[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2015 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 60
Kathleen "Robson" can I take her last name, machine gun it, push it down a flight of stairs before drowning it in a stream outside of a nuclear plant? I'll love to make that happen soon if possible. Lmaooooo.
I'm such an asshole but I'm an asshole you get!
Also while I'm still feeling violent, and I would hate to do this to a little old lady but I want to starp Kat to a rocket Wylie Coyote style and send her on a little trip.
I'm just waiting for Michael to let her know in no uncertain terms that's she's being a catty so and so (I really wanted to say bitch but she's an elder) I'm so disappointed in her reactions to Mal.
He aksed for help!! Right on right on!!!! I felt so sad for him when he thought he wouldn't see Mal again but they're going to nail this. Love will see them through I can feel it.
More soon!!! And just so you don't hunt me down. I'm going to post SS rn. Lol. <333
Date: Sep 25, 2015 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 59
So exciting! You know how to keep up the suspense ... Please do not wat too long with the next chapter ;-)
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2015 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 59
This was sooooooooo intense. I was so on the fence whether or not to call 911. In the end I was glad she did because anything could have happened.
Kathrine makes me want to kick her. I hate to say that because she's an elder and Michael reveres her so much and generally she's such a sweet lady but here I want to knock some sense into her by tripping her in the hallway or something. Why does she have to be jealous? There's nothing but jealousy in her actions and it's sad.
I'm so glad Liz understands just how dire the situation could have gotten from seeing the scene herself. She backs Mal up and I appreciate her for that. This is going to be a media fall out I can only guess it.
First we have to deal with his recovery then this trial. It's going to be hectic. :(((
More soon... I'm side eyeing you even though I know you'll be busy. BUT this won't stop the threats ma'am!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 58
I didn't even see that you had posted this by mistake. But let me tell you...
GIRL!! You wrung out every emotion out of me with this chapter. Well I mostly raged and suffered silently but still. Wow. This was dark and beautifully executed.
Larry... Such a disgusting piece of crap. I thought he was Michael's manager. He was his bodyguard? Either way I want to hunt him down where ever his coward ass is hiding and dismantle his whole being. You got me that passionate. Lmao. But for real he needs to be found out ASAP. For Casey's sake and the sake of his own daughters. Ugh.
Poor Michael. He's going to need some kind of help after this. Rehab, counseling, something. Maybe he can see Mal's Doc.
That last part seems like he was slipping away and my throat almost closed. I hope they get him awake soon. I feel so bad he was cutting again too. It's like he went on the ultimate addiction bender. Truth is I'm mad at him for being such an idiot and bringing himself to the brink of death but sad he feels so helpless.
I need more. And SOON!!! Soon you hear me!!! <333
Author's Response:
Hahahaa thanks for pointing out that plot issue. Yeah, I am pretty sure I meant to write "manager" but security....whatever... that fat ass ain't going to protect Michael. I have a really gross image of what Larry looks like...
Rehab, counselling, its allll good.
Sorry to make your throat close.... but that'll happen again if you dont update soon. :)
Date: Sep 18, 2015 12:24 am Title: Prologue
Wow I just finally got caught up with the chapters on this story and it is a good story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. This story really pulls at your heart strings I'm telling ya Awsome job!
Date: Sep 17, 2015 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 58
This time, Michael needs the rehab. And serious psychological counseling.
Author's Response:
Poor Michael....
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2015 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 57
First I would like to say how much I love "Lovin You". It's so melodious and smooth to listen too.
"And the Weatherman said, if you're not well stay in bed." Only Michael would suggest taking medical advice from a meteorologist. Lmao.
Now for my thoughts...
I knew Mal would be freaking out. She also kept it together not spilling the secret about the pills to her brother. She made some well thought out moves gathering all those stray pills just in case.
I love Liz and the fact she was so open with Mal and accepting right off the bat. Much unlike shady ass Kat. Cats are sneaky little things so I can see the correlation. Lol. I'm glad they kept the mission to themselves.
