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Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2016 11:45 am Title: Hot And Cold

I wish Nye would have caught them! I know she wasn't no faithful girlfriend. She seemed a little too innocent and whiney for me, shit. I know Michael about to flip about that whole interview thing. Who does stuff like that? I get people are confident about their bodies but that's just OVERBOARD. She reminds me of Kauruchee, or whatever her name is. I have a headache from this girl right now. 

Somebody slap this hoe. 

 

More soon please, Tut!

 

 



Author's Response:

Lmaoooo she thought she could sweet all him about the Mag cover. Let's see how she gets out of it because Michael is going to go off especially since she put intimate details in the interview. Can you imagine if him and Pen got caught?!?!  Lmaooo. <333

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2016 09:35 pm Title: Hot And Cold

Somebody rockin knockin da boots. Lmao. Pen and Mike bass tearing it down I see. But I'm soooo damn glad they didn't get caught but I wouldn't care. Nye ass cheating too so she ain't got room to be mad had all that really happened. Ans honestly, I don't think she suspects anything cause she's too busy fucking Chad's ass so.... lol.

Nye, sweetie, you bout to get roasteeeeedddd. I 110% think he has the right to be mad. I mean ain't no telling what she told in that magazine.



Author's Response:

She bout to get several roast hands in her face for real for real. They missed getting caught by minutes lmaoooo. Scamming asses. Lmao Nye is just as wrong in this too. Let's see how Michael goes off!! <333

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2016 07:59 pm Title: Hot And Cold

Why the fuck couldn't Bye just catch them?? Ugh! Her ugly ass is cheating too. I hope Michael finds out. I'm cackling at how much satisfaction I have received knowing he fucked Pen thoroughly in their bed. I hope Bye smells what good pussy is like and what has her "fiancee" ass sprung and putting him to sleep. Trifling stank ass ho. Anyway, so she done did some kinda nude editorial and interview? Chile.. Mike needs to let this ho go. Love don't live here anymore and clearly she's a fame by association type bitch. A Kardashian. She don't give a shit about Michael except for what his name and fame can do for her tired ass. Let that fool Chad have that worn out wolf pussy, Mike don't need it! Him and Pen are really cute and they really are digging each other, Michael gets extra soft around her and it's adorable. That boy falling and don't even know it. Speaks volumes that he didn't feel as guilty as his mind thinks he should have. #LetDatHoGo Bruh. Can't wait to see what happens next. 

 



Author's Response:

You make me CACKLE everytime I read your reviews. Lmaooooo. They escaped getting caught. After a while Pen didn't give a damn about being in that bed either. They are really into each other. We will see if Michael finally sees the light and kicks her fame grubbing ass to the curb for that Magazine. <333

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2016 07:14 pm Title: Hot And Cold

Missed you. I love this story.

I hope Michael finally tells Nye the marriage and is now off and get the h--l out of his 

apartment.



Author's Response:

I missed you guys too. I know Michael is about to go offffff on her for that magazine cover. Stay tuned!! <333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 01:24 pm Title: After The Spill Comes The Chill?

No?

Yes? 

Remember those hot seats that were on fire before? Now they're burned to crisps.

It's over. 

No more neutral triangle. The shit has officially begun. 

I'm glad I was able to catch up on this, I'll be checking every few days to see if you updated so I don't get far behind. Now I'm going shimmey over to CTTG and see how far behind I am. Hopefully next week I can catch up on that one too. 



Author's Response:

That triangle is going to get very intense now. Let's see just how much drama will come of all this. More to come soon!! Thank you for catching up on all the chapters. I hope you continue to enjoy it!! Thanks Brandy! <333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 01:12 pm Title: Netflix And Spill

I started Jessica Jones I'm liking it. 

Anyway, something always comes with Netflix... either you spill or (excuse my language) fuck. There is no in between lol. 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 01:02 pm Title: I Can't Help It

Michael is going to fucking KILL when that picture drops. Nye has dug herself a hole that I don't think she'll be able to get out of. 

And she doesn't even need to think about being with Chad. She can't use the infidelity card against Michael and then turn around and do it herself! 

