Date: Aug 14, 2015 01:38 am Title: Chapter 3. Messy New Girlfriend
He cares for her, but he better not act like his girlfriend and try to start some shit. I mean, who has that kind of energy? Just roll up to the girl's salon to start mess? What kind of shit? Like I said, who has the energy? Insecure as hell for sure. WHO DOES THAT?!?!
It's nice to see that Krista's working for Umi now though! Her dream came true. I'm so proud of her.
The Porshe can't be too happy now. He cheated before, and he could definitely do it again. She better sit her ass down on a porcupine and get out of Umi's face.
Author's Response:
Porshe.... everyone dislikes her. Lol. But she is insecure, especially wanting to compare relationships just because she's with Michael. Umika can have him if she wants but she's got her baby Roc now. And you're right, who has the damn energy to do that, lol.
Oh yeah Krista. Umika is such a great person to make someone's dreams come true. She took Krista under her wing and Look at her now. Doing what she was always destined to do. Hair!!!!
And you got me when you said for Porshe to sit her ass down on a porcupine. Oh my!!! Lmao
Date: Aug 14, 2015 01:10 am Title: Chapter 2. A Lil' Bit Of Both Worlds
*anxiously waits for Michael and Mimi to reunite*
I'll be patient. I'm just wondering how they're gonna act when it finally happens!
Another great one, doll!
Author's Response:
Lmbo. I bet you're anxious as hell.
There's no telling how they'll react when they see each other after so long. Although, Michael did as her around the city from time to time but just never said anything to her.
And thanks.
If you have any stories, I'll check them out. I don't think I ever came across your name before.
Date: Aug 14, 2015 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1. Once A Cheater...Always A Cheater
This negro had the nerve to cheat in the first chapter. Hate him already. Okay I love him, but I'm sure you understand. Anyway, this was a great first chapter! Can't wait to see what happens after this. I wonder if he's gonna try to get her back?
Author's Response:
Yes he did girl. He was stupid as heck to cheat on Umika. Oh and I understand, lol.
And thanks. I really took my time with it and I appreciate the love.
And it's possible he will try to get her back.
Date: Aug 10, 2015 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 9. Tipsy And Envy/Octane?
You had me dying with that Jesus line. Lolllllll. It was so funny. If I say I can't stand you best believe you're in my heart. Lol<333
Author's Response:
Lmaaaaoooo!!!!!! I know. See what had happen was, when I had thought about what I wrote which was how Roc could manage to have Umi in all different kinds of positions in a two seat Lambo, that just somehow came to mind and I was like, I have to put that in there to make it funny although.... although it was true. You know ain't nothing possible if it ain't through Christ Jesus himself. Kml.
And I knew you meant well. You always do girl. :):):) <<<33333
Date: Aug 10, 2015 12:31 am Title: Chapter 9. Tipsy And Envy/Octane?
Oh shit things heating up now I see, Michel control yourself! You the one decided to cheat and lose a good girl.
Author's Response:
Lol yesss. But just wait until a few more chapters, things are gonna get heated alright. Mike now realizes what he lost. He did a long time ago and now he wants back in.
Date: Aug 09, 2015 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 9. Tipsy And Envy/Octane?
I can't stand you!!!! Lmaoooooooooo
"All things are possible through Jesus Christ...Amen" I'm sooooo DEAD at that. Bury my ass and get Janelle Monae to sing at my funeral.
Of course that nigga jelly!!! Lmaooooo. He can't even behave himself. It's really not cute that he trying to push up on Umi while Roc is out in the club but I think Roc is up to no damn good and I'm thinking the worst which I won't mention. So that makes it cool for me to root for Michael's ass getting back in there with Umi!!! Ditch the beast and get with the beauty. She wants you too!! Lmao.
I know damn well she gone say yes!!
More soon Bb!!! <333
Author's Response:
Kml, what did I do, Tut?!?!?
Girl yeds. Mike is smelly jelly foreal. He can't stand the fact of seeing Umi with another nigga but that was his lost. Shouldn't have cheated.
Although, it sure isn't cute that he's all on her while Roc is there. Speaking of whom, Roc could be up to no good. Whatever the worst you're thinking could be just that or something different.
Now I root for him and Umi too. We'll see if he ditches the wilderbeast (LaPorshe) and get with the beauty.
Date: Aug 01, 2015 07:21 am Title: Chapter 8. Night's Surprise And Distractions
All I can really say about this chapter is...
YAY!! Rocco came to the club!!!woo hoo!!
and like others I died at mike saying yonder..lol
seeing Porche with Mike is so sad,not just cause she's a wilderbeast but because he obviously doesn't want her. Lol
I know Umi was happy to see her man(s) lol. But I am worries about this alcohol mention. Maybe Roc just gets real loud and happy when he's drunk not mean and wants to fight, but I can't see Umi putting up with that so...idk lol
and I'm looking forward to some car sex...lmao!
As always, love this !
Update soon
Author's Response:
Lol, Yesss he came. Finally!!!
And Mike is just a mess with his country butt.
Lmbo. What you said about Porshe being a wilderbeast, I died. The way it's written. But it is sad cause he still loves Umi but he does care for her tho.
And Roc....let's just hope he doesn't have a liquor problem. Now we don't know how he acts. All Umi said he gets outta character but which one. Wild n out or putting up fights and other drama?
....the car sex... maybe they are or Roc just wants to work that mouth and tongue.
We'll see!
Date: Jul 30, 2015 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 8. Night's Surprise And Distractions
He look good and aww mikey Jealous... Shoulda never cheated! Umika is a great woman and knows how to handle her man which I love!
