets The Middle...
I love how she KNEW better. She stayed though and I respect her for that. She could have left, but she stuck around cuz she's got feelings. Hell that happens plenty of times. There's one willing to stay and make it work.
I'm glad she did! His ass was just UGH as usual.
I loved the dream sequence! They met up and it was beautiful and perfect. I freaked out when I read it lol you know I get excited. So to see it happen again was awesome!
I'm just ready for Michael to get back home. They need to talk!!
<3
Author's Response:
Yup she's a smart one. She knew better than to just run away without finding out how real this thing is. She feels for him quite a bit and it would hurt more to move on. He had to go through a crisis to come to the same conclusion because he's an ass. The dream was his only reprieve. Let's see how he goes from there.<333
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2015 08:00 am Title: The Beginning Meets The Middle...
I cant believe she was gonna leave too but thank god she stayed just to see what would happen between them. She cant go without answers although she knew what was up. Charlie is smarter than some think and Mike .
Speaking of him, you had me acared there for a lil min with the dream. Thats unil i noticed it from the first chapter. I was like oohhhh ok. No need to be scurred. Lol.
Bout time he learned his effing lesson. He would be dumb as the fuck to let Charlie go like that knowing good and well he loves her. Thats all he needed was a damn wake up call to help him realize it.
charlie is for you mike. Go and make things right and tell her how you feel boy.
more soon!!!
Author's Response:
Yes she stayed because she knows she is in love with him and is not as thick headed as Michael is. She's willing to give things a try. His lesson is learned and that dream jolted him for sure! <333
Date: Oct 12, 2015 11:07 pm Title: The Beginning Meets The Middle...
Well fuck I hope the dream put things into perspective for him. She will and should leave if he just wants to have his cake & eat it too. He cant dick her around until he figures out what he wants & he cant avoid this either.
Author's Response:
Yes he can't have his cake and eat it too. He's had that for for too long. That dream showed him though that it can only go one way because he loves her he has to come correct.<333
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2015 08:58 pm Title: The Beginning Meets The Middle...
I admire Charlie a lot more than Mike. Yeah she was scared and she wanted to run away. But she decided to stick around. Unlike Mike, who ran away the minute that thing got hard. But by George I think that his got it and all it took was a nightmare to give him a huge wake call. And made him see the error of his ways. And wat could happen if he continued to go down the wrong path. Here hoping that now that Michael has seen the light that he will go home to the woman that he loves. Wicked update luv. I'm so ready for more :)
Author's Response:
Yeah they both had the idea to run but Charlie was the first to decide to stay and give it a try. Yes I think he got it and I think that dream no pun intended was a major wake up call. He doesn't want to loose her! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2015 07:45 pm Title: The Beginning Meets The Middle...
I'm surprised Charlie is so easy going about it all. If she knew what was going on she should have told him straight. "Michael I know you're being a scared little pussy right now so stop all your bullshittin' lies." Girl, don't fall in love with him. Don't DO IT!!!!
omg! So the whole beginning of the story was just a dream?! I've been duped!!! I was kind of hoping for Michael to get his heart broken in the end. Charlie should have just left without saying anything and let him come back to find her GONE. Scare his ass more than that dream did.
But I think he's gonna run back and pour his scary little heart out to her and she's gonna let him in... smh.
Creepy internet indifference
lol
Author's Response:
The creepy Internet indifference has me rolling on the damn floor. Lmaooo. You will LOVE HIM!!!! Yes you will. Yup the whole beginning was a dream. <333
Date: Oct 10, 2015 08:51 pm Title: To Be Alone He Says
I get what you're saying and all but hes still being a fucking dick. He cant put blame on her for his ex's past behavior. She happens to be human too and HAS feelings. He needs to realize that the person you're in a relationship with, is NOT at your beck and call, i mean i guess theyre not in a relationship other than mutual interest in fucking. Hes extremely wealthy and hes the king of pop so he can by with treating people however he wants but that doesnt make it right especially in terms of a relationshio. Like the fact that his employees couldn't or wouldn't tell her oh he had buisness to take care of, hell be back at such and such time or leave a note or say hell call later or give her a number to call him. And the sorry ass guilt complex isnt cute.
Author's Response:
Everything you said here is truth. His guilt complex is just another smoke screen to his behind. He knows what he's doing is shitty and that's the worst part of all. He's a child and he's at the end of the rope. Fallen so far the only place left now is to grow up. Either he mans up and gave the fact that he is in love with her or let her go so she can get on with her life. She is too and in reality she's in love with him too. There is no excuse for him at this point.
