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Reviewer: GoodGirl101 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2015 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
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Date: Feb 07, 2015 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awsomeness!!!!!!!!
Meet dat Man Girl!
Author's Response:
Thank you... Lol she will...
Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2015 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1
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Date: Feb 06, 2015 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1
hey girl! chapter is a bit short and a few errors (like missing words) here and there but I can see you have lots of potential and if you keep it up I guarantee you will improve. as for the actual story itself I am intrigued. Good work for first time and please continue
Author's Response:
Thanks, I just might to edit it out but thank you I will...