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Reviewer: Lonelyheart22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2021 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Damn! That was one hot chapter!

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 10:41 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh My Gosh!!!! Hottest threesome ever... Fuck Jay... Vixen should stay with Ángel and Mike

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2015 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

AMAZINGGGGG!!

I HOPE THERE'S A SEQUEL FOR THE LADIES' BIRTHDAYS!!

PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THESE!!! :D

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2015 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 3

This the shit I'm talking about Brie

Why end there?

What kinda?

JUst what kind?

Yo ass didn't even say the story was completed so you know what? This has to go on somehow. You never said it was completed on the thingy thing thing soooo more needs to be added or else none of this was worth it

NONE OF IT

You wasted my time and you wasted my headphones time! You can't just end there and think you can get away with it.  You know what we've hit, Brie? Do you know what we've hit?!?!

I'm calling my lawyer in the morning if you don't make this right

I'm literally sittin here like 

 

I mean, yeah it was a fantastic ride and you should write more stories but like

Cuz you ain't gettin one from me for this at all

I am angry!

 



Author's Response:

Teddy. Stop being so mean. You know what, this is payback honestly. You always treating me bad with taking forever to update your stories and other things that we've discussed. I got my lawyers too! Hmph. You will deal with this because you love me U.u 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2015 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

Fans self!!! That was Pretty Hot And Tempting!! Yeezus!!

and OH MY FUCKING Gawd at 'the Vixen' being Beyonce!!!!!! I did not see that coming at all. Well played madam!! Well played!!! I didn't figure out who Angel was and now it will bug me. Lmao. 

Great story!!!

<333



Author's Response:

Lmao thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, Tut! The Angel actually is "you" so she can be anybody you want her to be. I love stories where the main girl with michael can be envisioned in each readers own mind so I tried my best to leave her without a face to make that possible. <33

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2015 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

The 'Vixen' was Bey?! This makes it 1000 times better!!



Author's Response:

Yep! I know Michael loved her and so do I, who doesn't really, so I had to have her in there. Getting and giving some loving from the couple! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: QueenKyra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2015 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

Nicely done!  Such a sexy story, I will be reading more than once ;) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!! <3

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2015 02:44 am Title: Chapter 2

Dammmmmnnnnnnnn! I am so jealous lol you just made my night, girl! Another cold shower needed! great job!



Author's Response:

thank you honey!! lol glad I could make your night. More on the way! <3

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2015 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Michael's bed right now

I'm glad Ma bought push ups cuz I ate one while I read that. Fantastic choice on my part. Give me praises for that! Damn, you need to keep this going. I wonder if Michael and his wife are gonna let their guest star come back? Have her drop in every now and then. Or you know, just let her move in. Ima duck on out now before you come back to yell at me 

 

 



Author's Response:

you definitely get praises bby. I know you thoroughly enjoyed that push up while reading. mhm I know. Im pretty sure all three of them are catching new feelings they didnt think was possible. You ever loved someone, but then you loved someone else, but it was the exact same amount of love, and you just had so much love for them? well im sure its like that lol 

Reviewer: ForeveraMoonwalker14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2015 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm gonna need a cold shower after this

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

LORD HAVE MERCY!

This chapter made me tingle I places I didn't even know existed!

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!



Author's Response:

lmao well damn! Mission accomplished!! Glad I could help you find those hidden nooks and crannies :D I will probably update this coming week! 

Reviewer: QueenKyra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2015 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

My phone just burst into flames. 



Author's Response:

you're gonna have to get a new phone girl! More is to come! 

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2015 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can only speak in gifs so here I go

 

 



Author's Response:

lol you and your gifs! You got my husbands and my wife in there too. I see you bby! I see you!!

 

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2015 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Girl, I needs me a cold shower! Lol but mmmm mmm mmmmmm! I would never share him lol but I want more girl! Something tells me that their little party is far from over with!



Author's Response:

lmao! I'm not sure if I could share him either. It is a nice thought but when it came down to it, I don't care who she is, I'd probably be hella mad and jealous lmao. Oh no, they definitely arent near done ;) Michael's just getting started. He has allllll night!

Stay tuned ! <3

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2015 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1

WHOA! THIS WAS AMAZING.

I can't believe how much effort you put into this. INCREDIBLE!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Another update is on its way this week. Im hoping you'll like the next part ;) 

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