[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2015 07:27 pm Title: Hello BabyHairs...Meet Hardcore...
Nye cheated on him!!! Yes!!! Now he can get with Pen. At least, I'm assuming so... Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
We'll see. Lol. It certainly does look suspicious. Welcome to the story love!!<333
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2015 06:19 pm Title: Muppet Fakes And Bathroom Breaks...
Im finally caught up! lol and giiiiiiiiiiiiirl I love this! Pen and Mike have some serious damn chemisty. They want each other soooo bad mhm. I can't stand the Bean Stalk already lmfao but this is a good story and im gonna try and keep up!
Author's Response:
Hey hey hey!! LOL welcome to the story!!!Hold on to your hat BB!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2015 04:23 pm Title: Muppet Fakes And Bathroom Breaks...
I like Diana much better this time around. I think she'll be a fun character when she's not all Mike thirsty and shit.
Pen is HILARIOUS in this version. LMAO!!!! a piece of lint on his pants... and Michael's rude ass LOL. I can't wait to see how long it takes for him to hit it like he knows he wants to. SMH!
Author's Response:
Trust me when the time comes and it all goes down you'll be a very happy camper. At least I can hope for that!! Diana and Pen will keep you rolling in this version. They're like the comedic dynamic duo. And Michael and his rude ass will have you laughing too. Lmao. <333
Date: Jun 15, 2015 10:40 pm Title: Muppet Fakes And Bathroom Breaks...
Lovin it! Keep it going girl. It'll be nice to get to know Diana without all the crazy of Inked. And Michael... mm, cute. But he needs to step off from that girl and realize a few things. Damn
Author's Response:
Thank you BB girl!! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Di is definitely a good girl in this one!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2015 03:35 pm Title: Muppet Fakes And Bathroom Breaks...
Diana got this girl drinking a special ass, air, pube smoothie. I had to read that part at least five times. I am so done right now lmaooo Omg but she deserves it. She's walking around like her shit don't stink like everybody else. Girl, go somewhere please!
I keep thinking of her drinking it and thinking it's deeeeeeeeelicious and Diana and Pen being like
I need this to happen in the future please. Just do it for me. That tiny little favor!
But anyway, yeah Mike sneaking up on folks the same way my cat does. I can be minding my damn business and that girl will just roll up on me. "OH, I SEE YOU DRANKIN WATER, BEIN ALL HYDRATED WITHOUT ME" That's how he is. "Oh, are you breathing? I like breathing let just sneak in and join the breathing party."
He want the draws and that's why he likes sneaking up on her so much. This SOB makes me so sick lmao but I love him so much. I don't blame her for checking out the woody.
I know I'd be looking at him like
Now, it's time to go and purify myself in the waters of Lake Minnetonka and wash my sinful thoughts away
Until next time, keep my request in mind
I'll do something for you too!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm way ahead of you Bb!!! You will have your wish sooner than later for sure!! Lmaoooooo. Michael will forever be on her heels. I'm dying @ "I SEE YOU DRANKIN WATER, BEIN ALL HYDRATED WITHOUT ME!" DEAD!!!! I could see his ass doing that too. I might add that to the mix! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2015 03:29 pm Title: Muppet Fakes And Bathroom Breaks...
Diana is hilarious! Her conversation with Pen was one of a kind. I'm still laughing.
Can't wait for your future chapters
Author's Response:
Diana and Pen will keep you laughing. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2015 03:15 pm Title: Muppet Fakes And Bathroom Breaks...
Pen be having me dying with these harsh, rude and funny ass thoughts. She And Mike just ain't getting along. They are like vinegar and oil right now. But he need to get his Evilene in check. If me, I think I would have whooped her ass Louisisana style. Ugh!!! Females like her, I tell ya. And wtf was that look and shooshing thing Mike was doing??? Michael I'm watching you my nig!!! Kml. Think us slick. That meant something. And I'm trying to figure it out, lol.
And for once Diana and Pen are getting along just great. Finally. Plus, she's a lesbi!!!! Omg!!! Pen, hide ya poon and juices girl cause Diana could be coming for it. She said she was playing but maybe!!! Lawd.
I can't til the story progresses. This is gonna be one hellova rollercoaster ride and I can't wait to get on.
