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Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2015 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 20

It was so nice things went well wth Syd's dad. 



Author's Response:

It was nice! ;) Thanks for reading!



Author's Response:

It was nice! ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2015 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 19

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2015 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 19

AND COMMENCE the make up sex. This is adorrrrable!!! Loveeeee that he didnt want 2 be nice to her mom because she said mean things about her dad, and he thought that hurt Syd. Honestly he does have a point why should they welcome her mom back into their lives so easily since she was so quick to reject them as a couple. I was anticipating another HOT sex scene. Lovvve this! 



Author's Response:

It is adorable!! Michael might felt bad for Syd. Sorry that there was no hot sex scene, I just wanted them to make up with a kiss! Thanks for reading it!



Author's Response:

It is adorable!! Michael felt bad for Syd. Sorry that there was no hot sex scene, I just wanted them to make up with a kiss! Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2015 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 18

I love that theyre inyo hot sex in public XD that went well;) he didnt get mobbed, she didnt get attacked. They just cant keep their hands off of each other. XD finally! Syds mom has accepted them!



Author's Response:

Well they didn't have sex in the dressing room; they almost did but Haley stopped them before they could! But yes, they are into that! It did go really well! They can't keep their hands off each other! ;) Yes, finally her mom accepts them! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2015 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 18

great that syds mom is gonna accept their relationship great 2 chapters looking forard to reading more of this amazing hot story 



Author's Response:

It is great! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2015 10:57 am Title: Chapter 17

oohh, they ahould go public and they are some animals



Author's Response:

They should and they are animals! ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2015 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

😁😁😁😁😁<<< my face 

Michael was being the cutest comforting boyfriend ever though



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Yes he was! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2015 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 8

I don't like Michael talking to another woman either. I don't blame her for getting jealous. And it's good they had a good time:)



Author's Response:

She gets jealous very easily. It's nice Syd introduced her best friend to Michael. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2015 01:47 am Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad she kicked him too Lmaooo Michael's big mouth!

but did he go on a date with that woman?



Author's Response:

She had to kick him!! Michael does have a big mouth. ;) He did go on a date with that woman but I didn't write it because it was not much. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 17

He is just the best boyfriend ever! As long as she knows what shes getting into by going public then cool:) they have the best dirty talk and cant keep their hands off each other XD. Love this as always esp the HOT sex



Author's Response:

He is the best boyfriend ever! She does know what she's getting into. They do have the best dirty talk and they can't keep their hands off each other!! ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2015 10:08 am Title: Chapter 16

First off HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊 i just turned 20 a couple months ago too:) hope you had an amazing bday! Love that she and Michael keep making out and getting caught. Love the songs she chose to perform! Those are somw of my favorites! Their dirty talk 2 each other is soo hot. Awww hes proud of her!! Does she want to be a cover artist or does she want to write her own songs? Either one is really cool! No i dont think they should go public she will lose her privacy, get stalked by the paparazzi, have awful tabloids written about her, his fans might get jealous and attack her, and shell get all these people who will try to get close to her so they can get to Michael. On the up side they cud be together in the public eye ok i cant think of anymore 



Author's Response:

Thanks, it was yesterday but thanks!! On Labor Day I'm having a birthday dinner with my family. It is funny when they do get caught and their dirty talk is hot! ;) I love those songs too; out of the three I love "Dangerous." He's always proud of her; he loves her very much. She wants to be a cover artist for his songs. All the reasons you said on why they shouldn't go public are really good. They would be cute together in the public eye too. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 16

ooh now they have to come out to the public great chapter looking forward to another amazing chapter to this amazing story



Author's Response:

Thanks girl, I missed you! Review chapter 31 of my story 'Neighbors Becoming Lovers.'

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 15

This legit the CUTEST thing ever!! #relationshipgoals he's an amazzzzing boyfriend! Love that he got her signed with a record label and pretty much gave her everything she could ever wantXD the FEELS R REAL. The ring he gave is GORGEOUS. Love that its a promise ring too. Itd b cool if u did a prequel of them in London for the This is it concerts



Author's Response:

It is cute isn't it?! He is an amazing boyfriend and he's even more amazing that he got her a record label. When I saw that ring I was like, I'm using that one! I'm not sure yet if I'll do a prequel yet. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2015 12:18 am Title: Chapter 14

Yep he is going to publish it. Its too good not to be shown to anyone. That was soooooo romantic. And i usually hate cheesy romantic stuff but THAT was awesome! #relationshipgoals 



Author's Response:

You are completely right!! He wants everybody to hear her voice! It was romantic when they sung together! I loved writing that part!! 😊😊

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2015 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 13

Makeup sex is the bomb! That was awesome:) loved how he couldnt concentrate on the meeting because of her XD



Author's Response:

It is the bomb!! ;) He had to think about her; he felt bad for not telling her. Thanks for the reading it!

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