[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2015 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 15: You're worth The Trouble
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2015 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 14: Just To Make You Happy
I'm so scared something bad is going to happen to Michael before he can get out of the street life. I hope not 😬. I also wonder how Patrick is going to handle Kira's pregnancy news. I hope he doesn't leave her. But then again, if he stays and Jules finds out that's his baby and not Patrick's, ish is just going to get hotter! More soon.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2015 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 8: Honor
So many cliffhangers.
Btw - I love it when you put up chapters in regular font like this. It's easier on the eyes. Ditto for the spacing from last chapter - loved it.
Michael needs to get his deal together if he thinks he's going to be a good influence on a kid. That starts with watching his language around Honor
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2015 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 6: Windows of OF My Eyes
This is crazy suspenseful! I just want Jules gone. Shoo.
And Michael. No dude. No. Just...no. and then going to the girl who has lost both parents and asking her to go outside with you in public? Nope. Keep it inside.
Author's Response:
Jules does the most doesn't he? Lol. Michael just wants Kai around every minute that he can get her smh poor Kai .. Ha
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2015 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 5: Fools Gold?
"I'm just playing the game like how you played me." I turn and walk away leaving him on his ass.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2015 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Sorry You're Not My Kind Of Girl
Damn, Michael opened up to her quick. How did he not notice her all these years at the same school?
Kai has fallen hard for Michael. She's definitely a sucker for any kind of nurturing...which makes sense as she's rather starved for it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2015 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1: Well Look Who It Is
Great start!
Author's Response:
Thank you ! Hope you enjoy it :)
Date: Jul 06, 2015 09:52 am Title: Chapter 13: Love is Love
Sounds like love to me. I love that you update so frequently. Keep it up girl! I love Honor. He kind of reminds me of my nephew who is also seven and just as adorable. More soon :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2015 12:11 am Title: Chapter 12: Love After War
THAT WAS AMAZNG!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
:) stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2015 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 12: Love After War
This story really has my attention. I love your characters dialogue. It makes everything so realistic. This was a very nice chapter. I hope Kai and Michael continue to hang in there. Looking forward to more 😊
Author's Response:
They will have more challenges in their relationship , I believe they'll make it :) thanks for reading !! I'm really appreciative
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2015 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 11: Oh BROTHER!
OMG!!!! SHE HAD AN UNCLE??!!! THAY WAS QUITE UNEXPECTED...PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE:):):):):)
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2015 10:07 am Title: Chapter 10: Lord Be A Fence
PLZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE:):):):):):):)
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2015 09:30 am Title: Chapter 9: Trust me
Plot twist!!!
Date: Jun 26, 2015 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 7: Doesn't Really Matter At All
Yes. Yessssssssssssssss. Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss. This happened!!!!!!!! The ship has sailed!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 7: Doesn't Really Matter At All
This story is awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Love you guys! Keep reading :')