[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2015 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
Omg!!!!! I remember reading this on the official MJ site years ago! I'm so glad you found your way to MJFiction!
Author's Response:
Hey, there! Me too... Well this is starting from where it left out. Definitely, new explosive drama. I hope you enjoy it as you will see that the characters have matured. Glad to have you.
Date: Jun 05, 2015 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 8 NEW Friday Night Update: 6/5/2015
I definitely liked their moment in the studio lounge. I love them together!
Author's Response:
Thank you... 😆
Date: Jun 04, 2015 06:15 pm Title: End of Chapter 7 Thursday Night: 6/4/2015
Lol looks like Cindy was the one ready to pop off not Mike. That hoe better chill out with her assumptions.
Author's Response:
Cindy popped all the way off. Poor Cindy couldn't even bury her "otherside" Lol! These hoes gonna learn; that's two beatdowns under Cindy's belt. MJ and now Charmaine. You know she waiting on Edith's mom to come sideways. 😂 Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2015 05:55 pm Title: End of Chapter 7 Thursday Night: 6/4/2015
OMG! What a fight. Cindy diving over the table was pure hilarious. The whole fight was hilarious and when Michael stopped it, I'm still laughing.
It would be great to see Cindy and Michael have twin girls maybe three girls.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the great review and input. Twins? Wow..., that would be a challenge and full house. I appreciate your feedback sincerely. #gracious #staytuned
Date: Jun 03, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 7-Wednesday Night Update: 06/3/2015
P.S Bread can't hold water for nothing. That dude just letting lose all the business.
Author's Response:
Probably, why MJ won Cindy over. Beard seems quit whiney in my opinion.
Date: Jun 03, 2015 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 7-Wednesday Night Update: 06/3/2015
I knew them fools were engaged at some point!!! Bread need gon head and let it go. The past is the past. I'm proud of Mike for being understanding and apologizing it shows great growth in him. I know him and Cindy are gonna make it past this. I fear Bread is going to try Cindy up and Mike is gon have to knock his ass out.
Author's Response:
I see your itching for a long awaited ass whooping for Beard. 😂 Mike has definitely become understanding over the years. All those counseling sessions with Rev AL Green in the past, must've worked wonders. Lol!
Date: Jun 02, 2015 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 7-Tuesday Night Update: 06/2/2015
And here I thought the blow up would be between Mike and Bread not Mike and Cindy.
Author's Response:
We must ease up to the biggest moment. Lol!
Date: Jun 01, 2015 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 7- Monday Night Update: 06/1/2015
Bread better quick trying to show out before Mike has to set his ass straight.
Date: May 31, 2015 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 7- Sundday Night Update: 05/31/2015
Clifton is an ass but he is kinda right Mike needs to understand that there are men after Cindy just like women after him. All I know is Mike got him some serious muscle now and he will beat Bread's ass if he try Cindy again. Cindy better stay clear of that dude.
Author's Response:
Idk what's gotten into MJ, but he definitely in his Mr. T mode and he ain't taking no mess. Thanks for your review, sis. 😆
Author's Response:
Idk what's gotten into MJ, but he definitely in his Mr. T mode and he ain't taking no mess. Thanks for your review, sis. 😆
Date: May 30, 2015 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 7- Saturday Night Update: 05/30/2015
I totally support another DNA test. I'm glad Mike and Cindy are talking and are on the same page.
Date: May 29, 2015 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 7 NEW- Friday Night: 05/29/2015
Mike needs to ease up on his tone a little and Cindy need to give this man a baby
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2015 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 6- Thursday Night Update: 5/28/2015
Damn and more damn.
Someone is going to have lots of trouble walking.
LOVED the chapter.
Author's Response:
😂😂😂😂 Glad you enjoyed... I think Mike ate the wrong tray of brownies.
Date: May 28, 2015 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 6- Thursday Night Update: 5/28/2015
Just damn...😩😍😳
Author's Response:
You alright? Lol! 😂 You tired too? 😕👏😂
Date: May 27, 2015 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 Wednesday Night 05/27/2015
😳😍😩 Mike will have you forgetting yo religion dancing like that.
Author's Response:
😂 at your emoticons. Yes, he will. I'm tweaking the next update, hoping it's not too far out there. I was writing and imagining how he danced in Blood On the dance floor, so, we can just slow those moves down. Had this been real life, I think folks would pass out. Lol!
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2015 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 6 Wednesday Night 05/27/2015
OH WOW.
Author's Response:
*crossing fingers* Hoping that's a good wow. Lol! Thank you for the review. 😍