Date: Jan 18, 2016 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 63
I'm very pleased with this chapter; it's such a nice respite from all of the high emotions. Looking forward to more!
Date: Jan 18, 2016 07:49 am Title: Chapter 63
Gosh I love it so much ! You are truly amazing !
Author's Response:
What exactly do you love so much?
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2016 06:51 am Title: Chapter 63
Lol...A little warm? Does it ease into sizzle? JK No I'm not we've come too far for me to lie to you now!! I was looking forward to chickens being choked not eaten. * slow turns with a grin.
The beach was so cute them being all cuddly and all that PDA sprinkled around.
I truley hate Samuel for what he did to Mal. Like what would drive someone to do that. I know it's about exacting power but it's so malicious. Same with Larry and what he did to little Casey. UGHHHHHHHHHH. Yes I'm declaring out right that it's that POS creep. I can't wait for the chapter that weasel gets caught. Let me get away from the sadness and rejoice with Michael that Mal doesn't have a hairy chest.
Just ease into it. *A couple dozen winks*
Here's to Michael finding out if there's hair in other places.
You're doing a great job releasing your stress and the chapter was amazing!!!
More soon!!<333
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2016 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 62
Sorry for the delay. Life is insane. Now, before I comment on the chapter itself:
She went to the Harbour Restaurant and had chicken?!? I think Malania needs an intervention. I mean, the seafood is too good to pass there. The Harbour Salad is drool worthy. Salmon = salad?
I'm beside myself. The chicken.
I like how this chapter is long, but feels short. I sat back thinking, "what a lovely 'light' chapter" only to have to click back to check the word count. So often a lot happens in a chapter in a low word count, and it feels overwhelming/unrealistic. Or a little happens in a high word count, and it feels like a yawn. Here you straddle a good length quite well: enough action, not excessively corny (or worse, a play on poetic!), and just the right amount of 'heartwarming'.
Now, I think the sign for me that something is about to go down is that Malania asked for wine. Someone is nervous! And Michael commenting about marrying her? That doesn't surprise me; at the same time, her reaction was perfect. As someone who began as a fan and has had such a bumpy ride with him, it's both time for him to start saying things like that and completely natural for her to respond with such surprise. Beautifully done, as usual.
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2016 03:08 pm Title: Prologue
Well it is lovely to see this story back again and at last malaria is comfortable to go that far with mj also forgetting about her brothers poison she is slowly moving on 👏, as well that I'm glad to see your fine as well Sky, I wish your mother a speedy recovery 💗
Author's Response:
Thanks Lorry xx
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2016 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 62
Hmmm, good food, good wine...I think it will help Malania unwinde and let go of her fears and trauma...There is always a turning point when you leave trauma behind and move on and enjoy life to the full. I think this is the moment for Malania.
Author's Response:
I feel like I should be prancing around singing Kelly Clarkson's "A Moment Like This" while they are busy doing the sex.
Date: Jan 12, 2016 04:05 am Title: Chapter 62
Yes! You're back! The chapter put a big smile on my face <3 I wish you and your mother all the best <3
Author's Response:
Thanks beautiful x
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2016 03:36 am Title: Chapter 62
I was having a fit full sleep and just decided sleep was not going to be my friend till I actually had to get up. So I'm up in here to get my fix!!!! First of all. AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH You're baaaacckkkkk. I'm cheesing like a damn Cheshire Cat. I literally smiled from beginning to end. I just love how things were settled between them. They had that renewed comfortabilty and yet it seemed so much more intimate.
Lmao at the fact he almost lost his whole shit saying vagina yet pussy came out his mouth with such ease.
Now to the shocker. YES!! She's ready and I figured she'd conceded to the thought since the trip was mentioned. I can only imagine with Michael's frustrated mind...both heads are going to be preoccupied for the rest of that meal. I love seeing them like two giddy teens on a first date. His whole life is going to fall apart when he sees her in that bathing suit. I predict an awkward boner situation.
I'm so exited you're back and I hope we don't have to wait another millennium for the next chapter. I will love you up real nice like if we can get that ASAP. Please and thank you. It's going to be so epic!!! Ugh!!!
More soon. And I mean soon. *slow turns to stare at you till your uncomfortable enough to give me what I want. <333
Author's Response:
Hahaha you crack me up.
