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Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2011 10:56 pm Title: Georgia

Hey babe, i love your storie, butttt; i really dont like the turn it took. I think its lame that michael gets to get away with all the ish he did and start claiming her as his wife and stuff. I want her to remeber because i dont think things like that should be taken lightly I know its just a story haha but i read it and get so sucked up in it xD i wonder what he'll do this time to make her stop acting so crude & fiesty. Sorry if i offended you in anyway, i just had to express myself. nevertheless, i love this story and cant wait for the next part

Author's Response:

I truly appreciate your comment but I just ask for a tad more patience. And don't worry, I'm not offended. I understand what you're saying. But don't worry, good always prevails :)

Thanks sooooo much for reading again. Btw, I can't wait for the next parts to your fantasies on youtube!

Peace and Love!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2011 10:35 pm Title: Georgia

WOW THAT WAS GOOD!!!! I DIDNT THINK THAT THIS WAS ALL A DREAM!!!!! PLZZZ UPDATE TONIGHT!!!

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2011 09:25 pm Title: The Sand Man

Ah there he is. The sweet Michael we all know and love. I know he'll change after this. :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2011 08:55 pm Title: The Sand Man

Wow okay so she was in a coma and came back but now she lost her memory? and now michael feels bad? Hes honestly an asshole. He feels bad after she almost dies and after all the shit he put her through. Wow okay, if i was her i would kill him. I hope she remembers all the stuff just so she can remember what a piece of ish michael is and leave him.

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2011 08:03 pm Title: Forever

Wow. I'm speechless.

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2011 07:40 pm Title: Forever

Oh gosh, shes dead! I think michael will be happy now shesh

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 11:39 pm Title: Lights Out

NEXT!!!!!

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 11:00 pm Title: Lights Out

Dang. Still speechless.

Reviewer: AtMJsHouse Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 10:58 pm Title: Together Again

WOW it seems like Michael can't bring himself to kill Gorgia. He just keeps hitting her lol I cant believe he made her do that. (tear) I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 10:12 pm Title: Lights Out

Im guessing he shot her to. The intensity of this story is beyond belief, love it

Author's Response:

Thanks so much :)

 

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 09:06 pm Title: The Deed

Oh gosh, I cant believe he made her kill two people. Hes a pussy for not doing it himself. Wow just imagine how she feels right now :( just wow

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 08:54 pm Title: The Deed

OH MY GOSH! SHE KILLED THEM!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 08:35 pm Title: It's Time

NEXT!!!

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 07:40 pm Title: It's Time

Damn he's crazy!



Author's Response:

lol yeah he is :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2011 07:27 pm Title: It's Time

Oh yeahh update & lord im guessing he wants her to shoot jermaine & stacy. Oh gosh

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