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Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 02:37 am Title: TriAngles Are My Favorite Shape

Michael Michael Michael! I swear that man is too much for me. He I'd too much I tell ya. 

It's crazy how when Jimmy came flocking around, he really wasn't much of a competition, but baby, when Cato came, allhell broke loose. Mike was and is jealous. Th  possessivness caught me off guard alot.

He wants the poon to be all his but didn't you not agree to just be FWB a while back? Smh.

I see that Charlie was being weak towards the end but we'll see if she gives in completely. I hope not. She needs to give him a run for his damn money. But now that Cato is there, I will love to see some drama unfurl. I'm not a drama person but I'll sure love to see some.

More soon.

Btw, I had updated RBIY like last week maybe. I know you've been busy lately so... Just wanted to inform you on that.



Author's Response:

He is tew tew much!!! Cato came in like a storm and now he's like ugh what the hell is going on here. He's throwing the deal out the door because he can't stand the thought of her being with someone else even though Ronald is roaming about with his wayward self. Stay tuned. 

I read and reviewed RBIY a while back btw. <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2015 11:24 pm Title: TriAngles Are My Favorite Shape

thiiiiiiiiiiis NEGRO. Chile. He is something else. he is REALLY something else. He has a right to be this way but then he has NO right to be this way. I would be Charlie in this situation but at the same time like hell, make him work for that good good! He's the only fucking up every which way. ugh he's so damn sexy, he makes me sick lmao 



Author's Response:

Lmaooooo. Brie. I could actually hear your voice saying that. "Thissssssssssss NEGRO!"  Don't worry you'll see what happens next very soon. It's not going to be easy work. Lmaoo. Every time I look at a picture of him. I'm like HOW DARE YOU!!! Who gave him the right!! <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2015 11:01 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

this negro. He gon fuck the Pepsi girl, get mad at Charlie for letting a guy simply flirt with her, fuck her in the water park, fuck Cammy, then not even think about Charlie other than her puss puss? The nerve!!! He deserved to get caught I personally feel. He's way too cocky (though he has every right to be, I mean, look at the man lol) but he don't need to be whoring around as much as he is. And he don't need to be getting all possessive and selfish with Charlie when he out here whoring around like a professional!

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2015 10:19 pm Title: TriAngles Are My Favorite Shape

Yes I agree that Mike is a prick. This proves yet again that his in love with Charlie as he was quick to get jealous about Cato. I think that Charlie was jealous earlier seeing Michael with Cammy. I don't think that she will give in, but I could be wrong and only time will tell. Loved it girl. Can't wait for more.  Just think of me as your number number 1 fan lol XD



Author's Response:

He's very much a prick!! A lovable prick? Lol. Yeah Michael was jealous as hell. And Charlie too. There both not even paying attention to their feelings yet. Aweeee thank you bb!! You know I love your story too. <333

Reviewer: BadCanBeDangerous Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2015 09:56 pm Title: TriAngles Are My Favorite Shape

Damn, watch. He gonna break her heart. Lmao. This is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Lol. Hang in there well get to the meat soon. More coming up!! <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2015 08:56 pm Title: TriAngles Are My Favorite Shape

Brown Eyes is one of my favorite GaGa songs ever. I always loved that song!

But yeah, Lil Jimmy done gone on and now Cato's here. Damn, now I'm wondering what's about to go down. There's some history behind that one, and you can't help but wonder if this dude is back like an itch that won't leave. Michael wants her all to himself, and it looks like he's gonna have to make sure he stays in the picture.

I mean, hell, there's no telling what could go down. He's such a little shit, and she knows it. He knows it too lmao 

Gawd, idk! I'm just ready for the rest already.

Update tomorrow :|

Im just saying don't leave me hanging too long now!



Author's Response:

I love that song too. I was listening to it and I was thinking of a certain set of brown eyes and boom!! Lol. Big Cato is in the place and you know he's going to start a stir with Michael's jealousy. He is a little shit and he's not done being one just yet. Wait for it. <333

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2015 08:48 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

lol I loveedd this!  Your amazing girl!  I think that Mike is feeling guilty coz he got caught with other woman and maybe Charlie was jealous but only you know that. Yayyy!!!  that's awesome  and you deserved to win. Congrats luv :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad your liking it so much!! We will see Charleis real reaction in the next chapter!! Thanks so much Hun!! <333

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2015 07:28 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

LOVE THIS STORY,  So glad to see it here!  Reading it all over again!   can't wIt for more!



