Date: Mar 19, 2015 10:41 am Title: Chapter 15 (Monkey Business)
Yup Michael is a damn trip!!! Bubbles is soooo adoraable!!!!
Michael tore that ass up and I'm dying when he got on the phone!!! lmaooo he was showin off!! I loooved this chapter toooo!
Author's Response:
Girl, I also left a little treat at the end!!!!
Date: Mar 19, 2015 04:56 am Title: Chapter 14 (Someone in the Dark)
Oh no; poor Ali :-(
Date: Mar 18, 2015 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 14 (Someone in the Dark)
Jose makes me sick!!!!
Ah man who was she dreaming about?! and I'm waiting for another chapter
also I put another chapter up to kill your suspense....
Author's Response:
Girl, i read the chapter and you're still killing me lol and all i can tell you is that there is more than that when it comes to that scary dream that Alessandra had...I'm not going to lie, I teared up a bit when Michael held her like a baby. That's a man right there.
Glad you enjoying it still, girl!
Date: Mar 17, 2015 09:17 am Title: Chapter 13 (Break of Dawn)
Girrrrrrrl let me tell youuuuuuuu! Lmao hold up! Michael motor mouth ass had me dead! He kept on talking. But that smirk he did when he took out his manhood and she was shocked. Had the gold wrapper too! He kilt her body! He did! Yup! Mhm lmaoo I'm speechless now...mhm they both put it in work. I just wonder where this is going next
Author's Response:
Haha...he was going off! And we know what that golden wrapper means. Baby boy was packin lol Shit, both of them were going at it....but I still lol at how she asked him if he wanted to go again, and his expression was like you ain't gotta tell me twice lol! But don't worry girl, I got yall later on! Thanks for the review!
Date: Mar 17, 2015 04:48 am Title: Chapter 13 (Break of Dawn)
Have mercy! These two have it BAD for each other.
Author's Response:
Girl, BAD is an understatement! lol thanks for reviewing, boo, it only gets better!
Date: Mar 13, 2015 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 12 (I Can't Help It)
Continue continue please!! This story is the bomb cant wait to see what happens next! But she really should have told him about her son! That's the very first thing I would've did! I dont think Mike would have judged her because he loves kids and he would've treated him like his own for real...but hopefully it won't be a problem for them a least I hope not! But anyway next chapter pleeasse! :)
Author's Response:
Girl, I got you! Trust, you will love chapter 13!!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2015 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 12 (I Can't Help It)
YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2015 10:40 am Title: Chapter 12 (I Can't Help It)
Oh, we're getting somewhere! I just hope it's not Ali's overworked imagination again! (And she still needs to tell Michael about her son).
Date: Mar 13, 2015 08:23 am Title: Chapter 12 (I Can't Help It)
Let the love-making begin!!!
Date: Mar 13, 2015 07:27 am Title: Chapter 12 (I Can't Help It)
HAHAHA "Fuck it" lmaooooo I knew he wouldn't be able to contain hisself! Michael is soooooooo sweet!!!
"God, he is so kind, handsome, smart, charming, sexy, generous…He’s so amazing. Any woman would kill to be by his side. What’s going on?"
^^I was like what the problem is? lmaoooo thats Life material
I'm excited for the next chapter!!!
Date: Mar 11, 2015 09:03 am Title: Chapter 11 (Human Nature)
Woooooooooooah i cant wait until the next chapter. AHHHH you played Guy while she was in the car! I love Guy! then you had michael in that sexy ass outfit i was like "OH YES!'' lmaoooo it was perfect
Author's Response:
Yes, girl! I still trip when Mike is like, "Damn, I can't take it anymore, and kisses her. By the way, as I was writing that fantasy he had in the beginning! I was all in my (horny) feelings lol
Date: Mar 11, 2015 08:43 am Title: Chapter 10 (Say, Say, Say)
hold on his "Yet" killed me more than anything lmaooooooo I'm with Trish! Ali needs to stop frontin! Hmph! lmaoooo its goin down soon
Author's Response:
Girl, I couldn't agree more! Glad you loved it!
Date: Mar 10, 2015 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 11 (Human Nature)
He went for it! Yes!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, girl! And there is so much more to come...thanks for reviewing!
Date: Mar 09, 2015 05:46 am Title: Chapter 10 (Say, Say, Say)
For the quick trivia question, it was on michael Jackson's private home videos and he was taking about Neverland.
Author's Response:
Correct!
Date: Mar 09, 2015 12:15 am Title: Chapter 10 (Say, Say, Say)
Well perhaps being European I don't get this "all my nose up in your business" type of friendship, but I know I'd pull out my teeth before getting so inquisitive about my friends' sex lives. I think Tisha needs to back off Ali's business and let her grow her relationship with Michael naturally, without hangers-on.
Author's Response:
haha, well call it what you will, but Tisha's crazy but means well and Michael's friends are doing the same to that effect? It's just a little humor for the story too.