[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 06:47 pm Title: K.I.S.S.I.N.G
Lmfao! These two are a mess. She running off like a child that got scared. And he over here forgetting shit and acting like a 12 year old. If the kiss damages them this much then I fear for how they gon act after the sex lmfaoooooo smh. And them two boys are some blockers! Mhm. I said it. Di knows what's up though lmfao I know she happy as hell too.
Author's Response:
I know right?!?!? They're over here falling the hell apart and they didn't even touch genitals yet. Do knows what's up. I wouldn't be surprised if she thought he had done the do sweatin so damn much. Lmaoo. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 06:31 pm Title: K.I.S.S.I.N.G
Pen, girl, you should have stayed and got you some more. GETCHU SOME O DEM FROGGY LIPS GIRL. The deed done got done anyway, enjoy yourself. Kiss the Squirtle looking negro all you want. Then you can leave. I think I would have at least. Hell, he kissed me anyway, let me have this moment and ask for forgiveness later.
I'd jump over that moon in a heartbeat. YOLO and I don't even say that lmao
Lmaoo I'M DONE
He forgot about Fenty. Michael, you're so wrong for this lmaoo I love him so much, but I'm dying over here just from that. I thought I was bad about forgetting stuff and here he comes along.
This dude isn't even trying to find her. She went missing and yo ass just sitting there gettin drunk? Moth duck!
I don't know if they're gonna just talk. Somebody mouf gon be on somebody mouf. Den somebody mouf gon be on somebody souf and den somebody souf can touch somebodys souf
and that's when the friction starts
and friction starts fire
fire makes heat
and then?
then?
IT'S GON BE HELL
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo. If Michael saw you use YOLO he would probably come to your house and do you harm. This Michael can't stand Drake. You'll get some comic relief when he has an encounter with him later in the story. Let's see if somebody's souf end up in somebody's souf!! You are a hot mess. Lmaooo. But that's why I love you!! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2015 05:19 pm Title: Shot To The Chest
Ahh!!! How could you leave it like that!! They're finna do the DEED in that locked room aren't they?! I love how it all came together!
Diana is a MESS!!! That girl had me dead! And Michael's trying to be all 'nah.. I love my girl.' PSHHH!!! Boy you know you want Pen, Diana knows you want Pen
and now PEN knows you want Pen.
More soon! <3
Author's Response:
Lmaooooooo. Anything could go down behind those doors. Will it be the "deed" or flight? Isn't Di the best. Lmaooooooo. She's awesome but don't cross her or her loved ones. You'll get the bitchy end of the horns. Michael has a lot of assessment to do on his life with Nye. Things will get complicated real quick. Now Pen Knows he wants her and he also knows Pen wants him back. How will that mix? You know? I won't keep yall waiting too long I hope. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2015 05:15 pm Title: Shot To The Chest
Oh my gosh I'm so happy they finally kissed!! I just hope he doesn't start to ignore her or try and act like it never happened. Like Diana said you can obviously see how much he likes her.
Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Yeah it's becoming noticeable just how much Pen affects him and now she knows too that she affects him. We will see how it all goes down when they sober up from that intoxicating kiss. <333
Date: Aug 24, 2015 12:34 am Title: Shot To The Chest
Chile... Michael has made the first move. Im actually shocked it happened so soon. I wonder what else will happen in that room. And lol at Straight outta bars and the Jhene Aiko line. Lawd she will never live that down smh lol. Anyway, I'm glad Di noticed how thirsty Michael is for Pen, that means it's noticeable and I know damn well his funky ass fiancée notices or will notice it soon too. Unfortunately I don't think it will go too far in that room tho, Michael may break away if he thinks about it too much. I am dying to see what will happen next though. And speaking of tattoos, I think I wanna get one more and be done, but of course that's always hard to say. Lol
Author's Response:
Yup Di notices everything. Not only with Michael but with Pen too. You can't fool my girl Di. Lmao. I'm so glad I changed her character for this version. I love writing her. We'll see soon how it all goes down once reality knocks on the door.
I say go for it!! For me tattoos are like Lays potato chips, you can't have just one. Hell I have 13 albeit there small and mostly on my hands yet I'm far from being done with them. The perks of learning how to tattoo. lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2015 09:47 pm Title: Shot To The Chest
Omg, you did your first tattoo. That's awesome. Congrats. And I bet it was intimidating. What did you tat?????!!!!
Now...
Diana ain't that slow to not notice that Mike was feeling Pen. He put himself out there plus, Di knows him like the back.of her hand so it was going to be a matter of time until she noticed.
