Date: May 10, 2015 01:55 am Title: Chapter 3- Saturday Night Update: 05/09/2015
For goodness sakes can Mike keep it in his damn pants!!! I don't blame Cindy this cheating shit is getting real old real fast. God help them...
Author's Response:
That's why MJ needed that a* Tiger Wooded. 😂
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2015 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 3- Saturday Night Update: 05/09/2015
WOW! I loved this chapter. Do you think Cindy was angry with Mchael? I guess so! I will give one to Michael, he was trying to stay calm and not fight back with Cindy. The guards were hilarious. Watching Cindy and Michael fighting like they were at the movies even eating popcorn. I'm still laughing.
On another note I hope you keep the two married. Perhaps Michael goes for sex therapy. That could be really funny.
Author's Response:
Lol! I think you read my mind. I'm. Glad you enjoyed it. I can imagine those fools. Lol
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2015 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 3- Friday Night Update: 05/08/2015
Damn Michael, really? Typical man, Cindy should leave his ass or is she? Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you and once again, sorry for the delete. I thought I could really edit a comment. I think Michael is a smooth criminal.
Date: May 07, 2015 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 3- UPDATE Wednesday Night: 05/06/2015
Just caught up on all the one's I missed. All I have to say is I love this story and I hope they figure this work thing out.
Author's Response:
Glad you caught up. I always look forward to your reviews. 😊 The drama is about to unfold soon.
Date: May 04, 2015 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 2- (Part 18-19) Short Update: Mon Night 05/04/2015
This story seems like it can be good from the summary but I really think you should change everything from being in caps lock to regular. Its like you're screaming at anyone who reads your summary, haha.
Author's Response:
LOL! You got a point, but I had to be dramatic, because the story is dramatic. Sort of imagine those infomercials such as Oxi Clean, Rotflol! The main summary/ synopsis is right aftwerwards.
Date: May 02, 2015 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 2- (Part 5-8) UPDATE! Friday Night: May 01, 2015
Damn Mike needs some help.
Author's Response:
I guess he does. He walking around like a time bomb right about now. Update coming in a few minutes.
Date: May 01, 2015 06:08 am Title: Chapter 2- NEW!!! Thursday Night Update: 04/30/2015
That escalated so quickly. Damn lol.
Author's Response:
That temper, tho' Lol!
Date: Apr 30, 2015 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1 LAST (Parts 15-18) "NEW" UPDATE Wed. Night 4/29/2015
Glad they enjoyed their honeymoon. Loved the update .
Author's Response:
Glad you did. Thank you. Chapter 2 starts tonight. Woop Woop!
Date: Apr 29, 2015 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
Uh-oh Mike knows!!! He finna tear her ass up. Lmao
Date: Apr 28, 2015 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
Hey do you know you can make separate chapters for each update? If you do that it will bump you to the top of the threads. Right now its not showing you updated the story just that you made edits.
Author's Response:
Oh no..., I just write update in the Title. I thought chapter was for the next chapter. Tomorrow, I believe Chp 2 starts. I'm still getting use to this site, and thank you for the info. Hope you liked last night's update. :-)
Date: Apr 28, 2015 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
Lol anytime is a good time for me. I'm so hype about you writing again.
Author's Response:
Heck, you got me excited about doing this new chapter, literally. Well, let's see the s* unfold tonight. You know these two are dramatic.
Date: Apr 28, 2015 10:07 am Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
Lmao at the public for tripping out about the boys.
Author's Response:
Lol! Sorry about the playlist, though. I can't wait to update tonight. What's a good time to Update?
Date: Apr 27, 2015 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
Just the THOUGHT of Michael sporting a salt and peppered goatee ( I can just see it!) is enough to keep me interested.
Author's Response:
Awe..., thank you. I think he would've been so nice looking withone in this day in age. As long as you can stand a bold, agressive, sexual and dramatic episodes..., this story we'll have your attention. Thank you for reading. :-) I'll update later on. I am trying to upload a playlist somewhere for this evenings update.
Date: Apr 27, 2015 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
You still got it girl. Loved the update. Can't wait to see what you have planned for Mike and Cindy.
Author's Response:
HaHa! Thx...! Let's just say mature Michael is more bolder, sexier, aggressive and can still up with Father Time. :-)
Date: Apr 27, 2015 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
Havent even read it but i saw that title and got so excited. HEY SIS!!!
Author's Response:
OMG! I just almost cried when I seen your name!!! Sis, I thought about you the other day. I was like I wonder how she's doing? OMG! It's been years.... I haven't written since 2012, but i'm back. Now you know, it's about to be some crazy shit going down. LOL! Getting ready to add a cover photo for the story, that I just designed.