Date: Oct 11, 2015 12:18 pm Title: Gound Zero
Pfft. I see NY is borrowing from my beloved Cali lingo. We can't even say "hella" anymore because the rest of the country has ruined it :(
Author's Response:
Lol Nahhhhhh "like" is bonofied NY too. It's bicoastal I guess you can say then. My friend is in his 50's, from Mount Vernon. All his friends talk like that. It's regional I think.
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2015 10:04 am Title: Request De-Nyed...
Nye is sneaky and greedy as hell. Acting like Michael needed to "compromise." Didn't he compromise by essentially getting her a gig on that show? No one would be interested in her otherwise.
Interesting twist with Fenty. Of course that hug marks a change with Michael's demeanor. As soon as a woman seems interested in another guy....
Author's Response:
This whole show is for her. Michael is the reason she's even in there. She's successful as a stylist but she wants the kind of fame Michael has. The need has grown over the years and is coming to a bit of a head now.
Lol as for Fenty he'll get his chance this go round. But for how long?!?!? Do do do do do do do do. Lol yup as soon as the woman catches the fancy of another dude others get up in arms. Especially when seeing it up lose and personal. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 08:22 pm Title: Muppet Fakes And Bathroom Breaks...
"Basically" and "like" are legit common words to use. You can have a legit convo that is basically like, "basically" and "like" without any semblance of difficulty. Stop hatin' :P
Ooh - I like that Diana is different in this version. I wasn't huge on the crazy-in-love-stalker-thing. This is a nice twist.
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooooooo. NY lingo is chock full of "like" and "basically". Truth be told "like" is like a punctuation. Lmao. I have a friend that literally and when I say literally I'm mean every other word he says is "like". Shit gets intense. Lol.
Diana is awesome in this one and very close to Michael. No insane crazy stalker in this one. I tried to make it as far away from the original as possible but using the people we know.<333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 08:12 pm Title: Under My Skin...I'm Under Yours...
Damn, he fell for her fast. I hate when guys are immature like that - it's like they're back to being 8 and pushing a girl just because they like her. His ass needs to mature some. And thanks for the context on Nye...still, when a girl is on a show for celebrity gfs? Ditch her. She's doing him a favor and showing him her true colors. He's an idiot.
Author's Response:
He did fall fast. His school ground tactics are so common with guys. It's annoying. His regression is only in this area thank goodness. He is finally seeing her true colors and this show will show him the bigger picture. There's much contention around it. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 08:03 pm Title: The Train To Destiny...
LOL at using her brain damage as an excuse for her parapraxes. Well, if it was a tumor that impacted the orbitofrontal PFC, it could be true! Shoot, I see it a lot.
WTF is Michael doing with a woman who acts like that? Shit, there are hot women who don't need to try that hard. A short and almost see-through dress is a bit much.
I like how Pen isn't as cool and composed in this one. That she has a crush on MJ makes it feel more realistic.
Author's Response:
Yup it's the same kind of tumor from the last story. The one in the PFC near the sinuses. So she's aware it did affect her some. Lol she's going to run with it tho. The dress wasn't completely see through. Just the top part. Lol at least in my head it was. Pen is a bit more clumsy and cute in this one. an awkward duck if you will. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 07:51 pm Title: Gound Zero
Interesting start! I'm in.
Oh, and his middle name was just "Joe" not "Joseph" if what Jermaine wrote is correct.
Author's Response:
Awe welcome to the story!! There is such a huge debate about his Middle name. His death certificate and some other legal documents says Joesph some of his family say the same and some say Joe. It's like a mystery. Lol. I suppose he used both maybe? <333
Date: Oct 08, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Forms Of Communication
Damn that escalated quickly!!! Lol chile I can't wait to see how shit will play out now. He done got some of her good good. How sprung is he about to become now lol. This is going to change everything. Michael needs to chuck the deuces to Nye. And since Pen is a rebel and the single one in this equation, I can see her still kicking it with other men and whatnot too. Will be interesting to see how Michael handles all this now.