And lord, they get locked inside of a room and Michael kisses Pen. O.M.F.G!!!!!! I was nearly about to fall out of my damn bed reading that. I really thin he reacted out on his feelings or his thing that he has for. It's pretty obvious that's what it was. Just my opinion on what I think it could have been. It's possible ya know.
As for how the way Pen feels, hell, her ass kissed him back so she must have a lil thing for him too. I also saw that she tried to pull away but damn, the kiss was that good she couldn't even if she wanted to which she really didnt. Lol.
I really think they're gonna go further after the kiss but not just so quickly. I think it will be Mike to run away being that he is engaged. But it might end up being Pen that runs away because of his situation with Nye. But sooner or later, she will get caught up. I'll just be waiting for it to happen.
More soon when you can update again :)
Author's Response:
Yessss I did my first tat. It was a Japanese Kenji and I did it on the side of my mentor's neck, just below his ear. It wasn't big at all but it was stressful as hell cause I didn't want to mess up.
Michael doesn't realize how he's telling on himself when it comes to Pen. Especially with Diana since she knows him better than he knows himself apparently. I think his feels took charge of the situation and he kissed her. We'll have to see how far the go after the kiss and what will break it. I will get that update out ASAP. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2015 04:48 pm Title: Shot To The Chest
I'm done with Diana. Her grandma spent a summer and that gives her a southern accent? I love her i love her i love her lmao You know I do! Mike got jealous quick when he thought she tasted some Pen.
Can he use his daddy voice on me? Jesus! I would love it. Put me in my place right now, sir! Shut me up.
Revenge, my ass. Control yourself, Mike. It ain't her fault you out here with a constant Woody. Suspicious ass negro
But fuuuuck they finally kissed and you just gon leave it there?
You're not updating for a while and you do this?
how could you do this to me
why would you do this to me
i ain't never done wrong to nobody! why!
this isn't fair
I haven't been a bratty pouty Tink in so long but you just turned me into that!
I'll be patient but still!
I love you anyway
Author's Response:
Michael was like damn you all to heck when he though Di had some of the peach pie. He out here in tight ass pants getting hard and blaming people for it. Can you tell his girl has to try harder to make that happen. Suspicious ass negro indeed. Lol. As for leaving it there for now...You'll love me in the morning Dawling!!! Lol.
Ill update as soon as I can. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2015 09:36 pm Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
"Tasting and feeling is believing lil' girl. I would have to be the judge of that." Sitting back Michael licked his lips and undid my entire world.
THIS IS ME. THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I FELT AND WOULD FEEL IF I WER PEN. AMEN
Now these two know damn weel they need to just get a quick feel of one another while mis Knee is not around and they could get away with it. Of course, knowing these two, they'd make it a game and go further than needed but who says that's a problem? :D They both got some nasty ass thoughts but i love them because same, Tut, same.
and you and Teddy with these "ass itching/crawling" phrases will be the death of me lmfaoooo
Author's Response:
They just need to throw down already. Lmao. But that's coming. They have to battle their demons. Let's see who gives in first. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2015 02:11 pm Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
Omg these two and their denial.... They want each other so bad it's not even funny!!!! I don't think (as much as Michael wants people including himself to believe) that he cares enough about Nye to jump his friends about how they treat her. Just another little clue that he needs to drop her. It just ain't there no more.
And Fenty doesn't stand a chance!
More soon!! <3
Author's Response:
They both sailing on that river girl. All up in Egypt sailing on the Nile. I think Michael wants to believe he's trying when he does stick up for Nye but he knows damn well she's a bitch. So many reasons having him hold on to something he knew was and is dying. <333
Date: Aug 11, 2015 09:28 am Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
Did you think Michael should have sent Di home for her little stunt? Nope
Do you think he's too laxed about how his friends treat his fiancé? Maybe just a little. But like he said she treats them like nothing. Therefore he should expect them to feel some top of way about her
Where do you think Pen and Fenty stand after tonight? I think Pen is so worked up she might just go ahead and give Fenty some anyway.
Great chapter. Thanks!!
Author's Response:
It was on Michael that he dared Di. She was only playing the game so he can't be too mad.
Short of getting rid of everyone Nye chooses to treat badly I don't think he can stop anyone from being mad at how she treats them. Nye just needs to stop being a bitch. Lol.
As for if Fenty will ever get some from Pen again. Let's see what the next day brings.<333
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2015 04:17 am Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
It was michaels fault lol it was a dare so he really shouldnt have said anything to her. Di is so cool on this one. I love this story already.
