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Date: Aug 13, 2015 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1- (Parts 1-5)

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Date: Aug 09, 2015 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 15- Sunday Night Update: 8/9/2015

I'm glad Cindy is finally puttinf her foot down about his temper. It really is getting outta control he needs to chill out and talk things out with her instead of blowing up. He does treat her like a child a lot when it comes to these things. 



Author's Response:

Dang, sis... you were thinking that Cindy should put her foot down too? Well, Mike about to be in for a rude awakening, because he's out of control with this temper mess. 1st on their honeymoon and snippets that will reveal perhaps in the next chapter. Thank you for your review and rating.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2015 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 15- Sunday Night Update: 8/9/2015

Thank the lord Cindy is putting her foot down , Michael needed that stern talking to and her aunt to put it into perspective for her , Cindy knew she was feeling this way all along and she finally is voicing her frustration , that's my baby you go Cindy 



Author's Response:

I knew Cindy would make you proud. LOL! Thanks for your review. 

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Date: Aug 09, 2015 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 15 NEW Saturday Night UPDATE: 8/8/2015

I think MJ's reaction as a hubsand is totally justified. I definitely expected MJ to come out of character after seeing the cover. I think Mike maybe a little undercover but that's understandable I think he needs just trust Cindy the same way he expects her to trust him. I think this interview will help somewhat. 



Author's Response:

Undercover..., ooh what you mean? LOL! Great review sis and thanks for the rating. There should be an update tonight. *Hint* Cindy is about fed up already with his ways though. :-/

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Date: Aug 07, 2015 09:39 pm Title: New Chapter 15- Friday Night Update: 8/7/2015

Loved it as always.



Author's Response:

Thank you... Sorry, I don't know what happene to the video. I followed the instructions. :-( Hope, you ready for the interview, sis. :-) Thanks for your review and rating. 

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Date: Aug 03, 2015 08:03 pm Title: End of Chapter 14- Monday Night Update: 08/03/2015

As a fan who has read the whole triology this has got me tripping out a little. Cindy was definitely pimping and Mike thought he was being the ultimate player. Her she was 2 boyfriends and a side piece.



Author's Response:

I know right. I thought I'd revisit the old days and throw in this twist. The fact that MJ knew about all of this is what gets me. No wonder he was all nutty acting, back them. Lmao! 😂 Thank u for the review and rating. Lord, MJ got his ass handed to him. Who knew? Not Ms. innocent Cindy. Lol! And..., he heard an entire "session" just, oh s*! 

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2015 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 14- Sunday Night Update: 08/2/2015

I'm glad Mike cancelled the room f**k that b***h. She too disrepair to be paying for her somewhere to stay. I can't believe Mike was THAT over protective though. 



Author's Response:

Yep, he definitely was. Chile look what he reveals tonight. Dude definitely, knew a little too much. Thank you for the review sis. :-)

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2015 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 14- Sunday Night Update: 08/2/2015

I loved that Michael cancelled the room. Auntie Jessie Has been so awful to Michael.  It was great when Michael closed the door in Jessie's face.

I am really looking forward to going down memory lane. I was only able to read a small part of SM II and nothing else.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, the story parts were all over the place. I've found mostbofbthe story, but to try and piece it altogether would be a lot of work; so, I figured this would be best. So far, throughout this story I've already told how they first started dating and so forth. I'm glad u were able to find a some of the old stuff. Grrr...Haha, thank you for your review and rating. 😍



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, the story parts were all over the place. I've found mostbofbthe story, but to try and piece it altogether would be a lot of work; so, I figured this would be best. So far, throughout this story I've already told how they first started dating and so forth. I'm glad u were able to find a some of the old stuff. Grrr...Haha, thank you for your review and rating. 😍

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2015 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 14- Sunday Night Update: 08/2/2015

- that was clever of him but they are bother wrong and every guy she slept with he hired or some shit wtf was that shot that's just weird and wrong but I bet Cindy don't care , she'll just make up another excuse to his reasoning , this story frustrates me so much Lol , everyone's mad at her aunt but Michael is the same way it's just that he's her husband that gives him a pass , smh so ridiculous but I love the story keep it going 



Author's Response:

You have me laughing so hard right now. Stapling moments will definitely irritate your soul with all the foolishness. I don't know who reality this would be, because this is too much drama. LOL! Mike use to hire people to protect her according to tonight's episode; the oh shit factor comes in with she didn't know the people arounf her were all someone MJ had placed to help her. This is why next update, I am going to take a revisit to the old days. I have been reading the stories before this one to figure out how t incorporate it and give my new readers an understanding od how all this mess came about. Throughout, so far, I've done lots of revisiting, but now I am going to add in plots that weren't written but precisely happened at those moments between 2009-2012, I have room to work with a time lapse of 2013 to now. :-) Thank you so much for your review. I love reading them and seeing where I can go next, I bet Aunt Jessie got a thang for the King of Pop; after all Mike has a lot of swag and magnetism. 

