Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2015 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

WOW, Michael is so...mean in this chapter, lol.

I can't wait to read more!

 

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 11:29 am Title: Chapter 3

Omgomg omg! Michael ,u idiot!! Arrghhhh! Great chapter! Keep going!

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2015 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

wow that was so harsh of Michael, he have to really make it back up to Evangeline for forgivness  

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2015 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

First, I'd like to say I ADORE your writing style! You've only written two chapters so far and I am already hooked to this story like a fish on a rod. WONDERFUL JOB SO FAR!

Secondly, I believe Evan when she said she told Joseph to tell Michael. However, I don't think Joseph cared enough to relay the message to his son. Therefore, Michael's anger is justified.

I can't wait to read more! Thank you for a great story so far! :D

Author's Response:

Awe thanks so much! (:

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2015 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omgomgomgomgomg!!! I love it! You betta keep going girl! I love the flashback!

Author's Response:

thanks so much (: there will be plenty more flashbacks throughout the first several chapters to help you undertand evangeline and michaels past relationshp more