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Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2015 07:34 pm Title: Popcorn?

This dude got another room. I AM DYING. He is my king lmaooo Something told me he would and it makes sense because he's so him. I was actually planning to threaten you earlier for a chapter, so I'm glad I didn't have to! 

I can honestly say if Michael invited me up to his room for popcorn and a movie, I would be nervous as hell. I'm already shy as hell and being around this dude would mess me up on a level I can't even name. Hell, Michael can invite me up to not do shit and I would still be nervous. Or if he called. :| I would die

This nigga had the nerve to turn around and stare at her. Sir, if you don't stop. He ain't trying to hide it at this point. Just gon turn his ass around. Michael's that friend who turns when you tell them not to, I swear!

This dude said chocolate thunder. Damn, I gotta get me one of those.

This was cracking me up from the jump, but I'm glad they're friends. I think they're friends at least! They know each other now, so I think this is a great thing for em both. I know Michael's such a ho, but still! 

Okay, Im gonna probably threaten you soon.

And yessss, I'm keeping my fingers crossed for Inked Over too!

Can't wait. This was awesome as always 



Author's Response:

Michael having another room for his little romps is so naughty you almost expect it right. Lol. You won't have to threaten me too often for these as the chapters are already written. When you're ready. Just give me a shout!! 

They're friends now so we will see just how they interact il with each other. Let's see if the locomotive slows down a bit. <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2015 08:40 pm Title: Prologue...

And OMG I watched like all the parts lol lol. He was too much!!! The girl with the belly button ring tho... he knew EXACTLY what that was! Dirty. #borninthewrongera



Author's Response:

He knew exactly what his ass was doing. He knew what that was and I don't know who he was trying to fool lol.  How cute was that when that girl proposed and he was like "see you at the wedding."  LMAO he was so adorable.<333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2015 08:34 pm Title: Gelato...Cold Then Hot

Have I said yet that I can't STAND this Michael!!!!???? LMAO. THE. AUDACITY!!! I mean... did he really... just lick her lips like that?! Charlie was probably too like 'wtf just happened' to even get mad about it.

I hope to see Michael on his damn knees for her. He tops the Inked Michael in asshole-ness by 1000!!! Geez-la-weez girl. But for real if he did me like that, I'd melt to the floor instantly. 

"...did you see that raging hard on he had on stage last week?" Imagine being his dancer in real life and seeing that thing. Carry me off the stage now. LOL

 

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pretty please with sugar and creepy internet love on top? <3



Author's Response:

Michael hs bigger balls than King Kong LMAO.  He's something else that's for sure.  From what I've seen girl I would have to be revived every other minute ronald was up and about on that stage lol.He is more intense than Inked Michael!

Your creepy internet love wish is my creepy internet love command!! I just posted some more for you!! <333

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2015 12:51 am Title: Gelato...Cold Then Hot

Excellent, sexy as hell! Please continue!



Author's Response:

Awe welcome to the story. You're name is familiar. I think you used to read this story on MJJE?  This is menen!!! By the way. Hope you keep reading. It will go till the end!! <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2015 08:17 pm Title: Gelato...Cold Then Hot

I feel Michael on the legs. Omg, when it's summer and girls are out wearing shorts, I can't help but stare. I LOVE legs *dies* I was just sittin here agreeing with him the whole time.  And the ice cream scene had me singing that song, by the way. You know which one I'm talking about!

 

I'm with Charlie, though. They had everybody fooled into thinking this dude was quiet and never got sexed the hell up. Lies! That's why he was boyfriend during Dangerous era for me. Idk why he wasn't husband. Bad era MJ was husband, but not Dangerous. I don't understand myself but he was my baby either way and I would have given him something to write about for years if I coulda been of age and close to him :| He coulda choke slammed me on a bed any day.

MURDER ME, KING!

Okay the hall scene got me thinking about Prince again. "You want me to walk RIGHT DOWN YA HALLS! MHMMM, YOU WANT ME TO SWIVEL IN YO LOVESEAT? DONTCHA BABY?

This dude out here lickin folks. Calm down, sir! Maybe I should stop acting like I wouldn't enjoy being licked. *sighs in wrong age, wrong time, wrong everything*

I'm ready for another! 

