Reviewer: Zendaya Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 10:17 pm Title: Seal This Deal

Wow. So Charlie left his ass and not the other way around. Well I'll be sm then. I thought  was funny cause Mike seemed a little.. I wouldn't say upset.. But he was little down that she didn't stay for breakfast. I'm like....... she skidaddled her ass up outta there. Quick!

And Slash is a complete mess. Oh and ididn't know that Sanjee was a lil freak freak herself. Know I'm starting to wonder what the hell Sekmet means... or did you mention that in a previous chapter before???? O_o lol. Don't mind me girl.

Sooooo, I figured that they were gonna get it in once again annnnnd someone was gonna make a deal on being friends who fuck from time to time. But I did NOT expect Charlie to make that deal. I thought maybe Mike would but Charlie?? Yeah, everything is going about the other way here.

But that deal reminds me of Dawn and Michael. How Michael proposed that he and Dawn have a FWB relationship and the outcome was that feelings got involved. But with Mike and Charlie, that ain't happening I see, lol.

In all hoesty, I think it's gonna last for some time being throughout the tour up until someone catches feelings or wither runs away. Anything may happen later.

More soon.

 

Author's Response:

Yup Charlie got the upper hand and she doesn't even know it. He was a little pressed even though he would never admit that. He's anted her for so long and now he has her but he doesn't have her have her. She likes Ronald but she's not going to stand under his window and scream for him. You know what I mean. Lmaoo.

Slash ans Sanjee are both messes. They're getting pretty hot and heavy. Yup you're right it is a bit like with Dawn and Michael. But without spoiling it the out come  becomes very complicated in the very near future. Trust me feelings get involved.  <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 03:17 pm Title: Seal This Deal

He is liking her way more than he should. I love it though. I respect Charlie too. She isn't all gaga over him and stalking him and she still lets him know she's the one in control while still getting her orgasms lol you go Charlie! These two are like bunnies though. I'm glad she's on the pill lol 

Author's Response:

She's treating him like the girl in the scenario and he's like "hey wait a minute here." Lol. Clutching the sheets and all. He's liking her way more than ever expected to that's for sure. They get it in no lie so please be prepared. Lmao. 

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2015 12:42 am Title: Sweet Sweat

Im rereading this as i write this just so i can properly rip Michael's head off. Jk no really he needs it. I see why this doesn't work out. He is used to getting what he wants when he wants it and doesn't get thats not how the world works sure some people can be bought and paid for but a real significant other can't be. He's not straightforward with the women he has dalliances with, telling the Pepsi pr woman that he'd love to do it again sometime when in actuality he has no intention of seeing her again. And this was so he could be a gentleman? To avoid hurting their feelings? No he didn't leave her promises that he'd comtact her or give her the means to contact him but there isn't much difference here. Yes I absolutely love that you portrayed him as being sexually confident and with LOTS of swagger. I never bought that vanilla nice act he put on. He judges women's value by how good they are at sex, calls himself a pussy connouseir of only the best. Also the constantly horny desperado, im sexy and i know it so I can fuck whoever I want and still have a long line waiting for their turn with me is not a turn on, its not even that cute or sexy. Its predictable, a bit boring. Ok im not saying it's a bad thing he indulges like every rockstar but if you want to get into a relationship that mentality can't work, i mean the one of having women, people at your beck and call. When he cornered her in 'his' hallway, yet another problem he thinks everything he touches/looks at is his, wow he was over confident, he's making it too obvious that he wants her giving her the chance to have the ball in her court. I do have to commend him though. He did keep his word while they had their sleepover and kept his hands to himself. Wants her to want him as much as he wants her and to do that he can't pressure her into putting ronalds needs first. Yes its weird as hell when theyre fucking when he starts talking about his dick as if it had a mind of its own. Its like could he for one second stop bragging about his 9 &1/2 inch long dick that im sure is perfectly huge. I love all the details of his thought process, it's really unique and original. Like when he was in the car on the way to the club listening to Veronica gush over him, you would think that would get old and just irritating really fast. He's not so egostistic as to soak all that up when that happens. I love that he tells her that he'll finger fuck her at the club then goes into how he's nothing like how he comes across in public and in cromt of cameras. I love the intricate details charlie describes while theyre fucking, like he taste like cinnamon, his voice drops 2 octaves lower that just sounds sexy as hell!! As for his performance i felt he could've done better but hey this was pretty hot. Wow this whole review is about him. Love the name & origin of Sekmet very cool and fitting with their personalities. Id love to see more of them maybe their pov of charlie or charlie and michael? Just to see how much sexual tension is there. Lovvve this story!! 

Author's Response:

You've got Michael down. He is defineletly no Peter Pan here (or in real life) He's a rock star and he's a cliched one at that like you say very predictable but he brings another dimension to it. He's not really who he's pretending to be. It's easy for him and he's self assured enough to know he can have panties dropping for him like flies. It's more of a game. He does treat Ronald like he's a different person all together because he can easily not keep the blame for himself. "It's him...that guy over there that's a whore... Him there...Ronald." Michael is the gentleman you meet before and after Ronald steps in the room type thing. Michael is Ronald's hype man. Lol. 

As for him in the limo with motor mouth he's been in the biz for so long he's heard it all and he appreciates it but it doesn't go to his head and puffs him up. He's confident and self assusred in his art, true but the only ego he has to contend with is Ole Ronny. Otherwise he's sailing smooth waters.  

In depth thought processes is my style. You'll never miss a beat about what any of the characters think or feel in the moment. This story is already written and it's in Michael's and Charlie's POV only really but you will get a sense of the tensions when the interact with everyone else. You'll see all the nuances of how everyone views them through dialogue. I make it as honest as possible. 

I loved your I depth analysis. Attention to details!!! I'm going to love our dialogue as the story Developes!!! <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2015 11:11 pm Title: Sweet Sweat

giiiiiiiIIIIIIIRRRRRRRLLLLL THAT SHIT KILLT ME. MINDBLOWING AND I AINT EVEN TRYING TO MAKE PUNS RIGHT NOW. JUST FABULOUS.

 

 

I had to come back and say that bc you have made me so proud ;__; 

Author's Response:

Thank you bew!! ;) <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2015 11:06 pm Title: Sweet Sweat

I am trying to find a gif to express myself because I cant even find the words to explain myself but I am struggling so give me a few moments I will be back to post it ;_____;

Author's Response:

Lmaooo. <333

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2015 08:32 pm Title: Sweet Sweat

Nooooo Charlieeee!!!! You wasn't suppose to give up the pooka poon so soon girl. Haha, that rhymed. Anyway, damn. That liqueur really got to her but like she said, she new exactly what she was.doing and what she wanted. Hmmm.

 And Mike was just as happy as a mug to get some. Don't blame him but still, too soon, lol. Ah what the hell, who am I'm kidding. I couldn't wait for them to get in on with some sexual healing til the break of dawn. 

Lord, and Mike is cuddling. When?!?!!!? A shockerrrrr!!!!! But I do know this is going tolead them to fucking on a regular and feelings might just get involved soon after. 

I'm down for this ride.

More soon !! :)

Author's Response:

She caved but she had every intention to when she left with him. She wasn't quite intoxicated anymore when they had sex. She was sober by then. They both were so they can't blame it on the alcohol lol. You'll get a little laugh in the next chapter about the cuddling. Thanks Bbygirl lets ease on down this road!! <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2015 07:33 pm Title: Sweet Sweat

I'll be right back 

Author's Response:

I see you boo!!! Lol. <333