Mad for the employees only Wayne knows he's gone and where but she hasn't seen him yet. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 02:26 pm Title: To Be Alone He Says
I have to be the source of my own happiness . I can't rely on others to provide me that. The happiness provided by others should be a compliment to my own
that is the only thing i agree with concerning this negro. he has been a negro 90% of the story ;___; but ugh! I mean I can fully understand him, I've done that in the past (not action for action here but I've done similar) but at the same time, she makes him happy and he's just too stubborn to accept that! I won't lie though, the above line I copied has me not hating him like I usually do lol I'm undecisive on how i feel now.
Author's Response:
That's a true statement. If you're not happy how can you make anyone else happy? That's the only reasonable thought he's having right now. His actions aren't unique to a situation like this. He's merely not wanting to open up and take responsibility for his part in what he's going through. He needs to man up and deal like an adult. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 03:30 am Title: To Be Alone He Says
You know I love him either way. I'll never be completely happy with everything he does, but I still do love him. I understand though. I think he needed some time alone before he ended up doing something he'd regret later.
With that being said, I'm hoping he doesn't do anything he'd regret later on.
I know he doesn't want to be open to love, but it's clearly about to flip his world upside down. If he lets it, it could be incredible for him. There's no telling what will break the ice!
I'm just ready for it to happen. He knows damn well he's in deep right now. Might as well swim in them waters baby. You might drown but it'll feel really good lmaoo
He might as well enjoy the ride, get him a surfboard and let it go. Let that water splash on your face, Michael. Be happy and shut the hell up!
More please <3
Author's Response:
He has his reasons for running from love but there's no excuse for him at all. He's finally peaked a ultimate assholery. The only place to go now in the court of public opinion is up. Let's hope he takes the high road. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2015 10:30 pm Title: To Be Alone He Says
Mike is an ass frfr and I wanna hit him upside that his Applehead. But I understand why his acting like this. He is scared to fall in love with Charlie as he thinks that she will break his heart. But here is the thing. Firstly she is not like Diana and Brooke. Both of them cold hearted in their own way. Secondly you can't run away from love coz it will always find you. Like here I am! So running away is pointless and foolish. And you never know wat you got until its gone. I think that Mike should realize that while his is jerking off and missing Charlie. Dude just go back home and be with the woman that you love. Like he said there is a method to his madness. I hope that your right about that Michael. Then again I can always knock some sense into you jk lol I still love ya even if your a dumbass. Can't wait for more luv :)
Author's Response:
Running away and giving her that lame excuse was terrible and he knows it. He's having a pity party and its weak as hell. There no valid excuse for his behaviour so I understand why everyone is yelling at him to man the fuck up. Ugh. You'll love him soon again tho. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2015 10:04 pm Title: To Be Alone He Says
Just got home from a football game and dancing. This is my first and last story I'm reviewing for the damn night. I am tired as fuuuuck!!!! :(
Anywhoooo.....
Seriously Mike?!?!?!? Seriouslyyyyyy!?!?!? You're being a complete asshole now. Like I understand you trying to find yourself and rid your feelings you have for Charlie or whateva but it's not gone happen cause the feelings are already there buddy. There here to stay and for you to confess them to her.
Like leave that dirty shit Diana and Brooke and whoeva else did to you in the past with them hoes where they/it belongs. Smh. Why ruin something worth trying for again with a great girl over that crapshit???
And poor Charlie was given that good ass lie From him. Yes it was good and very convincing. I'm like... well then.
I hope he goes back to Neverland the next day as he claims so. Leaving that girl all by herself. She was right. Abandoned is the correct word to use cause that's exactly what he's doing.
More soon.
Author's Response:
He's been a complete asshole more than half the time. Lol. Now he's running from what would be best for him. Thinking Charlie is anything like Diane or Brook is unfair at best. He's being a complete idiot and what's worst he knows it. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2015 06:46 pm Title: To Be Alone He Says
>insert extremely loud sigh<
This fuckin' horny ass dude... He can't even be alone without fucking himself! LIKE SERIOUSLY?!?! Charlie deserves better. How dare he up and leave and then bullshit her like that. This whole scenario is just a bunch of bullshit stirred up by the King Bullshitter - Michael Jackson. I wish Bill and him would have talked and he could have set Michael straight.
He does NOT need Slash or any fish hunting right now!