Author's Response:

Awe thanks Nance!! Now you will see it all the way to the end. Finally!!! Lol. <333

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 08:29 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

Charlie shoulda been getting her freak on too. Fuck his jealousy. He got a lot of nerve to be pressed over other men but he's still fucking everything walking. Chile bye. Ol big apple shaped head fool. 



Author's Response:

Lmaooooo. I actually pictured you saying that last sentence and you giving an eye roll to end all eye rolls. "Ole big apple shaped head fool" So dead. <333

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 04:26 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

Well dang, Mike feeling some typa way cause Jimmy, has he calls him now, was talking to Charlie and smiling all in his face???? That was a shocker. I think he may but slowly starting to feel something for her. Idk, but he said it. He hasn't felt that way since Diane so....

Now that she's starting to see Mike for what he's really doing, I think she's gonna start doing it too. Fuck other dudes. She's gonna have her cake and smash thehell out of it too.

But I really do think that things are gonna get very heated in some sorta bad way now that she saw Cam in the room with him. I really think she felt played and is gonna dismiss the fuck outta him for a while. I'll lobe to se  him suffer without the poon jewels of charlie. Lol.

More soon

 



Author's Response:

Michael's forever taking liberties with people's names. Lmaooo. The feelings are definitely creeping in. He'll remain blind to them for a while. Purposefully. <333

Reviewer: Crazyme Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 02:30 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

I so feel for Charlie. Michael has sure screwed up. He needs to talk to Charlie and be only with her plus go to sex therapy.



Author's Response:

Michael messed up big time. He does have a little impulse control problem when it comes to sex. Lol. Theropy shouldn't be out of the question. <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 02:30 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

I think Charlie is going to purposely start spending more time with "Jimmy" which is going to literally eat Michael up from the inside out. lol Michael is SO in love with Charlie... the jealousy... the sick feeling when he got caught with Cammy... These are the signs my friend! You better recognized before it's too late!!!

<3



Author's Response:

Let's just say there will be someone but it won't be Lil Jimmy. Not really. Michael has fallen but he refuses to acknowledge that just yet. It will be a while still!! <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 02:05 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

When James started talking, I'm pretty sure Mike and I made the same face lmaoo That "mhmm, mhmm." face That's exactly how I pictured him! 

Lil Jimmy though

  Thanks for letting me know that James isn't real in this case then. This dude is invisible. Look at him being hugged. He ain't real!

Michael at the end was like 

But damn, I feel for em both. I know they're not together together, but you could still feel some shit there. Mike out here catchin feelings galore. He done proved himself at being way better than lil jimmy. Are we gonna see more of that invisible guy? I wonder!

Charlie's gonna get lil Jimmy right? Something like that! I just feel it in my soul that it'll probably happen. Like it's different to know, but to see it is something else. Damn, I feel for em both.

But still 

He can't beat Mike. There's no way in HEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLL

Can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Lmaooooo that gif and pic has me rolling!! Lil Jimmy won't be so prominent but trust me there will be plenty for Michael to be jealous of in the next upcoming chapters. It won't be so easy for him! Right actually seeing him with another woman stung more than she expected. <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2015 08:32 am Title: Seal This Deal

Mj is 100%  gonna fall hard for Charlie and I don't see her bending the rules they've established here any time soon. 

He was all up in his feelings that morning after. How did it feel, homie?! Getting served what you dish out!! 

"as I tried my damnedest not to let my thoughts stray too far back into our encounter lest I cum on myself  from the memory right there in front of my unknowing friend."  LMAO!!!! 

He's too much!!



Author's Response:

He's going down like a ton of bricks and he doesn't even see it coming. Right he got served a dish of his own food for once and it had him involuntarily cluchibg the sheets and shit. Lmaooooo. I pictured it a thousand times in my head him doing that and the look on his face when he realizes what he was doing. Died laughing!!!! He's a damn mess. Him and Slash. <333

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2015 08:03 pm Title: Seal This Deal

Friends with benefits type deal huh?  Ermmm....don't really see this arrangement working out too well as Mikey is in love with Charlie only his doesn't realize it yet. It's cool girl and I enjoyed this update. Good luck with your project luv :)



Author's Response:

Girl you caught on to him already. You can tell he's already in his feels over her but it will take a few tribulations for him to see it. He's. Not trying to relinquish anything to love right about now. Thank you for the well wishes on my project. I'm a little ways in but so much more to go. <333

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