[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2015 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 12 Saturday Night Update: 07/11/2015
OMG I loved this chaapter. The kids are so cute and halarious. The boys going on about Michael's age and their mother could be Michael's daughter and them his grand kids. The references Harvard and Princeton made about Billie Jean
Princeton wanting to know about the pretty girls in the videos and did h marry them too like he did their mommy. I can't pick out any part that was my favorite. It was all great. Princton may turn out to be more like Michael. Only time will tell.
Author's Response:
Omg! I am glad you enjoyed. I agree that Princeton may have inherited the musical gene. I wonder what the new edition wil be like once he arrives and becomes of age. Thank you very much for your review and rating. I enjoy reading your feedback as well. #staytuned
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2015 11:59 am Title: New Chapter 12- Friday Night Update: 07/10/2015
Lmao Mike need to hurry up and handle his wife. She is going through it. I think Beard may be slipping but Mike will fix that real quick.
Author's Response:
Haha! You got that right! Thank you for your review and rating. It's always a joy i look forward too! Thanks for enjoying the story. It compells me to continue to write it. a86;
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2015 02:12 am Title: End of Chapter 11 Thursday Night Update: 07/09/2015
Oh gosh what did Beard do? I think I'm missing it. Harvard is hilarious. Lmao he always in the business. I think the visit will start out rough and passionate and end up soft. I just hope he just end up with vitamins this time. Lol.
Author's Response:
Your review has me lmao real hard. I'm assuming Beard had a flashback, but he needs to have a flash of that elevator again, before speaking. 😂 You're right about Harvard. That little boy there is something else. Gar as the start off, there maybe a little uneasy gesture going on at 1st in the beginning of the 1st read. *insider* About those vitamins, yep, let's hope so, after all Cindy is pregnant. We can't have MJ jack hammering again. Lol! I hope the Island Man, gets it right this time.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2015 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 11-Wednesday Night Update : 7/08/2015
OMG Cindy is hilarious. She doesn't care what she says to Michael with Beard right there I can hardly wait until Michael gets there.
Great chapter, girl
Author's Response:
Lol! Glad you enjoyed it. You're right about that. 😂 Those two are a mess. I don't know if Daddy Jackson can handle Preggo Cindy. Those hormones out of control. I suggest Michael get to flying real quick. Thank you for your review and rating. 😍
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2015 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 11-Wednesday Night Update : 7/08/2015
Dang Cindy hormones ain't no joke. Lmao.
Author's Response:
I know that's right. She lighting fire under MJ to get there. 😂 He better make his way to Europe. Lmao!
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2015 11:48 am Title: Chapter 11 Tuesday Night Update : 07 / 07/ 2015
Nah I think Cindy is truly over Beard even though there's still some tension I don't think she wants to hurt Mike like that. I think Mike trust Beard to protect Cindy anything else nah.
Author's Response:
Loved the review. Thanks for your outtake and review. 😍 New Update Available.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2015 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 11 Monday Night Update : 07 / 06/ 2015
I'm glad they are all trying to work as a team
Author's Response:
Lol. .., i don't know if MJ can handle it though. Thanks, sis for the review and rating.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2015 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 11 Monday Night Update : 07 / 06/ 2015
Great chapter. Cindy needs to know more about Michael's past. I think Steve might have something to do with them.
Author's Response:
Seems like a good guessguess a86; Thx, so much for the review and rating. Still building plots.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2015 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 11 Saturday Night Update : 07 / 04 / 2015
Beard is always there to save the day. I think Mike may be right. Loved the moment with the baby's first movements.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback and rating sis. 😙
Date: Jul 03, 2015 06:51 pm Title: NEW CHAPTER 11 Friday Night Update : 07 / 03 / 2015
Aww man I was hoping for a girl. I cant believe "They" are back. I'm so tired of them.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2015 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 10 -Tuesday Night Update : 6/30/2015
Glad you back!!! I missed you! And Cindy and Mike!
Author's Response:
I missed ya'll too. Being without my laptop, sucks. ..
Date: Jun 26, 2015 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)
Wondering if you are ok? Your updates are always regular.
Author's Response:
I'm ok. Thank you for your concern. Very busy, Pc issues and working on more plot. Family out of town and children broke my workstation.
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2015 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 10 Tuesday Night Update: 6/23/2015
I definitely think Mike is feeling some type of way about Cindy not working with him. Excited to see their day out. Lol I feel like Mike helped himself more than anything.
Author's Response:
😂😂😂 I didn't think about that, but you got a point. He slick as hell. Lmao!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2015 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 10 Sunday Night Update: 6/21/2015
Mike is definitely sprung. Lol. I think she may be considering it. I dont think so it shouldn't take away too much time. I'm definitely shocked and proud of Mike for helping out Beard.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and rating sis. You got me lol at your (Sprung) comment sis. Update: coming up in a few minutes.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2015 05:07 am Title: Chapter 10 Friday Night Update: 6/19/2015
I think Cindy book sound really good. Murder mysteries are my favorite genre. I think the movie is a good idea especially for one of their first collaborations since they got married. I don't believe they will become strictly business because they want to be around eachother so much that working gives them a chance to spend a lot of time together without taking time away from work. I definitely excepted that from Beard he's in love with Cindy. My favorite part is definitely seeing them intimate like this also.
Author's Response:
Thx sis for the review and rating. I think you have a valid point about them working together ; though, I'm a little nervous about MJ and Cindy's perfectionist attitudes. Lol!