[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2015 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 10 Thursday Night Update: 6/18/2015
I think its not Mike's baby and they are trying to hold off confirming it. I like how Cindy set the world straight about what happened it was very gangsta.
Author's Response:
Hey, sis...misses ya! Hope all is well. Haha, you're right about gangsta. I'm still fighting with myself on Edith. As a writer, I am trapped. I'm getting great story plots from you guys, but my mind isn't making an effort to choose. Lol! Thanks for the review and rating. *smooches*
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2015 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 10 Thursday Night Update: 6/18/2015
Gotta love Cindy, Right to the point.Love her.
Ths is really weirded about the DNA test. Don't think the baby is Michael's. Maybe the actual father works in the lab.
This may be way out there-but what if Edith was actually Cindy and Michael's baby. Some how (perhaps when Cindy had a miscarriage or Pap test) Michael's sperm (haven't thought this out)l did the medical stuff and then implanted it into the so called baby mama.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review and rating. :-)
I actually like that twist..., I am still working it all together as far as Edith is concerned. I think these upcoming updates maybe focused on just showing MJ and Cindy as a unit, a team with the children.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2015 11:42 pm Title: End of Chapter 9- Monday Night Update: 6/15/2015
Lmao I think Harvard opened Mike's eyes about Beard. That little boy is too smart. I think Cindy needs to accept that Beard ain't coming back no time soon. I think if Cindy chills out with the projects "They" will leave her be:
Author's Response:
I thnk "they may as well, too." Harvard is definitely the ring leader of alertness. Lol! Btw, thank you very much for the review and rating. *smooches*
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2015 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 9- Sunday Night Update: 6/14/2015
I had feeling when she ordered that nasty ass food. Lol. I think Mike was right for canceling the service they just need a new agency cause Beard can not gaurd her anymore. I thinj Cindy needs to shorten her schedule a little. She needs to have maybe just a few projects going at once not a dozen.
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2015 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 9- Saturday Night Update: 6/13/2015
I just love how Mike puts Cindy in check. I think Beard just need to lay low until the heat blow over on this video thats about to go public because I'm sure Mike won't care about hiding it. After he just need to be gaurding someone else.
Date: Jun 12, 2015 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 9- Friday Night Update: 06/12/2015
Man oh man oh man!!!! 😁 The moment I have been waiting for and it was more than worth the wait. I can't believe Beard was pulling on Cindy like he her hubsand. That dude must have lost his mind. But bruh 😩...I knew MJ would put in work 👏🏽. Beard got his ass HANDLED!!! Cindy unfortunately bout to get her ass handled too. *prays for her vagina* Dark side Mike was indeed a little unnerving but I respect it.
Author's Response:
😂😂😂 Chile, why Beard tried it; wasn't he big shit talking? . Mike done left this dude ego right on the floor. Next update, I don't know what to write for Beard. That was an embarrassing ass whooping. I'll leave it at Cindy and MJ for now, because this is a mess. You already know what's coming for Cindy. Angry, husband, it's been months, adrenalin pumping, oh boy! MJ dat dude. Nikki Minaj scared, Ciara like wtf? Lmao! Steve Harvey ain't no good for instigating. Gotta give it up for Tito, though.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2015 07:22 pm Title: NEW Chapter 9 Thursday Night Update: 6/11/2015
Harvard's exchange with Cindy was right on point. You can tell what he's learned from each parent.
Princeton's interaction with Cindy was so heart felt. Cindy might have to rework all her schedule to spend more time with her children.
Cindy might have to rework all her schedule to spend more time with her children.
Beard may be full of himself. He might not be aware how muscular Michael. Beard could be in for a surprise, Michael could be evenly matched with Beard
Author's Response:
You're right... I think a schedule change is in the works. Cindy loves her boys and MJ is about tired of her absence and with Beard constantly being around, it's about to go down! *insider*
I believe you have Beard figured out. I think he is underestimating MJ's strength as a man, his muscle physically and his power as a business man. I can't wait to give you tomorrow's update. Btw, I enjoy your reviews as well. They give me life!
Thank you for your reviews as always. Loved it! 😍
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2015 06:39 pm Title: NEW Chapter 9 Thursday Night Update: 6/11/2015
That little dude Harvard be speaking the truth. Lol. I don't think Mike was over the top at all. He doesn't like or trust Beard therefore he shouldn't be in that house without him present for whatever reason. I think Beard is ready to snap but Mike is ready too. All I gotta say about the comedy scene is Cindy know how Mike is she was having too much fun with Beard. Mike wasn't fucking with it.
Author's Response:
Rotflol! I swear I await your reviews. You give me life! 😂 I think they ready... Wait for it... #staytuned Thanks so much for the review.
Date: Jun 10, 2015 06:38 pm Title: End of Chapter 8- Wednesday Night Update: 6/10/2015
I felt like it was 50% Beard and 50% him just being the alpha male he is. I had a feeling that Mike was going to the show. Harvard is a prodigy forsure. That bite mark comment is hilarious.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2015 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 8- Tuesday Night Update: 6/9/2015
Nice chapter. That Michael!
Author's Response:
Haha! Lol..., gotta love him! Thank you for your review. 👍😆
Date: Jun 09, 2015 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 8- Tuesday Night Update: 6/9/2015
Awww the long-distance-relationship-struggle
Author's Response:
I think that's a bomber for them, but they're strong.
Date: Jun 08, 2015 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 8- Monday Night Update: 6/8/2015
Lol I thought he was about to flip. I think Beard can I mean I'm sure he will try some shit on the low. I think Cindy could be preggo I understand her uncertainty about it because of her history of miscarriage but I think it would be cool. I loved there last exchange of words.
Author's Response:
After I wrote it and re-read it I was like oh s*. Lol! I think Beard will too.
Date: Jun 07, 2015 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 8- Sunday Night Update: 6/7/2015
I think Beard is sneaky and I don't trust him being around Cindy. Mike's and Cindy's mini spat was hilarious. And you already know my vote I say she not be Mike's her mom's a hoe.
Author's Response:
Lol! Just no trust in Beard. 😂
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2015 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 8- Sunday Night Update: 6/7/2015
Loved the chapter. Michael and Cindy's interview with Ellen was great.
i don't think Edith should be Mchael's daughter. The father should be the guy that was in the waiting rm. wth Michael when Edith's mother was in labour. The baby's parents should be legally charged, found guilty and sent to prison of a very very long time.(for what they did to Michael.)
If Michael's name in on the birth certificate than in California law he is the legal father.(I think this is correct.) Since the parents are in prison, the mother has lost her parental rights (the father too). Michael and Cindy should legally adopt Edith,
Author's Response:
Awe..., thank you for your great review and input. 😆 I was getting writer's block, but this has definitely helped. Appreciate the feedback.
Date: Jun 06, 2015 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 8- Saturday Night Update: 06/6/2015
I agree Cindy definitely needs to slow down. I don't agree with women giving up careers to be wives but I definitely think she should make more time to be a wife and mother. I'm just waiting for Mike to handle Beard.
Author's Response:
LOL! Ha-Ha..., i'm building up to the perfect moment. The thing is Beard is a sweat heart in his own little way. I gotta get some junk stirred up to make it a showdown for the ages; you know how I do. *naughty grin*