Author's Response:
Yes. Mike was a little smelly jelly of Roc. I mean, he is with Mike's 'girl' , lol. But you're right. Mike shouldn't cheated and all would have been well.
And Umi is a great woman to Roc. She knows how to handle him, especially put him in his place where he needs to be and that is drunk free.
Date: Jul 30, 2015 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 8. Night's Surprise And Distractions
Idk why, but I was so happy when Michael was getting jealous. I want him and Umika to be together, but I can't help but feel sorry for Roc. Umiak slayed though, ignoring Lawhorshe an all.
Speaking of Lawhorshe, these are my two words for her. ew hoe
Author's Response:
Lol, ikr. On the low tho it is. But it's cute seeing him jealous and all of Roc. Umika will always be the love of his life no matter who she's with or vice versa. You can see that already. But of course people want them to get back together. Hell, even I do.
As for LaPorshe, I'm happy Umi ignored her ass too. She was being classy. That was classy girls do.
And you wrong, lol. 'Two words for Her, Ew hoe!'
Date: Jul 30, 2015 07:13 am Title: Chapter 8. Night's Surprise And Distractions
😂😂 Wilderbeast girl!! I got a kick out of that, but MJ is just itching to get Umi back haha I feel like he has something up his sleeves for sure. Rocco better not get too drunk ;) whatever it is they about to do 👀😏. Funny chapter.
Update soon girlie
Author's Response:
Kml. Yes, that is Porshe's new nickname for Umi. Now we all know Mike might be up to something. Well find out what in the next few chapters to come.
And Roc and gonna get drunk off of that Ciroc he was drinking. From the sound of things, it sound like he's going to get drunk off of something else better. ;)
And will girl.
Date: Jul 30, 2015 06:40 am Title: Chapter 8. Night's Surprise And Distractions
Two things had me at the brink of death. Umi calling Porche a Wilderbreast and Michael using the word yonder. I almost died. Lmaooooooo. Yeah Porche's days are numbered I see it already. Michael is going to move in on Umi. I'm just sitting in the cut waiting to see what it is that will open the door enough for his foot to slip in.
I still don't trust Roc for some reason. There's something fishy about him.
We know Roc is up to nastiness. lol.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Lmbo. She called her that in the previous chapter too. As for Mike using the word yonder, i know it was kinda hard to believe Mike using country slang fir the first time.
And yes, it seems like Porshe days are being counted down as of now. Mike, is really going to move soon Umi we know fir sure. Just don't know when though.
As for Roc, well....let's just say, something will be brought to the light very soon. That's when the drama will most definitely get real.
Yesss, girl. Roc tryna get some poon.
Date: Jul 27, 2015 05:57 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
can't say i didn't see this coming1 Of course Michael couldn't keep his eyes off Umi and of course Umi couldn't stay as cold as ice forever!
There's just too much history for them to completely be over eachother.
And yes Porche needs to go. lol. please mike do yourself a favor and get rid of this bird. lol.
Can't wait for more. ;D
also, TOW has been updated
Author's Response:
Lol. Yes, mike had his glued on Umi hard. And of course the moment she started to talk to Mike, that hate she once had was gone. She knew she was just as anxious as he was to see each other.
And they Doo have a lot of history together to not be over each other.
And Porshe. Girl she just a jealous mess. But we'll see what happens and if Mike will eventually leave her.
And I'll be reading it.
Date: Jul 25, 2015 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 7. Reunited....But Jealousy Is In The Air
Porsche needs to get a hold of herself, she's way too jealous. Michael and Umika are way cute and I hope their friendship gets better.
Author's Response:
Ha, who you telling. Mike, is slowly getting fed up with her and her constant jealousy. It's just doesn't make any sense.
And yes Michael and Umika are cute. They were a cute couple too. And hopefully they do form a friendship or it might just lead to something else.
Stay tuned.
Date: Jul 24, 2015 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 7. Reunited....But Jealousy Is In The Air
Porshe gots to go lol! She does the absolute most lol , Michael and Umi needs to stay together, their relationship ending is sad but I want this to work just as much as Mike does :) keep it up I'm totally interested girl.
Author's Response:
Lol, I know. Maybe she will, if Mike leaves her for good. He said so herself because of the way she is. But everyone wants Mike and Umi to.get back together. But we don't know about that being that Umi actually loves Roc. But it was very sad how they ended be cause of somebody got too high and drink and couldn't keep it in their pants (Mike, lol).
But we'll see what may become of Mike and Umi again. Maybe nothing would. Just keep on reading to find out.
Date: Jul 24, 2015 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 7. Reunited....But Jealousy Is In The Air
Leave ha ass Mike!!!! Lmao.
Umi bb De-Nile is not just a river in Egypt. She in it deep right now. I like that they put the past to the side and spoke civilly... Until Porche ass showed up. I wonder what she's thinking now that Michael spike his mind to her.
She got plenty to worry about let Michael's subconscious tell it.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Lol, from the sound of thing, he seems.like he is but something is making him stay. That's good on Porshe's part. We'll see how long they last since he so tempted to leave her.
Umi is always in denial. She stubborn that's what her problem is. But it was good to actually see them talk despite their past and whatnot, they were able to talk and not have Umika all in her feelings or going off on him.
But of course, Porshe had to ruin it woth her jealous insecure ass. She trying to start mess and Umi was right to leave. She probably would have killed that girl. So it was best she walk away and enjoy her night.
Now, Porshe ass probably fearing Mike leaving her now. Hell, who wouldn't. But she need to really calm her tits.
But yes, she do have alot to worry about now.