I hate this guy. He's a coward. His fear of falling in love is STUPID!
I will never love this Michael again lol
NEVER.
Creepy internet hate!
But more soon though
<3
Author's Response:
"Creep Internet hate!" I'm so dead. Lmaoooooooo. He has a serious libido glitch. Left the good stuff behind and has the nerve to fantasize still. He's low I don't even have a valid excuse for him. Sometimes people run so much when it's time to slow down they crash and burn and he's crashing and burning. One more chapter to salvation. Lol. <333
Date: Oct 06, 2015 12:43 am Title: Fools Rush Out
No hes completely at fault for the way he is. He got way in over his head with Diana and Brooke. It was just sex with both of them and they understood it that way and then he went and proposed marriage when he didnt have that much of serious relationship with either of them and then gets pissed when they reject him? They do not owe him shit, i agree Diana was dicking him around. Brooke knew where their relationship stood. Its extremely rude, immature and passive aggressive 2 justify his avoidance & lack of empathic behavior due to 2 women rejecting to make that legal commitment. And thats why he loses charlie. Because he was too proud, insensitive to her feelings and moronic.
Author's Response:
He does need to take into account his role in the way he is. It's not just the women involved. However in those relationships he was hurt in, it wasn't just sex at least not for him. He was genuinely inlove with both those women and there in lies why he's so bitter towards love and openness. He should have grown. He really should have instead he's stuck as that bitter young man trying to reverse the hurt and have the upper hand. He wasn't caring if he was causing in his conquests what his former loves cause in him.
He wasn't going to hurt anymore and we both know that's as bullshit as it comes. He's human and we are, even the most gentle people are capable of petty behaviours when our hearts are on the line. But that's no excuse. He is a giant moron. And he will continue being one for at least two more chapters. We will see how he learns from this foolishness he perpetrated. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 10:49 pm Title: Fools Rush Out
Girl you are so right. I want to kill his ass then burn him afterwards. Wtaf is he running? Whatchu runnin fo Mike??!!!!!????!!!!
I do understand that he's been hurt tremendously in the past by Brooke and Diana, but that doesn't mean that Charlie was.going to do the exact same thing. Hell, she just realized she was sorta in love or was that the 'D' she was referring to. Anywho, she's genuinely feeling Mike but he wants to run.
Yeah, yousa coward alright Mike. Seriously? Come on now.
He better not be doing anything he got no business.doing while at.that fucking hideout. LORD please be with Charlie right now cause she gonna need you.
More soon.
Author's Response:
I know all of you would want to roast the hell out of his ass for being such a punk. We will see if he finds himself in hot water while he's away or he'll just take the time to straighten his head out. He needs to stay his ass in Neverland but we know he's going to run! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 10:29 pm Title: Fools Rush Out
Ugh! Well, I feel for him for being so broken hearted. Lots of folks are this way. Once they've been hurt so much, they just don't see themselves finally being happy. Charlie actually makes him happy and it scares him, imo.
I think he's running off because he's scared. Maybe he wants to roll around in the hay with some chicks to figure out if he really wants to be with one girl. Well, I think Brooke is coming back? He might be on his way for that.
Either way, I smell the madness and the drama. It's cooking and it shall be savory.
I'll be back for seconds knowing my greedy ass
But damn! I don't want him to do anything that'll piss me off. Though he has already for leaving her like that
Author's Response:
He is scared as fuck and he is all upside down and inside out because of loves lost and rejection he never got over from his past. He's being a coward and a child about it all tucking tail and running. Let's see if he's running into the cooch of another woman or he just needs time to think. Hmmmmmm <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 09:50 pm Title: Fools Rush Out
This punk bitch negro. Now he running away from feelings and shit when hes the one that wanted this! Ugh! He irritates me! Man the fuck up Mike! Let your balls drop bew because this is a good woman you got with you right now. This is a queen you have in your freaking possession. Diana wasnt no queen (she is queen in the singing right dont get me wrong. Thats bae)! Brooke definitely aint no damn queen (nothing against her i just dont feel she is *shrugs* )! And now you have your queen dude! Man up!
Author's Response:
Punk bitch is right. Instead of taking another chance at love he's high tailing it away and it's all bullshit. He's found that he can have anything he wants but reciprocal love is elusive. He tried and failed twice and instead of failing a theirs time he wants to sabotage it so it doesn't come to fruition. He has a whole lot to think about. Let's see if the time away from her is used for that or to find new poon!! <333