Author's Response:
Right?!? It was all on him for daring Di to call somebody. She played the game. Lol. Di is the best in this. Hope you enjoy more!! ;) <333
Date: Aug 10, 2015 11:05 pm Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
All I know is when Pen decides to bless Michael with the draws, his entire understanding will be fucked up. He already losing fucks to give about Nye tired ass, and once he gets some of Pen's goods, his fucks will be fully GONE. Pen shouldn't be too hard on Fenty for laughing. Take her frustrations out on him and his peen until Michael's conceited ass has earned it. Diana wasn't wrong at all for calling Bye, fuck that bitch. Michael made the dare. He knows damn well he don't still want that girl, idk why he's playing himself. Furthermore, I like the fact that Fenty makes him PRESSED! Yassss, that gives me life. Lol. He's finally admitted to himself what we already knew. He wants Pen but she holds the cards on if and when he can have some.
Author's Response:
Michael is all kinds of Pressed that Pen brought Fenty with her and that he's getting to sample what he could only dream of. Pens poon will surely bring some insight to his thoughts on Nye. Pen holds all the cards. Let's see which one she plays next. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2015 10:50 pm Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
Okay part two. Let’s hope this one makes the cut!
First of all, the crew together like that cracked me up. It reminded me of being in the cafeteria in school, and everyone at the table or your section in particular, was cracking jokes and roasting each other. It reminds me of that! Just seeing all of them together. I’m a sucker for groups of friends like that! Well, you know I am lmao But this dude did not just call her Grandma.
Yeah, that’ll definitely make her give up the draws. Okay, I know that’d be me cuz he’s so damn ugh! I love him.
Diana is my favorite, and I’ve said it before lmaoo She don’t care about all the commotion going on at the table. She’s a little too busy making her girl squirm. Though I think we should get the gf some acting classes. She can’t be out here giving it away when they’re all together. Poor thing. Diana is just THAT good. Speaking of Di, she called the muppet baby. I can’t believe this. I’M DEAD!
But yeah, Michael finally admitted it. He wants the draws. He wants to snatch em up and collect.
Mike doesn’t seem to care about his friends saying stuff about the girl. I mean, if he gave half a damn he would shut them all down. But I don’t hear him sayin nothing. He’s speaking AIR. You don’t hear air unless it’s blowing hard. That’s the keyword here: hard. Which is he for Pen. That’s what this chapter is. Hard. Rename it, now!
Okay I’m kidding. But like Michael, I can’t wait for tomorrow either. It’s about to be on. SOMEBODY GON DIE. Well, in the paint world, they die. Great update, mama! Can’t wait for tomorrow
Author's Response:
I knew I had to make Diana dynamite in this story. Lord knows in Inked she had lost the entire plot. Lol. She's laid back and open this time around and I like that. As for Michael he's spoken out for Nye in the past but just how much can he say if she keeps treating peor like shit you know? She gets what she gives and Michael has come to terms with that now I think. It's up to Nue to fix that bridge. It was Ren who called Nye a muppet. Lol. They all do tho. That's the running joke with everybody. I can't wait for tomorrow either. <333
Date: Aug 10, 2015 10:39 pm Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
I had the best review and my internet goofed up on me. Now I gotta remember everything i said!
Author's Response:
I hate when that happens!!!! :( <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2015 10:08 pm Title: Tell The Truth...If You Dare
Lol. After Di doing that, I fell in love with her even more. She a real G. But I don't think Mike should send her home because of it. She was wrong for calling Nye but he made the dare so.... He can't really blame her or get mad.
As for how the way his peeps treat Nye, I think he dislikes it but then again just don't really care cause she treats them the exact same way. It's 50/50 on both teams for me here.
Whoo. Pen and Fenty.... hmmm. Pen is gonna hold out on the sweet pwussy and torture his ass probably just cause he laughed. As for where they stand... idk. They just not gonna be doing the do as much like they normally do since Pen is banning it from him, lol.
Oh and let me get on Michael real quick. His ass is finally coming to terms that he wants Pen beautiful ass so damn bad. About. Effing. Time! Everybody, they mamas and the Lord almighty knew that. And Pen wants him too. She can quit with the lil games. Fenty won't be upholding that pooka poon for long. Hell, he ain't even tonight. Mike gone get that reaaal sooon. ;)
More soon girl. I'm ready for what's next now.
Author's Response:
I loved that Di did that. Lmao. Now Nye will stop ordering her to her lattes. No turning back now for that. I think Nye gets what she gives and everyone has the right to react to her the way they do. Michael realizes that I think so not much he can say really.
Hes finally admitted it to himself. He wants her. Now let's see if he gets her. <333