 



Author's Response:

Lawd Gawd if that song wasn't the soundtrack for that scene I don't know what would be. Lmaoooooo it's perfect. That was playing in Michael's mind the whole time. Bodyrollibg to his own thoughts!!! 

You know damn well you would have been like that discarded cup of Gelato if you got licked out of the blue like that. Lmaoooo

Ill be putting more soon. It's all written already so it won't take long!! <333

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2015 07:22 pm Title: Gelato...Cold Then Hot

Lawd Jesus. Mike is a nasty dirty minded ass negro. Lmbo. He wishes he was th  spoon and finger Charlie was licking. My god. Hell, I don't blame him though. I mean who wouldn't. Charlie is fiiiiionnne as hell.

I love the fact we got to be in Charlie's pov for the first time. I love how the girls interact and joke with one another. You can tell their bond is very tight knit. They're practically sisters.

And here we go gain with Michael 'can't keep his sausage in the package' Jackson. The audacity was sky high, I'm telling ya. He had some balls to put his tong on her lips and she didn't slap him silly for it? Hmmmm... she liked it. That pushing she was doing, she barely put any effort into it. 

More soon, Tut :)



Author's Response:

Lol. Michael is nasty as hell. How dare he just lick the woman. I can't say I wouldn't have frozen myself if that happened. 

The girls are awesome and they are very much like sisters. 

Charlie is foine!! Isn't she?!? Michael is going crazy not being able to get at her. Lol. <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2015 05:56 pm Title: Prologue...

NO!!! I have not seen that footage! Where can I see it?! lol 



Author's Response:

LOL you're going to love it.  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jXU9wI5dx30 Start watching it from the begining.  Watch all of it you will be higly amused at Mr Jackson and his naughty self lol.<333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2015 03:58 pm Title: Ich Liebe Dich Mehr

The beginning of this chapter.... x.x LOL I love this Michael and I hate that I love him. 

One fish, two fish, ELDERLY fish!? No one is immune to this playboy. 

Charlie's got some good will power cause I don't think in any situation I'd ever be able to turn 'Ronald' down LMAO. But either way he definitely won't get her with that cocky attitude. Nigga betta get down to EARTH.

The daughter to the US Ambassador to The Netherlands... SMDH!!! Michael Joseph...

I can't get enough of this story. <3



Author's Response:

Did you see the footage of him at the Virgin Mega Store where he actually calls this lady Elderly Fish?  He was a mess!!!! He also referred to some as blowfish in real life and you could imagine just what he was talking about. 

Ronald and I would have been best friends. Tbh. I'm not sure how Charlie is resisting. 

Ronald isn't discriminatory one bit. From Diplomatic Dignitaries to  the Concierge. He's getting up in that. I'll give you more soon!! <333

Reviewer: jazii Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 10:20 pm Title: Ich Liebe Dich Mehr

Damn Mike is a dousche. I hope his hot little self can calm the fuck down before he steps to Charlie seriously. Homegirl is not trying to play

Author's Response:

He is an ass lol. Charlie is not trying to see his ass in the dark or day time. No games. Lol. <333

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 09:25 pm Title: Ich Liebe Dich Mehr

This man is an absolute whorish mess. The translator????? Lawd I can't deal with Mike. He had the lady sexing him up with her mouth. Wow! 

And he still trying to sexually pursue Charlie but the poor girl ain't giving his ass the time of day nor night. Kml! I can just laugh, laugh, laugh, at that. Mike you got a whole other type of woman you're dealing with that doesn't give out fresh poon to man whores like you. Smh!

Idk how he's going to get het but I know his ass is gonna come up with something clever, but he's going to get I know. Just not right now tho. 

Can  wait for more!!! :)



Author's Response:

He is a whorologist. Lmao. Charlie is a hard nut to crack and he keeps failing so he's left only to dream about it. Let's see what he does to get ahead. No pun intended. Lol. <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 09:10 pm Title: Ich Liebe Dich Mehr

First of all, he' so nasty but I love him so much lmaoo I would be his best friend in a heartbeat just to hear crazy ass stories. This dude has a monster in his pants. I mean, you gotta be gifted to take all that. I'm like him, where she been practicin at!?! Does she teach a class? Did she get a degree in this field? I'm just wondering. But in all honesty, congrats to her. She took it like a champ! He bruised her esophagus. 