In my experience men never want to say vagina. They can barely get it out, XD I imagine Michael would have had many names for it. I'm however a big fan of using that entire word as often as I can to make as many people as I can feel discomfort.
Hahahaha both heads. I see you.
Now, what about if she drowns when they go swimming and they'll never get to have sex?
No but really, I'm working on the next chapter. Trying to make it ... organic and not... cheesy and such.
Who am I kidding, its going to be totally cheesy.
You can stare at me all you like I'll just start singing my vagina song.
Date: Jan 11, 2016 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 62
They should consummate in the next chapter, of course! So happy to see this story back in rotation :-D
Author's Response:
Hahaha consumate. Sounds so ... clinical. Let me add this penis to this vagina....and voila.
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2016 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 62
Loved the chapter. It was nice and calm before the storm.
I'm glad your bag.
Author's Response:
lol, what type of storm are you expecting? haha maybe a giant tornado should come and ruin their plans to have sex.
or better...a sharknado.
Date: Dec 01, 2015 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 61
I have to say, I absolutely love this chapter! <3 *smiles* My favorite part of this chapter is this: So simple but so beautiful:
Baby, I love you…” he sighed contentedly, leaning over to kiss my cheek. “You know, this is just like anything, you have less experience than I do in this area, so you are asking questions, there’s nothing stupid about it… And, it’s not like one of those things you could ask just anybody about—it’s personal,” he explained, “so why couldn’t you talk about it with the guy that you’re going to potentially have all the sex in the world with!” he joked, making me burst out laughing, doing a good job at keeping the conversation light-hearted.
The fact that paying attention to this love is what should be paid attnetion too here it's not merely just the fluffy word that people throw around nowadays but I feel as though he is meaning that eternal love that a lot of people take for granted and is excruciatingly hard to find.
I also find that having such a huge deep conversation could be opened up to such a humorous moment. I can see why you were nominated and won favorite Michael, the dynamic of the personality is astounding :) I know I've been quiet however I've been reading *smiles*
Hope your well, Skywriter :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2015 09:03 am Title: Chapter 61
Curse you Voldemort!!!!!! God if he hadn't done such a number on Mal it would be smooth sailing. I'm glad they had the talk to get her fears out in the open. I hope she will be able to reconcile the difference between what it was with Voldemort and what it will be with Michael. With her brother that wasn't sex it was a means of control, domination and humiliation that had nothing at all to do with love. With Michael, I'm sure with his experience he will be gentle. Even with his giant penis.
Lmaoooo. Sorry to say Mal it wasn't just Michael who couldn't get over the Frankinstien p...penis. I was very amused by it too. So it's not just boys.
As for Petty Kat, I hope Michael sets her straight because I'm still disgusted she lied that Mal had left. Ugh. She needs a wake up call.
I'm ready ma'am so ready for the heat!!! I'm all up in that kitchen. Now that the hiatus is over let the harassment commence!! *brandishes my steel bat and plane ticket!
More soon love!! <333
Date: Oct 03, 2015 09:32 am Title: Chapter 60
Malania has been a strong girl these last chapters -mm... I wonder if she´ll have another major crisis ahead.
Michael: Yes, you have to talk to an analyst / get professional help ASAP!!!
*waits for next chapter* :-)
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2015 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 60
I'm just now catching up and good lord things have gotten out of hand!! Malania was spot on in her reaction and I'm so glad she was honest with him and didn't just baby him and promise everything will be ok. He cannot do this again!! He should have confided in his girl. I'm sure the embarrassment of crying in her should is nothing compared to the state she found him in. Smh! Why do people do stupid stuff like this?!
I totally get his heartbreak over Casey, but geez he has greater things to be worried about right now!! Im witb Malania 100% Jackson get your shit together!!
This story keeps getting better and better!!
Date: Oct 02, 2015 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 60
This chapter had me glad and sad at the same time.
Glad that mj was found and malania did the right thing calling the hospital to get mj to safety. The sad part is that Katherine still hasn't expected malania yet which she should be grateful she even did or mj would have died.
im glad mj and malania spoke it looks like that conversation was well over due for the both of them, now they have a way to move forward together!
A wonderful chapter sky <33~