Date: Aug 05, 2015 07:14 pm Title: Mystery man/ Goodbye/ The call
its always something. People. Can never be satisfied with their chosen wife/husband. They have to mess it up. They don't care that they are hurting more than that one other person. They are hurtingg an entire family!
Author's Response:
I know it's really terrible and it's bad for Tae because Malcolm is always trying to hop up on her and tell her what she should be doing when he isn't any better.
Date: Aug 05, 2015 07:01 pm Title: I love you?/ Tonight
Good job!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: Aug 05, 2015 06:50 pm Title: Beach Date/ Lower than dirt
I like it. It is good that they stopped.
Author's Response:
Yeah, thanks. I just wish that Michael had handled it a bit differently, he didn't have to be so cold lol
Date: Aug 05, 2015 06:37 pm Title: Convo/ Cover, Cover
You are doing a good job! I like the way you continue to develop the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you <3
Date: Aug 05, 2015 06:27 pm Title: Late Afternoons/ My mind's only on one thing
Good job!
Date: Aug 05, 2015 01:57 pm Title: Family Drama/ 3 more days of summer/ My future husband
Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you ma'am!
Date: Aug 05, 2015 01:28 pm Title: Introductions/ 3 more days of summer
Most stories start off slow. Especially when a young person talks about moving to a new place and going to a new or different school. I like the effort that you are making to develop your story into a good, and interesting product. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you , so much for your support!!!
Date: May 03, 2015 09:27 pm Title: Introductions/ 3 more days of summer
Aww thanks so much really means a lot u wrote that I only got 1person who didn't want 2 read my story and it was horrible which is ok 2 but I really and truly appreciate all my reviews bc 2 me my reviews r like my fans and I love them dearly from the bottom of my heart and they mean a lot 2 me in a lot of ways. I'm so glad that ppl enjoy reading my story and hope many more will want 2 read it as well. It is ok if it took u some time 2 respond back I'm juz glad u did wen u could. Its awesome 2 hear from u btw. I watched the movie ghosts wit mj and once again wen I thought I knew mj he blew me away with his mesmerizing talent. I luv mj he is such the most amazing person with the most raw talent ever. There truly will never be another ever. Hope 2 hear back from u soon! Thanks again 4 the words of love, keep writing and spreading love the best way u know how.
Author's Response:
First off it's great to hear from you too and you're right there definitely won't be another like him. No problem by the way, I enjoy encouraging people. I hope all is well and that your story is going great.
Date: Apr 28, 2015 02:20 am Title: I love you?/ Tonight
Yes ma'am just read it I luv the pic she is really pretty I like the story even more
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was just wondering what you thought of it. I think it's my best so far.
Date: Apr 26, 2015 09:20 pm Title: Introductions/ 3 more days of summer
Thankx a great deal keep up the good work plz
Author's Response:
No problem. And I definitely will, thank you. Have you read chapter 6 yet?
Date: Apr 23, 2015 10:08 pm Title: Introductions/ 3 more days of summer
same here! I agree with you 100% I feel the same about the stories I have written but I am glad that when ppl do finally get around to reading them, and they like them, that's the main reason why I write in the first place. My reviews are like fans, I respect everyone and their opinion. Good to hear your story is going well, you will do fine.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate that, Good luck with yours as well!
Date: Apr 18, 2015 09:44 pm Title: Introductions/ 3 more days of summer
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.