Date: Apr 24, 2015 10:51 am Title: Chapter 9
Yay they kissed!! Continue!
Author's Response: Lol!
Date: Apr 24, 2015 10:43 am Title: Chapter 9
I love this story so far!
Author's Response: Thank you, so much!
Date: Apr 24, 2015 10:21 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh, that made my stomach just explode with flutterbies (butterflies). Although there are some grammatical errors in your writing, you do know how to convey the sexual tension to your readers. Also, I'm deleting this account soon and making a new one. I think I was gonna call it WhisperingSeduction, so look out for me. :) but anyway, what's Mike gonna do about the lipstick stains and turning up with Carsten?
Author's Response: Grammatical errors, lol?! I write for a living! I sell books! Lots of books! My style of writing may differ from yours but flawed? I disagree!
Date: Apr 23, 2015 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
It's. About. To. Go. Down!!!
Date: Apr 23, 2015 09:19 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm just waitin'. Bein' patient. Just over here, wantin' to see a make out session on the back seat... Mmm tasty... I can kinda just imagine it - Michael looks around to make sure nobody's watching, crawls into the back seat and lead over her shoulder, tells her to get in the back with him, she climbs into the back and sits beside him, he places his hand on her waist/hip and slowly leans in, pecks her lips, starting off slow, then it gets hotter, they lock the doors, he's hovering over her, she's laying under him on the seat, he pulls her body against his, still hovering above the seat, boner getting hard to control, some light grinding, a full-on "I so wanna fuck you right now" makeout session.
Date: Apr 23, 2015 08:36 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh my god, they finally admitted there feelings for each other!! Continue!!
Date: Apr 23, 2015 05:22 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that's something about Corey! Continue!
Date: Apr 23, 2015 12:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Just read the past two chapters. Teyana is something else, and I guess crushes on older men run in the family... Great job!
Date: Apr 22, 2015 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
Violet? Who the hell is this ho? Lmaooo Michael wanted Car to stay in the house..all alone with him
Author's Response: LoL! I had to ask myself that same question. Who's Violet and why has she come, lol?!
Date: Apr 22, 2015 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ooo Carsten is jealous of violet! Continue!
Author's Response: Jealous AND determined to keep her away from HER Michael!
Date: Apr 21, 2015 11:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Mm mm mm! They both want each other! Both got the hots for each other. And they are both worry bugs
Date: Apr 21, 2015 10:54 am Title: Chapter 5
Keep going please! It's getting good!
Date: Apr 20, 2015 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
I just read the entire story so far. The tension is very thick with this one-I love it!
Date: Apr 20, 2015 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm loving this story so far, I wonder how much "help" Carsten is gonna recieve. ;)
Date: Apr 20, 2015 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved the chapter! Michael and Carsten were checking each other out! Car was about to draw him out lol! Michael met as well help the girl. Lmaooo him and his damn hard on