Date: Apr 02, 2016 01:08 am Title: Chapter 19 (Workin' Day and Night)
Uh oh, where my tea at! Mo catching Ali with Michael? Uh-un this is about to be fu-nny. So crazy of her to get Michael to babysit, I never saw that one coming. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
I know, Michael to the rescue! He came through on the real though! Besides, not too many kids could say that they had Michael Jackson for a babysitter!
Date: Apr 02, 2016 01:00 am Title: Chapter 18 (Much Too Soon)
Awww, she's leaving but this was cute! And kudos on the day dream. I'm just going to cross my fingers that it goes down like that. That would give me too much life lol
Author's Response:
I know...Michael and Ali with their daydreams :-) they are like mini-movies aren't they, but maybe you are onto something girl? ;-)
Date: Apr 02, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 17 (Why)
She told him! Ooooh!!!! I'm so glad now a weight can be lifted off her shoulders and her convo with Anton was beyond cute. I was like awwww lol.
It's great that Ali finally has the support she needs. Michael's right, she shouldn't have had to do it alone.
Author's Response:
I'm glad she told him too! But I also could understand her position as well as Michael's! And yes, Anton is the cutest little thing isn't he?
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2016 12:28 am Title: Chapter 16 (Just a Little Bit of You)
woah, um, dang. I'm gonna need a nice cold glass of lemonade messing with you lol. I guess Ali will have some stuff to share when she gets back. I love their little jokes, it's so cute.
Author's Response:
I know that shower scene was like...girl!
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2016 12:17 am Title: Chapter 15 (Monkey Business)
Lol this chapter was cute and the conversation with the girls had me dying. Michael had some nerve talkin' bout "No guarantees but okay" Nooo! I'm dead, where my coffin at lol. This is cool! Sorry I haven't really been able to comment like I should but I got you right now!
Author's Response:
I know...Michael had definite plans to tear that girl apart lol. Yo, his fool-o-meter broke when he said to the girls, "Over and over again!" HAAAAAAA!
Date: Mar 24, 2016 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 28 (Ride with Me)
There he goes again with these romantic getaways. Lmaoo and I missed this story too!!! I gotta restart from the beginning just for fun one day lol. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
i know...As Alessandra said, Michael is the King of Romance! Let's see what ol' boy got up his sleeve this time! Later, girl!
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2016 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1 (Who Is It?)
I think I saw this story on another board, glad to come across again! (Let me catch up real quick).
Author's Response:
Thank you love!!i try to post on many different avenues as I can! Let me know what you think so far! 😘
Date: Mar 11, 2016 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 14 (Someone in the Dark)
That's messed up but Michael was so sweet to pat her up like that. Jose better not trip like that, I'm gonna have a fit lol
Author's Response:
I know I was like Awww poor Ali and Michael being the awesome man that he is 😍 N yeah Jose better not before me u n Michael will collectively kick his ass 👊🏾 lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2016 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 13 (Break of Dawn)
Yup, he was working it. That was great, I can't believe they finally did it! But I have to applaud your writing style over all though. You hooked it up! It was so detailed and well planned, great job ma'am!!
And yes, I played the song!! Man, I love Silk and I never knew that that was one of their songs so you put me on to something. Appreciate it! And you're right it does intensify it, I was like Oh, snap! Lol. Definitely gotta add that song to my Playlist now. This chapter was too right.
Author's Response:
Thank u darlin n I love ur story as well too 😊😘 and yes I have that video on my playlist n child them sex scenes r like the most intense to write but the most fun to write! And Silk yes they had that little hidden gem like it's right up there with "Freak Me".... N they also made a montage for Michael on that one too 👌🏾 but thanks so much girl I'm so looking forward to ur reviews from here on out n I got u covered on ur story boo! Peace! c6;🏾
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2016 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 12 (I Can't Help It)
No, too hot lol. Wow, that is interesting but I definitely rolled on the floor when he said he was gonna go for a snack after all that lol I was like man, my dude so roused up, he need food to distract him lol. I enjoy the heck out of this though!!
Author's Response:
I know, man Ali's kisses must be like weed cuz Michael turned around n had the munchies lol he's a fiend lol but anyway, glad u enjoyed it as always 😊🙌🏾
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2016 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 11 (Human Nature)
Oooh, uh-un! They kissed! I'm gonna be like Michael now, I can't take it either, I have to read the next chapter ASAP!!! Lol anyway, this was cool and I love how concerned they are for each other. But on a side note, MoStay nosey!!! Like let Ali do her. K, boo? But I don't think it's fair that Ali leaves Anton on her all the time either though but I'mma give her props for picking up the slack even though she has to work lol. Great chap! Now, excuse me while I read the next one.
Author's Response:
Glad u enjoyed it babes and yes that kiss tho 😍
Date: Mar 10, 2016 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 28 (Ride with Me)
Love them
Author's Response:
I know right 😍 Lol thanks for reviewing girl!
Date: Mar 07, 2016 11:05 am Title: Chapter 10 (Say, Say, Say)
Wow, lol The friends are back at it again.
Author's Response:
i know they stay playin lol poor Michael...and Alessandra lol they never get off their cases
Date: Mar 07, 2016 10:52 am Title: Chapter 9 (We Got a Good Thing Going)
Look at them, gettin' all cuddly and stuff lol this was too cute. I wonder why she lied to him about Anton though, but I guess I can see her reasons. Bomb chapter!
Author's Response:
I know, Mike and Ali are too stinkin cute arent they lol but the sexual tension was all types of real tho! Glad you loved the chapter! And trust and believe, more and more will unfold about Anton
Date: Mar 07, 2016 10:41 am Title: Chapter 8 (Just Good Friends)
I guess she really has a thing for him lol and that was slick of him even though it was her fault. I hope she's not to embarrassed though. It's alright Ali, it was an accident girl!! Lol
Author's Response:
oh when he got her wet right? lol but Alessandra made him nervous when she snapped but actually, she was playin lol