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Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ooo what's gonna happen??!! This is getting good!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like it so far! I wonder how long mike could resist...



Author's Response: I don't know but he's unraveling!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

Just because you have blue balls Michael, you don't have to take it on everybody! Damn! Lmaoooo 



Author's Response: OKAY! All in his feelings cause HE got a crush, lol!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 11:50 am Title: Chapter 2

Oooooo....somebody got caught being a creeper! Lmaoo

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 08:24 am Title: Chapter 3

Very good! Keep going!



Author's Response: Aww, thanks love!

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2015 09:32 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh boy! Michael just got caught!



Author's Response: Hmmmm...Or has he not? LoL!

Reviewer: JayRenea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is amazing, I'm excited for the update

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Well, this is a a very good start and can't wait to read the next part even If I prefer michael Jackson as famous in stories... love invicible era..lol.



Author's Response: Well I'm certainly glad you're enjoying my non famous version of MJ so far.

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Love it, continue!!



Author's Response: Thank you, so much, love.

Reviewer: Roadrunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Hot damn. This is gonna be fun to read lol. You did so good so far and I wonder how they're going to find out they have feelings for each other. 



Author's Response: Thank you. I've written three different versions of this story and have made them all into books so there's no telling which direction my mind will take me in this one. This is more of a rushed version and not as detailed so far but hopefully once I get use to writing in this forum I'll really put forth a more quality effort. I'm just giving this site a test run for now. But I'm so glad you like what I've presented thus far.

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