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Date: Aug 01, 2015 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 14- Saturday Night Update: 08/1/2015

Im very proud of how Cindy handled this interview. I definitely think it should help but you never know with the media. I think Mike should do an interview and then they should end all this crap with a power couple interview. I love how Cindy handled her questions.



Author's Response:

Wow... Not only are you reading the story, you're reading my mind. That is in the works. That is going to be awesome being that Mike doesn't open up about his personal life , but it's going to be good for his fans to see him as a man and not an illusion. The doting dad and business man he is a film director. They may not be ready for a talkative Mike. Thanks so much for your review and rating. 😍

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Date: Jul 31, 2015 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 14- Friday Night Update: 07/31/2015

Dang I'm shocked Cindy cheated with someone else but it's definitely espected. I'm shocked Mike knew and was somewhat chill about it. Aunt Jessie need to go asap. 



Author's Response:

Yep, I figured i'd throw in a little curve ball. Back when I wrote the original stories on the other site, I tried to keep Cindy as the innocent bystander, but to make it more realistic, this time around, I'm taking on a more current view of how things played out now that I can write more freely and explore in this story better. Mike was chilled alright, sex almost sent Cindette to the ER a couple of times. I don't know if you recall the other versions, but I think back in Stapling Moments 1 and 2, Cindy would withold sex from him in which she revealed in the counseling sessions with Rev Al Green back then that he was too rough; so, now here we are seeing it indebt. Cindette was creeping around too and not with Beard (ooh...) all the time. She definitely wasn't going to be the girl crying over Mike, so, she got hers while he got his. Yep, I'd say he was a little chilled too, because MJ back in the other stories was horrible with blowing up, but I guess he knew he was f*ng up too, so, it wasn't much for him to say. However, I don't think I would've guessed he had a blood test ran on Princeton. Now we see where Harvard gets his secret agency attitude from. LOL! Dang, both parents are calculating and spies to say the least. Btw, loved your outtake on tonight's episode of drama and thank you for the rating and review. :-)

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2015 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 14- Friday Night Update: 07/31/2015

Auntie Jessie needs to be dropped down a pick or two. She doesn't know everything. It wouldn't surprise me if she had baby Edith and her mother somewhere in hiding. 



Author's Response:

Oh wow.... LOL!!!! Dang, I didn't think of that. It'd definitely make for an unsuspected twist. Aunt Jessie is too messy. I don't like that she isn't taking their kids into consideration while she spreads this rumor to the press, but people will always be about money. Mike and Cindy definitely had a rocky past from Stapling Moments 1-3, so, I am hoping I am recapturing enough moments in SM4 so that everyone can understand why MJ loves hard on Cindy and she on him. I can't wait for Cindy to have their baby and get those hormones back in place, because I am pretty sure Mrs. Jackson will hand everyone their ass on a platter, until then she's an emotional wreck and Mike is just dealing. Thank you so much for your review and rating. I always look forward to see your name pop up in the reviews section. :-)

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Date: Jul 29, 2015 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 14- Wednesday Night Update: 07/29/2015

Just wow I can't believe Aunt Jessie would go that far. I think Cindy and Mike need to have another couple interview and clear all this shit up. Cause clearly their teams are not trying to save their relationship just their money.



Author's Response:

You're right and it is  obvious that money is the motive.  Aunt Jessie is definitely feeling herself too much. Loved the review and rating. #staytuned

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 14- Wednesday Night Update: 07/29/2015

Omgoodness this is so crazy and her aunt went a little to far but hey Michael has been controlling her for too damn long and it's not like her family doesn't have her best interest they are just showing it in a different way , Cindy really needs to stand up to her man about something's to get a piece of mind 



Author's Response:

Interesting.... I am loving your view points. a86; Thank you for your review. I am looking forward to them. 

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Date: Jul 28, 2015 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 14- Tuesday Night Update: 07/28/2015

Its sucks that really will need to open up way more than necessary about their relationship just to shut all this crap down. I think Cindy is just emotional and stressed. They definitely need to stand as a unit to get through this.



Author's Response:

I so...AGREE! However, wait for it... Look was brewing in the pot of drama tonight. Thank you for your review and wonderful rating. I always look forward to your outlook.    

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