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Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 10:11 am Title: Chapter 39

This moment between Malania and Kaito warms my heart d84;a039;



Author's Response:

:) until Kaito becomes a giant cock-block. haha. 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you updated! it's pity i can't add this story to my favourites! I love everything about the story! the angst took awhile  to get used to, your story is one of the stories i find here that should have 1k views and above!, i cant wait for her brother to meet michael that would be hilarous! keep writing awesome author! <3



Author's Response:

Thanks Lorry, thats a huge compliment :) you rock! 

I think angst is normal, but we rarely see it reflected in fan fics, usually things are all butterflies and rainbows where the OG cant ever see flaws in MJ or the flaws of his life arent shown up..... or the alternative is that they are in the most extreme way. I wanted to try to find middle ground.

So glad you are enjoying this :) 

x

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2015 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 38

Can't wait to see Cassie's reaction when Michael shows up, lol



Author's Response:

Cassie and Clair the dummies! 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2015 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 38

Lol this visit is going to be interesting. I didn't even think of the fact that it would be a big deal. Let's hope it doesn't cause any hoopla. I know though that things might escalate with that other Aisian girl. That's trouble waiting to happen!!

Im still here and reading. I didn't know whether or not you were really paying attention to reviews. 

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

I do pay attention to views, but I forget the numbers from one week to the next. 

Hoopla will happen a bit later :) <3

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2015 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 38

I am! Lol love your story keep up the great work:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :) 

Reviewer: wizgrl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2015 11:47 am Title: Chapter 38

Can't wait for the reunion! Poor Malania and Michael, starting to get serious then being separated must be tough. Really liking this story, anxiously awaiting the next chapter :)

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2015 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 37

I've missed this story so much! It was great seeing an update on Michael; excellent job!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2015 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 36

Seeing Malania build a friendship with Julia was so sweet. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2015 04:40 am Title: Chapter 35

I felt so bad for Mal having to adjust to the center but she needs to be there. I hope with help and time she could actually become intimate with Michael not just sex but be able to have him touch her without her flying through the roof.

Awe I'm verclempt. For a minute there you had me in Malania's shoes and I felt like that note was for me. Lol. 

Anywho you know this gets me in the feels but it's a testiment to your writing. 

More soon! <333

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2015 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 34

This made me cry; very beautifully written!

Reviewer: LiberianGirl829 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 33

Lovely chapter as always my friend! I wonder how Malania will handle her time in the facility this time. I just love seeing the character growth in both Michael and Malania. It's beautiful :) Update soon please! 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 06:00 am Title: Chapter 33

"Goodnight baby." Sigh. I don't know what it is about Mal being sentimental that gets me in the feels. I expect it from Michael I suppose but from her it's Le sigh. 

More soon! <333

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2015 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 32

"I rarely think of anyone else..." A sweet yet telling statement. I live how there need for each other has past the codependent stage. Th e genuine need the have for each other's affection and them sharing it is so touching. I hope all goes well while there away from each other though my sensibilities are telling otherwise. * bites nails. 

More soon <333



Author's Response:

Hopefully ;) <3 

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2015 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 32

This chapter was very sweet. It's cool seeing Michael bond with Malania's family 😊



Author's Response:

Thanks BJW :) 

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2015 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 32

I'm still lovin' this story so much!! I've been lacking on my commentary but I will catch up on it soon. 



Author's Response:

No worries, Ive been crap at responding to my reviews too... so, sorry! :) thanks for leaving a comment tho! <3

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