[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2015 05:20 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
II need me some Michael loving then. Lol, let me stop. I ain't even cashed my "card" yet. *wink, wink* Anyway, he puts it down on ol girl. Baby was knocked the fuck out. Only Michael could do that.
And Nye has a reality show that's she's on but Michael doesn't want his name in it except for the first name.Plus, it can only be used twice??? Smh, only Mike.
Now let's get to him and Pen. Now, we know from what michael said, he's a changed man. But how changed is he? He wants Pen. He does, but he's fighting as hard as he can. Poor thing. And it's obvious that they aren't really seeing eye to eye too. That's because Mike ass got the feeling of butterflies. Mhnmm.
But Pen think she slick. Knowing damn well niggas gone be looking at that ass in them shirts. Fast as tail lol girl. Ima whoop her ass.
More soon Tut :)
Author's Response:
I'm pretty sure that Michael lovin was the bomb!!! Girl don't get me started!! Lmao.
Nye is a mess you'll see more of who she really is as you read. Mike was no joke on the legal clause. Lmao.
He's already but playing it off. This is going to be a fun journey!!!<333
Date: Jun 07, 2015 04:03 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
As always my NYC Sistaa...I love it! I can't wait to see when he gives in to his desires! Lol
Author's Response:
Hey hey hey Nance my NYC Sista!! I'm glad you're likibg this one too!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 08:13 am Title: The Train To Destiny...
I love it!!! Is it weird? I missed Michael's rude ass lol!!!! Girl, I'm ready for the drama cause I can already tell this story is going to be PACKED with it. Let me prepare my popcorn cause Imma be here for every second of it.
You're writing is flawless as always. I didn't think it could get any better and in these two chapters I'm already blown away!!
<3
Author's Response:
Awe thank you bew!!!I missed his rude ass so much I had to keep writing him. Lol. Drama is mos def coming!!! For real for real!!! Do it MJ style and toss some hot sauce on that popcorn cause it's going to get spicy!!!<333
Date: Jun 03, 2015 07:42 am Title: Gound Zero
Yes!!! I fell in love with these characters and I am so happy to see them back. Love the story so far and can not wait for an update.
Favorite line of the day, "smelled of satan's soiled undies dipped in piss..."
Author's Response:
Lmaoo. One things for sure. You'll have plenty of fave lines. Pen and Mike will keep you laughing in this one!! Thank you for reading this one too hun!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2015 09:44 pm Title: The Train To Destiny...
Pen is so different in this and it's so awesome. I'm loving the new approach to her character. I'm loving the same thing about everyone else too! This is about to be another great one, Kizzy! I'm so glad I sent that message earlier lmaoo I reread it earlier this morning and I had to send that message.
I'm a spoiled brat, so can you blame me? I can't wait for Michael to get to know her better though! He's being all jerk/asshole/sex god and I'm in love already.
But yeah, Elohim is back! You know it's time to break out the names. I am so ready if he acts up! I got all the El names in the book. My snarky attitude and I are ready for this guy if he jumps rabbit on us!
More soon <3
Author's Response:
Pen is different but yet the same. She's still lovable and cuddly I promise. Michael is the same jerk asshole sex God that he is. Elohim is back so so brave yourself for a whole new set of names. Lmaoooooooooo!!<333
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2015 08:01 pm Title: The Train To Destiny...
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it!!!! The Way everything started off, it was great. But poor baby was on a pussy smelly sub, lol. I would have died for her myself. I know it was funky as Satan's breath foreal. Whoo!
But instead, she's Amos New apprentice instead of Mike's. That's who I though she was going to be for but I like the mash up mitch match with the characters. Saul and Ren are probably the same crazy ass niggas from before. And I'm surprised you changed Diana ways as a character. She's quiet and more to herself but stuck up maybe and not a hoe. Finally!!!!! Lol.