Workin Day and Night is my fav part during the show. My all time favorite and same goes for the rehearsal. That part is my favorite. Michael was soooo serious about it omg. I remember the first time I saw the footage, I felt special because it was my fav in the show lol Plus, older sexy ass daddy Michael singing young fetus Michael songs?!?! Praise

But yeah, that part always makes me giggle.

Michael: We're showmen! They love this shit, Kenny! You see their smiling faces?

The guys: We haven't eaten in 13 days, sir. Please, stop. We're not smiling. Our faces can't do much because we're hungry

Kenny: They're definitely showmen, Mr. Jackson. I know one of em already passed out three times today but they're back because they love it so much. Okay guys, lets run it again

Michael: *not even speaking words anymore, just energetic as hell*

 

He's having dreams of the chick. I believe in you, Michael. It's gonna happen, HAPPEN SSOMETIME

MAYBE THIS TIME

MAYBE THIS TIIIIIIIIIME

YOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUU'LL  WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN



Author's Response:

I love those rehearsal footage. I love seeing him delegate. It's just...Yum!!!! He's like I know you're sweating blood but push it!!! Push it real good anyway. 

"Did she get a degree in this field?" I'm so dead. Head 101 would be the first class. Her Thesis would be "making sure you include the balls". Lmaooooo let me stop. <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2015 09:01 pm Title: Leaving On A Jet Plane

God, Michael is something ELSE here lol!!! But I still like where this is going. I love it... Charlie better watch out!

More soon!!



Author's Response:

Michael is such a cad in this. You know how I love a rude Mike. Lmao not that's what you love you won't be disappointed at all. <333

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2015 05:41 pm Title: Leaving On A Jet Plane

Let me just say this..... Mike named his 'manly friend' Ronald. The name his grandmother wanted to name him at birth. I was dead!!!! That was a good one Tut. I wouldn't have thought of that but you did. Just dead! lmao.

So he was fooling around with the Pepsi girl from the commercial and she's lacking in the desirable poon category??? Girl , that's a huge no no especially where Michael is involved. Just a shame. All Michael could feel was loose wheels he was trying to steer, eh. Lawd!

So he loves fishing. We all know that  lol.

But for him to be messing woth Charlie and blocking that girl way. Damn, she had to use the restroom my brotha! Interrogating her and whatnot. Kml. But it was cute in its won Fed up way cause I knew she was getting slightly pissed at the questions, lol.

Lord, Mike ass got something up his sleeves for Miss Charlie and I can't wait to see what come of the two.

More soon :)



Author's Response:

Oh it wasn't the Pepsi girl from the commercial. It was a Pepsi PR someone in charge of publicity to the Pepsi cooperation. She was ther to over see that the conference went as it should have but still Michael is no joke. Lmao. She had trash poon and he and Ronald were not pleased. Lmao. 

"Loose Wheels". So DEAD!!! Lmaoooo. He got something up his sleeve alright!! <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2015 05:28 pm Title: Leaving On A Jet Plane

She came in there smacking his ass and Mike was like

See, this is why he needs to fuck with ugly chicks. We got nothing to lose! I would gladly ride the marrow outta his bone. 

 

"connoisseur of good pussy"

You're forever killing me somehow. This dude is a mess. Dangerous era MJ was a ho anyway, we all know it! I still love him though. He was my boyfriend back then and you couldn't tell me squat. That's why the 2 year old in me so very happy to read this lmao

This is random, but there's a Prince song called Letitgo and he says "until now, all i wanted to do was, do do do what i do and, bang bang bang on the drummer and love so and sooooo" Yeah, this is Michael's theme right now!

 

 



Author's Response:

He's too scandalous. I was on the brink of death with that fist gif. I could only imagine that was Michael's actual reaction. Lmaoooooooo. I'll accept that song as Michael's theme because it's more than true. All he does want to do is bang bang bang on the drummer and other assorted fish. Lmao. Ho indeed. <333

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2015 05:22 pm Title: Wanna Be Startin Something

Looooovvve this!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. More coming soon! <333

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