Date: Jun 22, 2015 06:38 am Title: Chapter 3. Messy New Girlfriend
To Tut...
To finish my response, why would Umi want to hear about her and Mike. Its clear that Umi doesnt want to hear crap about it.
And yes, mike git something good going on for him now but wanting to see Umi at the party is a whole other story. That reuinion is gonna be somethin else fr. 😉
Btw, i hate typing responses on my phone. Ugh!!! 😒lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2015 04:51 am Title: Chapter 3. Messy New Girlfriend
That was sweet of Umi to take Kris in like she promised. Porsche is several types of messy. Who cares that you're with Michael?!? She obviously insecure about her And Michael to want to compare notes and shit. FOH!!!
So Michael got big things going on and what up with him wanting to see Umi all of a sudden since he's been actively avoiding her. Boy don't you got somebody.
This reunion will be interesting.
More soon!<333
Author's Response:
Yes, Umi kept her promise after all that time. Not too many people do that.
And Porshe, girl idek where to begin. We all know she messy as hell. Now that you mentioned ut, she is insecure about her and Mike. Why would
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2015 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 2. A Lil' Bit Of Both Worlds
Can't wait to see how these two reunite. They seem to be pretty happy in their new lives. Umi more so than Michael for some reason but we'll see!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
You and everyone else can't wait for that moment when they cross oaths again. Yes they do seem happy in their new lives, especially relationship wise, but as you said it seems like Umi is more happier than Mike who doesn't seem so quite. Maybe he really his and just not really showing it. It's hard to read him at the moment.
Date: Jun 09, 2015 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 2. A Lil' Bit Of Both Worlds
this is actually really good. I usually side eye "gangsta" mj cause most times it comes off as fake, but somehow u make this believeable. and i know im supposed to root for mj and mimi but roc can cook..lol and he seems to really dote on her in everyway. Untill he does some foul shit I'm #teamuroc LOL I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl, and I can understand why you side eye "gansta" Mike. Some people tend to go to extremes when writing a gansta version of Michael to the point it's like bleh. You can tell its fake because they do TOO much. But how I make my gansta Mike seem more believable is that I based him off of relatives I have that act like lil thugs and ganstas y'know. They smoke weed, drink and have sex, go to clubs, hell, some cheated on their girlfriends as you can see Mike clearly did to Umika. But that's how I make it more believable for readers. I base him off of my big headed cousins, kml. XX
And I'm pretty sure some people are gonna root for Mimi and Roc most def, but Mimi and Mike low key. Cause they gonna want them see each other again and get back together but only time will tell through out the story. But Roc is by far, and amazing and loving boyfriend to Mimi and loves her alot and can cook, lol. But maybe he will do something foul or maybe he won't. We just gonna have to read more to find out.
Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: Jun 09, 2015 11:49 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
Okay I just emailed you
Author's Response:
Okay, i got it.
Date: Jun 09, 2015 11:00 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
I'm brainstorming as we speak you can hmu if you like do you still have IG?
Author's Response:
Yeah, or you can email me too its, breannapaul25@gmail.com
Date: Jun 09, 2015 10:12 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
I seriously have been busy none stop like school and work girl it's a lot but school is over now , I have days off from work I want to get back in the grove of writing but the only thing is I have mean writers block for Stay 😔 I'm bringing back Save Me and want to continue The Neighbor but Stay is my baby and I'm so blank rn
Author's Response:
I understand girl. Being so busy does that to ya. But for you to have a writer's block for Stay. :(:(:( it's okay though. But I can't wait for you to continue your other stories. But I hope you over come your writers block with Stay. You'll think of something girl. I have faith cause Stay is my fav.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2015 09:45 am Title: Chapter 2. A Lil' Bit Of Both Worlds
Omg I love it I can't wait for more , I love asshole Michael like that's the best he is a dog for cheating on her but he was drunk and I can already tell he don't like his new girl like that just someone to spot fill , Umika seems happy though omg I can't wait till they run into eachoth please update soon I love this
Author's Response:
Thanks girl!!!! :):) you kinda disappeared on us over here. But I'm glad to see that you're back.
Date: Jun 05, 2015 11:49 pm Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
First of all i just want to say YASSSSSSSSSS because your characters are freaking amazing. The story is great so far! I can't wait for you to continue!!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks so much girl.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2015 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1. Once A Cheater...Always A Cheater
Really good, love the characters too ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! XX
Date: Jun 05, 2015 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1. Once A Cheater...Always A Cheater
Spicy continue
Author's Response:
Lol, thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2015 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 1. Once A Cheater...Always A Cheater
Man. When Umi was walking up the stairs I was on the edge of my seat. I knew the moment you said the had separate nights out that Michael was going to do dirt. He can't blame being drunk for this because it was well into the afternoon and he was fucking the girl again. He must have wanted to get caught. SMDH. Umi did the right thing!!! Liking it so far!!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Thank you so much girl. I appreciate the love.
And you killed me when you said you was on the edge of your seat. I can't just picture it, kml. Girl Michael is just dumb as hell for his actions. Not only did he cheat once, but twice. And gone think Umi was going to take his ass back. Hell to the nah!!!!! She learned Rom the first time and wasn't about to look stupid again. And like you said, he shouldn't blame it on the alcohol or weed, he must have really wanted to get caught. He just don't know what he's lost.