Forgot to mention, anoint nothing really change with Michael. The Way he is rude on here he was like that in Inked. Nothing new. Lol.
Can't wait for he next update.
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo. I've experienced that very subway car far too many times. Yeah he charactors will be a little tossed around. You're so right! Saul and Ren are the same. Michael is Michael rude as hell but not so much of a man whore. I'm happy you're liking it so far.
Date: Jun 02, 2015 07:23 pm Title: The Train To Destiny...
Lawwdddd my boo Pen is back. I'm pressed because you gon have her being the side chick lol smh. I can't wait to see how this plays out tho. Please let her snatch a bitch bald, my soul needs it. I'm hoping we see Pen interact with other men too since she's single.. Or is she? Lol. Either way, I am PERCHED for this lol
Author's Response:
Lol girlllllll I know Pen is the side chick but I know you'll still love her. Pen is single and ready to mingle so you will see that. There may be occasion for snatchibg. We'll see. Lol. Thanknyou for reading hun!!<333
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2015 06:18 pm Title: The Train To Destiny...
Love it!
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2015 06:18 pm Title: The Train To Destiny...
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it so far!! :) <333
Date: Jun 01, 2015 09:57 pm Title: Gound Zero
Btw, can you put this in the Adult category cause when you told me to check it out, that was the first one I went to to look for it soon had to click your name instead to find it, although I realized it was in the bad category as well after reading it. Just asking if you could.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for pointing that out bb! I fixed it now. <333
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2015 09:09 pm Title: Gound Zero
Omg, I swore to God I thought this was a sequel because when I read the summary it made me scared. I was like, "ahhh shit, Mike and pen ain't gone make it cause some trifling skeezer wants to ruin it." But now that I read the the first chapter, I realized that it wasn't, plus , you said it in the authors notes, btw, lol.
But I love how you written out everything and how it's sooo much different than the actual Inked story. It's reversed and I love it girl. I can't wait to read more. This is just fantastic.
Author's Response:
Awe thanks for checking it out Bb!!! It is much different from Inked. This is a whole other journey with different circumstances. <333
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2015 02:46 pm Title: Gound Zero
Im liking it so far..i read inked and i think you a great author..im looking forward to see what u got in store for this story...im excited!! But mike was wrong for leaving that girl at the alter Lol..but u can't help who you love right? Keep them chapters coming! :)
Author's Response:
Awe thank you so much girl!! I'm glad you like it so far. Stick around. It won't be like Inked. I'm hoping it will be better for you guys!!<333
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2015 12:11 pm Title: Gound Zero
You gave me such a good reason to use this gif! I am so excited. Like, I don't know if you understand how excited I am, but I am so excited for this. I'm so ready. I am soooooo ready. I can't wait to see where this goes, or see who else is gonna return. I'm having a serious fit over here!
But omg, I thought of Friends too! As soon as it happened lmao I was in my Chandler mood ASAP. OH. MY. GOD! Shit, this is about to be wild. I can smell it in the air already. I'm excited though so I'm ready for this. Summer's about to be so good to me knowing this will be playing a major role in it!
Because I truly do think you're swell and I love you so much for this!
Author's Response:
Aweee Teddy Bee!!! I'm glad you like it so far. I was promising a Michael and Pen story but didn't want a sequal. Now we don't have to miss the babies quite as much!!! <333
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2015 11:31 am Title: Gound Zero
OMG!!!!!! I love this idea!! Love it love it love it!!!
I'm dying to see where you take this. Lord Jesus, poor Nye... even though knowing the trifling thang she is, I still feel bad for her gettin' done at the alter like that. Michael! That was low...
That scene at the end though... Him chasing her down at the airport. *tears*
Keep it coming, girl!!!
<3<3!!
Author's Response:
Awe thank you Michaella. I was hoping you guys would like it and not think it was lame of me to use the same characters. You're going to laugh and cry with this story. Don't worry though it will be lighter than the last one. <333