More soon, girl. :):)
Author's Response:
Oh Pen and Diana are going to be a team in this one lol. Diana got her head screwed on straight this time around. And yes she's into the ladies lol. Eviline will get hers little by little through the story. It will be a roller coaster ride. Join me!!!<333
Date: Jun 08, 2015 05:01 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
Love it! I really love your writing style. can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much hun!! More coming soon! <333
Date: Jun 08, 2015 09:57 am Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
Oh my gosh, Mike, why you fightin so hard? Who you think you playin, homie? Come on now
Author's Response:
He tryin so hard girl!! Lol. He's playin himself on that one!!<333
Date: Jun 08, 2015 09:38 am Title: Gound Zero
Alternative Universe? Wordd?? Alright alright alright, I'm ready!!
At first, I thought it was gonna be another girl that took him away from Pen and I couldn't bare the thought, so I stayed away. But you got me now, girl. Ready to fall in love with these two all over again... Lol, as triflin as Mike can be.
Author's Response:
Heyyyy Jazii. Yup alternate universe. It's a completely different story line. I hope you like it so far. It's going to be packed with a lot of laughs and shinanigans!! Fall in love girl!! Oh and CTTG has a few chapters you missed up!! <333
Date: Jun 08, 2015 09:38 am Title: Gound Zero
Alternative Universe? Wordd?? Alright alright alright, I'm ready!!
At first, I thought it was gonna be another girl that took him away from Pen and I couldn't bare the thought, so I stayed away. But you got me now, girl. Ready to fall in love with these two all over again... Lol, as triflin as Mike can be.
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2015 11:45 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
OMG!!! Mike and Pen are sumthin else! Lol...mike he tryin so hard but he know he can't resist and Pen know she in unmarked territory but she don't care and I wouldn't either if I was her!! :) This Nye girl..needs to go Bye Bye!! Cuz she seems fake as hell!! But I'll give her the benefit for now :) next chapter please this getting good!!! ;)
Author's Response:
Pen had them legs out and he was done!!! LMAOO. Nye is fake as hell. Prepare for the shade. Lmaoo.<333
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2015 07:06 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
LMAO!!!!! Girl!! This chapter had me rollin' all over my room laughing my ass off. Whew!! I CAN. NOT. STAND. MICHAEL!!! But I love him to death.
I see Nye can't put Michael to sleep like we all know Pen can. It's only a matter of time...
Him singing "Let it Go" DEAD! Enough said on that.
The fact that he was so affected by Pen first thing yet he's all playin' it off like a tough guy in front of her is hilarious and cute at the same time.
I am in LOVE with this take on the story. More soon girl! <3
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo you missed him didn't you!!! He's back full force. There will be a lot of rolling on the floor for sure this story. It's a lot lighter than the last one.
Mom so glad you're likibg it so far bew!! <333
Date: Jun 07, 2015 06:22 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
Lmao chile Pen better not hesitate to snatch his bony ass for filth if she need to! Tryna intimidate somebody and ain't nothing but 100 pounds in a wet t shirt, BYE! So he's already lusting after Pen huh? I hope she induces the thirst on his ass, on some never gonna get it En Vogue kinda shit. And him and Nye already sound like a mistake that shouldn't have happened. I don't see love there or potential marriage. I see convenience. That's definitely not gonna last. And lastly, I see he still hasn't met a woman who can put his ass to sleep? I'm guessing the puss low key trash with ol girl huh? Mm hmm. *smirks* we shall see what happens with that.
Author's Response:
Oh she's going to be snatchibg wigs left and right. Trust!!
Nye and Michael are a damn mess. HighKey that puss is trash cause he's wide awake singing "Let It Go" Lmaooo. <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2015 05:56 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
First of all, Ima beat yo ass for this. How you gon tease me with the tip? The tip. The fucking tip. On this day! The holiest of days, you gon play me like this? I can't believe you. I love you with all my short legs! And you do this to me?
I wanted tip, shaft, and the whole thing. I wanted hair pulling and tugging. I wanted to be choked! You gave me the tip and went to sleep.
And how come for why?
I dug it, but it wasn't no six feet! I am so angry!!
You can't even beg for forgiveness
There must be more to life than this. There has to be. I can't believe you just gon tease somebody like that. I can't stand the raaaaaaaaain
I'm just
ugh
I love you anyway and I can't wait for more. Pen's fine ass can call me daddy too. Gawd knows I don't mind! I hope Michael gets to fuck the melanin out her whole body.
Praise
Author's Response:
Just the tip Bb just the tiiiiiiippppppp. You're going to get you're fill no worries!! She can call us all Daddy with them lips!! <333