Author's Response:
It blinded even the people involved Lmaooo. Shit certainly is heating up now and like you said this changes everything. Let's see if How they handle it. You know Michael is a jealous one and Pen might play the field who knows. We'll find out more about her coming next. Michael is a jealous one. Heck he was jealous of Fenty and he hadn't even tasted the foods yet. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2015 04:44 am Title: Forms Of Communication
DAAAAAAMMM Michael let the girl get in the door!!! Holy shit I think that was the hottest Mike&Pen sex scene I've ever read!! PROPS, girl. Michael couldn't even get his pants off fast enough lol smdh. I'm glad he finally got that drink of water because his thirst was REAL!!!
Pen- Those eyes could get me pregnant LMAO!!! Ain't the truth for real! I think Michael has babies all over this world he didn't know about lol Just that stare knockin girls up!
Goodbye Nye! Shouldn't nobody feel guilty over your ass Mike or Pen.
As far as the morning after goes Michael better not pull some asshole BS. Or I will be so MAD!!!! lol
Creepy Internet love meteor shower!
Author's Response:
I'm sure Michael has a plethora of eye babies in the world. Man that dudes eyes are like magic gemeralds. They got their own sperm and everything. So fucking intense. I was kind of worried the lovin would have been a bore so I'm glad you liked it!!! We will see just how much guilt comes from both their impulsiveness. They've been thinking about this for a while and now it's reality. You won't be mad I can tell you that much.
Extinction Level Event intensity of Creepy Internet love!!(beat that!!!!!!) lmaooooooo. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2015 01:36 am Title: Forms Of Communication
I'm glad I waited til I can see straight to read this. Other than that i woulda been half asleep and lusting over them both. THE TALK HAPPENED
They TALKED
Well, it finally happened and I can't wait to see what's gonna go down after this. Dude couldn't even wait til she got in the door.
Understandable. He wanted her, and he got her.
I think he could be feeling guilty. Who knows. I think part of him is like, fuck it, Ima just do it. Then I think a tiny part of him is still thinking he's gonna marry Nye the science bitch.
Pen don't want ol dude, obviously. She left his ass while she went to talk to Mike. Got TALKED down too. I mean, idk. Sound like someone who cares? Well, okay the Nye part. Um, I think she does care. She's not exactly some heartless person you know?
Some wild shit might happen in the morning. Sexual or just some drama. I smell the tension though. That's what I smell right now!
More soon please <33333333
Author's Response:
They especially Michael used their tongues a lot so that's talking right. "Let me hear your body talk you body talk..."*Olivia Newton John voice.
Now im in a singing mood and I made up a song. "Bitch Nye the science lie...bitch bitch bitch." Lmaooooooooo I was dead in the water when I saw you write that. He wanted Pen and he got her. There had been too much sexual tension surging between the two of them. Four or so months worth. Now let see if the spark died or if it gets more intense. That's definitely not bacon you're smelling so you might me right. But are you? To do do do to do do do. The twilight zone!! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2015 08:20 pm Title: Forms Of Communication
Oh My Gosh, I was not expecting that! But that was sexy af, I'm glad they finally got all their sexual fustrations out lol. Pen stop worrying about Nye, Like I understand you wanna know where you stand but Nye is such a bitch and a faker that you definitely shoudn't be worried. Then again I know Michael would probably end up doing some stupid shit to make me mad lol.
Author's Response:
I bet no one was. Not even the characters in the story. Lmaooooo. Pen had not even finished knocking and Michael had his tongue in her mouth. Sheesh. Lol. Pen does care no matter how she dispises Nye for who she is. Let's see if either of them run or does something stupid. Guilt makes people starnge so let's see! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2015 07:45 pm Title: Forms Of Communication
Damn Mike. You don't waste no time huh, niqqa?!??????? ;)
Shiiiid, I don't blame him. Pen is fine as the fuck. Wooo jesus!! Lemme staaahhhp...