Hypocrisy and two wrongs make a bad ass combination. 

Oh a kiss... the devils kiss should I call it. 



Author's Response:

Nye's is an opportunist if she cod benefit she's going to go for it. It wasn't always that way but overtime her motivation shifted and it's coming out more now the closer they get to that wedding. <333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 12:46 pm Title: Complicated

Drunk texting... well in this case drunk singing... and through voicemail of all things. Lol, I'm embarassed for Pen! 

Let me jump on this "complicated" (but don't have to be) situation with Michael and Nye. Whenever you stay with someone who hurts themselves out of guilt sends an entirely wrong message. Michael is telling me  (imo) that he's only with Nye for the fear that she'll pop some pills again and try to take her life. I get it he cheated but he can't put all of that (cheating and Nye's unsuccessful suicide attempt) on his heart or it will weigh heavy, which, p.s. it already did. Like I said before yes, he loves her, but he isn't in love with her and he needs to notice the difference. And once he does then he will choose what is best for him not for Nye.

They say a woman should never settle, well I believe a man should never settle either. They've been together for five years, they have history that's understandable, but history ain't got shit on connection. 

Now I'm not saying that Michael should leave Nye and run straight to Pen, no. Because how you get a man is how you lose him so Mike needs to get away from Nye and have some time for himself for a little while. Take a breather and not be up under a woman. 

Basically, he needs to get his shit together. 



Author's Response:

Michael did take it to heart the guilt of Nye hurting herself. It can be crippling for a person to feel that what they do could trigger someone doing something so drastic. He's learning better now what Nye's drive is so we know from the first chapter that he had to let go of that. But we'll get there. No one should ever settle when it comes to love. I don't nessesary think how you get a man is how you lose him. In some cases it is in others not so much. But we will see. <333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 12:26 pm Title: Empty Bed

Imo, I thought she bounced so she could get back to the room before Fenty woke up. 

- Just friends escalate to friends with benefits and before you know it we'll be reading the scene where Michael stops Pen from getting on her plane by confessing his love for her, lol. 

- Nye? She might announce the date of their wedding on national TV before Michael even knows when it is lmao. 

5 stars girl. 



Author's Response:

<333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 12:15 pm Title: Forms Of Communication

I have two reasons why he might be feeling guilty:

1. He cheated on Nye who is his fiance and he loves her (just not in love with her anymore) so he doesn't want to see her hurt.

2. He's brought Pen into a mess that he knows won't be pretty once shit hits the fan and he genuinely cares for her too (maybe even fall in love with her as the story progresses) and doesn't want to see her hurt. 

When morning comes I feel in my gut that Michael is going to call the whole ordeal a mistake or Pen will or they'll both regret and decide it was a one time only thing and go about their day. <<< denial at its finest. 

 

 



Author's Response:

You're right on all fronts. She's feeling guilt too for letting herself fall into Michael's arms. <333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 12:03 pm Title: K.I.S.S.I.N.G

Grown people who are really attracted to each other and it's just sexual tension in the air never meet up "just to talk"? My heart was beating so fast in this chapter I swear it's the fasted I've ever read lmaooo! 



Author's Response:

Lmaoooooo. They bout to communicate alright. ;)) <333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 11:57 am Title: Shot To The Chest

Their hot seats just caught on fire. 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 11:47 am Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare

1. Nah, it was just a little play. Nye will get over it.

2. Not really because she gets away with treating them bad. He admitted it himself she treats them like gum on the bottom of her shoe sometimes. 

3. Still friends with benefits? He's just someone she calls when she's feenin' for the 'D'. But her and Michael are in the hot seat right now so I'm anxious to see what happens. 

As always 5 stars. 



Author's Response:

True Nye can only expect to be treated the way she treats people. <333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 11:36 am Title: Retreat...

Let the games begin?



Author's Response:

Yes!!<333

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2016 11:25 am Title: Request De-Nyed...

Every time you describe Michael's eyes my heart melts into a puddle. 

Weird, I know.

Pen's gotta date, bout time because the girl was feeninnnnn.. 



Author's Response:

<333

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