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Reviewer: JacksonArmy Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2021 07:30 am Title: Flashback 12 - Part I

Hi, new reader. I love your story. I hope you are well. Continue it pls.  

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2021 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh shoot! It's long now. I'll be binging this this week...

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2021 09:20 am Title: Chapter 15

Sad.



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:(

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2021 08:30 am Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for the update!

Wow. I wish I could say I'm surprised, but I'm not. Michael had been showing his ass, and he finally got what he was looking for. Now,the ball is in his court.

Author's Response:

Hello !

Extactly what you said, now time to see if Michael can put his money where his mouth is. Now that Kalliope said she'd sign the papers, there's no turning back for her!

The new chapter is here, enjoy ;)

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2021 01:46 pm Title: Flashback 11

I'm hoping the story is continued/updated.

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The new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2021 09:18 am Title: Flashback 11

lovely

Reviewer: kangmaru28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2021 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Was interested to read this after seeing the title. Seems promising, will continue to read it

Author's Response:

Hello! Thank you for reading! It's actually the continuation to another story. You can find the complete series, it's called 'Lovers Rock' :)

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2020 09:23 am Title: Chapter 14

Oh wow, I finally found the time to leave a feedback/ review sort of....
First and foremost: Thank YOu capital for returning to that story and for continuing with it. I have missed it a whole lot and I’m so very thankful and glad that you decided to return trip. I still have not given up on Kalliope and Michael and the romantic fool that I am is honestly hoping with all my heart, that Michael will not get involved with someone else but decide to stay with his wife, because they have history and once used to have great chemistry and it should mean something. But only if Kali decides to be a better wife. She has some improving to do for sure and there still is some room for improvement for sure. She oughta open up her pretty mouth and have an honest heart to heart but she should definitely make sure to lay it all out on the table and to open her heart and to confess that she really loves him and that she’s willing to work and become a better wife if he does his share. 🙏🏿🤷🏽‍♀️Please continue with his story and have a wonderful rest of the year and a beautiful and healthy 2021. Much love,

Author's Response:

Hello Gigi! Sorry for the late answer !

I really want to finish of all the stories I have published. I don't know when but I will :)

Yup, Kalliope and Michael are still struggling to communicate, three kids and a marriage later! They both have some improving to do and I'm not sure this is not the end of Kalliope and Michael :)

Thank you again for still reading and reviewing it !

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2020 06:42 pm Title: Flashback 10

Great chapter!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: vankess Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2020 06:12 am Title: Chapter 13

I haven't been on this site in a long time, but seeing this story and little white lies being updated makes me want to came back daily again!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you :) I just couldn't leave without finishing them :)

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2020 03:10 am Title: Chapter 13

I really hope they find their way back to each other...their love is too beautiful to let go of.

This chapter really hit home...know exactly how Michael and Kay are feeling. Being in love alone and yearning for affection is one of the loneliest feelings in the world. Being willing to do anything to salvage the little love you have left is exhausting. Like you can't win damned if you do, damned if you don't.
I am rooting for them.

Loved this chapter

Author's Response:

Hey girl :)

True, they both really love each other and hopefully they find a way to come back to each other!

They are both so helpless, it's sad :(

Thank you for the comment and the new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2020 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter!



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Thank you :)

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 10:26 pm Title: Flashback 9

Well, I am so glad you returned to writing this story. And thank you for answering my response. Gosh I have not returned to your story in- has it been two years already??!? Time flies. Thank you for your kind words and thank you on congratulating me on my marriage. We going on stronger than ever. It’s been 20 years this July and it magically gets better with every year.
This flashback was really depressing; to learn about Mike’s point of view. Was he really that worried back then? Now, after re-reading the previous chapter and now the flashback, tethered is hardly any more hope left for these two to end up dropping divorce and ripping the papers to shreds. I honestly don’t have any idea what is going to happen with these two. Does Michael already have a new love interest?
I have no clue.

Author's Response:

Hello :)

Oh wow! 20 years? Congratulations again :)!

Thank you again. I re-read some of my stories as well and it reminded me of why I love MJF so much, I really want to finish the Lovers Rock series. After the end of War of The Hearts, I really want to write about Michael and Kalliope in 2020 dealing with their teenagers and life in general.

The flashbacks were the beginning of Michael realizing that maybe they rushed into their marriage and should have taken the time to get to know each other. Even though Michael says he did not marry her just so that she could be Jade's Mom and give him more children, it was a big part and he kind of brushed off everything else, including Kalliope's want to go back to work.

What is sure is that Kalliope needed a wake up call and she had it with the divorce papers

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 04:06 pm Title: Flashback 9

I loved it! Great update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2020 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 12

Please update!!



Author's Response:

The new chapter is here!

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