Wauw...such good writing!! I can see it all in front of me.

Im so glad that they finally realized that it was that scumbag Larry!!!

I absolutely love this story; it has taken me through so many peaks and valleys with our protagonists. It has been really exciting to journey with Michael and Malania as they face their demons together and I love how they have grown. All that's left now is for them to find the disgusting scumbag that's Larry so he can face up to what he has done to poor Casey.
Thank you for sharing your amazing talent and I hope that you'll be able to finish up this story one day.. all the very best to you!

Honestly, I absolutely demolished this book. It was such a good read and I just couldn’t put it down.

Author you’ve done a fantastic job creating such a believable original character with flaws that you can’t help rooting for. The manner in which you create conflict is just *chef’s kiss*! It’s so difficult to consistently introduce problems that make logical sense and don’t feel unnecessary and awkward in such a long book so it truly deserves praise.

I also love how you’ve humanized Michael and how you shift perspectives between him and Malania. They both have their own challenges that don’t feel disconnected and are interesting in their own way.

I especially love the supportive relationship dynamic. Because, as mentioned, they both have a lot of mental stuff to deal with that understandably need to be prioritized and yet they manage to support each other when a crisis occurs. It’s a great example of the relationship dynamic you wish to create in real life.

The Accused is one of the best fan fictions I have ever read, and trust me, I have read MANY.

I eagerly await another update (but of course that’s up to the muse of inspiration, so take your time and don’t force It) :D

Sigh. I forgot how awesome this story was. The tension is just right. I hope Greg just blasts Larry all over the news and Daine and his wife could go public in support. I'm happy Michael doesn't feel like running. He should also tell Mal about Diane if he doesn't there will be so much contention. This was awesome! Hope all is well with you. 

Malania is a true and good friend to Michael:) Yes, he was a bit of a jerk at the beginning of the chapter, but given his chaotic state of mind, and his fear that his secret has been discovered, it is forgivable (especially because he went back to "normal", caring Michael).
And something struck me in the previous chapter - it was present in the other chapters too: Michael had become too involved in the lives of Casey and Diane, I think it was not very healthy.
It would be very nice to see Michael and Malania's adventures in town in the next chapter. I am curious if Michael will go unnoticed:)

I love how beautifully insert the flashbacks into the present time (and without notifying the reader). I feel like I am watching a movie. And even if the flashback does not seem to immediately connect to the present time presented in the same chapter, it feels like it is not random at all.
Malania has had a hard life. I loved the scene between her and her father, they seem to have a beautiful relationship.