So Mike got some of the pink poony coon huh? Yes indeed.
Imo, I think he does feel guilty because he's engaged but he doesn't seem happy but after all, he's hurting Nye in the process although I think she got some dirt on her ass herself. As for Pen, she's guilty because he's engaged and blah blah.Well, i think she cares but then again she doesn't. She been wanted Mike since day one and vice versa. Mutual wanton here.
When morning comes, whoo, maybe something may go down again or they may act like nothing me be happened.
More soon girl :)
Author's Response:
He wasted not even a second after op ringing that door. Lol.
I think he does feel a little guilt but it's not consuming him like he would have thought it would. Maybe after the night is over it will affect him more. As for Pen she doesn't like Nye but she does care or she wouldn't have brought her up at the end. Now we'll just have to wait and see. Let's see if they act like nothing happened. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2015 07:34 pm Title: Forms Of Communication
He was on a mission to Heaven! And nothing was gon stop him, i know thats right Mike! Poor pen done got attacked before she could get into yhe door. But hell im mad also because she got some good dick! Didnt even take his pants off and gave it like a pro. Dude got skills.
I wonder when miss high is gonna find out. Mmmmmhm. Drama. Dun dun dun!
Author's Response:
I would give the left nut of all male relatives to have Michael attack me at the door like that. Girl!! Lmaooo. Anyway the drama is coming trust!! <333
Date: Sep 19, 2015 04:59 am Title: K.I.S.S.I.N.G
Chile she going to his room to "talk", lmao yeah ok. And Im not that surprised that she ran, I'm actually kinda glad she did. Pen really is the game changer because she's in his head. And not just the one in his draws. And she hasn't made it easy for him. I just wanna slap him because Nye is NOT the woman for him, and he makes that obvious every time he speaks of her and thinks of her. He probably thinks he lusts Pen but he'll soon realize it's more than that. Lust will eventually fade.. He stays pressed. Lol. Chileeee this is about to be a mess. We gon see how much "talking" transpires in his room.
Author's Response:
Exactly he keeps questioning his feelings for Nye but there's no doubt how he feels about Pen. She's in his head like you said. Now this talk is about to go down. Lol we'll see. The drama has yet to start girl!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 09:50 pm Title: K.I.S.S.I.N.G
I knew she'd run away after the kiss. Hell I don't blame her. I would have jumped Mike's bones foreal foreal. Lol, jk.
So Di know what's up huh. Mike asking for Pen number was another give away once again. Well, she doesn't know about the kiss.... yet. But I'm positive she will soon.
Hmmm, Mike know damn well they ain't about to do know talking. Gotpeople effed up with that lie.
More soon.
Author's Response:
Lol you did say that she would run. And she sure did. She was a bit overwhelmed because she did like it so much. We'll see how the "talk" goes. Lol. -<333
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 07:45 pm Title: K.I.S.S.I.N.G
L.M.A.O!!!! Pickin' lint out of her hair... Boiii! He thinks he's so slick!! And then the imaginary spider webs LOL!!! Ridiculous.
Shaggy from Scooby Doo!!! I'm so dead!! Like every line I read I'm going one more foot under. That kiss left Michael so THIRSTY!!!!!!!!! He's the King of Thirst right now.
"Dr. Obvious" LOL!!! I can't!! But then aww... him getting all vulnerable with her on the phone... and she was feeling the same way too!!!
Let's see how this 'just talking' meet up works out for them.
MORE SOON!!!!! <3<3
I feel better now.
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo. He thought he was too smooth for school. But I'm sure ole boy saw them kissing. Lmaooo. The guy does remind me of a tatted up Shaggy lmaoooooo. Michael is terrible. He had to be thirsty all that damn sweating he was doing. Loosing all that liquid. I love the dynamic him and Di have. There like siblings in a way and it's hilarious. Yes let's see how this "talk" goes. ;) <333