Now all I can do is pray Michael is not a shambles when they find him. It's time to face the music. It might be cockeyed but you still have to look at it.
The ball is now in your court missy!! Sitting here waiting with my padded ankles.
More soon!!! <333
Author's Response:
LOL "only Michael woul suggest taking medical advice from a meteorologist"
hahaha like, he goes to Mal and says, "well.... ive got this burning sensation when i urinate....but dont worry, im seeing the weatherman later...."
"shady ass kat" hahaha I love that.
Michael is in shambles! Shambles!
Now I'm off to read your latestchapter!
Date: Sep 14, 2015 10:30 am Title: Prologue
Elizabeth is a wonderful person take over and help malania with finding michael, and handling katherine so well, i hope they find michael soon, another great emotional chapter Sky<3
Author's Response:
ThanksLorry :)
Date: Sep 14, 2015 10:03 am Title: Chapter 57
Elizabeth Taylor is a boss and I love her interaction with Malania.
Author's Response:
Sorry that I took so long to answer you -- I've been on vacation. Thanks for taking the time to reply :) x
[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2015 12:01 am Title: Chapter 56
Michael, you fool, you don´t solve anything with pills and alcohol. I just hope he find the strenght to fight with his addiction and go to the court and I hope that Malania will be strong enough to go through it with him.
You are amazing writer, I love how you captured Michael´s and Malania´s emotions, when I am reading this story I can vividly imagine it, it is like I´ve been watching it with my own eyes. Can´t wait for next chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review Janina :) <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 56
Michael you fool!!! *Shakes fist at sky. It's terrible what stress can force one to do when they have bad addictive habits. Ugh.
"Babyheart..." Are you trying to suffocate me with cuteness??? That's the sweetest Little pet name.
No I see your trying to take my life another way. Omg. That relationship he had with Diane must have been exhausting. I mean I'm tired and I'm only reading about it. All of it seemed like so much work. Like an actual nine to five.
You captured each and every one of those emotions impeccably!!! I even felt the vomit on my chin. Gawd Michael, my heart twists for him. Hes being stupid and destructive and I'm sure driving a knife into his relationship. Mal can't be holding up well. It's not about her right now but I'm gutted at what he's doing to himself.
Does he plan on being drugged up the whole damn time man!!!! I want to climb in here not so discreetly and administer a couple sobering slaps to the back of his head.
I understand but at the same time I don't want him to do this. Is he even thinking about how it will look if he shows up to court zonked out of his mind on pills?!?!?
I'm gearing up for the next chapters because I know they'll make this one look like a cool breeze.
Im glad you heeded my threats. Lol. I will heed yours and update in the next two days!!!
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Michael is a total dummy!
I definitely am taking your life in lots of directions; I'm good like that!
Diane is a troubled bitch. lol. She's emotionally checked out on the both of them but still expects Michael to be the everything.
Thanks for the compliments on my writing.<3I appreciate it.
He wont be drugged up all the time...just this time!
haha now... speaking of threats, UPDATE THE STORY!
Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 56
My heart is aching for Michael. Playing this scene out in my head made for incredible, albeit gut-wrenching, reading. You captured his turmoil so well!
Author's Response:
Thanks, BluJay! You're awesome :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2015 08:49 am Title: Chapter 55
Larry is smarmy disgusting twit. Ugh. He did this to that little girl and she's probably scared because either made some kind of threat to harm her or Michael or she thinks Michael knows what Larry did and can't reconcile herself to not react to the mention of his name since he was supposed to be her protector.
Can we fast forward to where the story is complete and I know everything. Lmaooo. I love this story so much!!!
Girrrllllll!!!! If you have read BEB any further you have an idea just how intense an imagination I have when it comes to Michael and sex(though he's quite crass in the begining) I know it will happen for Mal and Michael. It will have to be very tender and safe for her to let go of it all and appreciate it for what it should be when a man loves a woman.
Now when I say more soon I mean it!!! I feel we're aquainted enough for me to threaten you for chapters. lol. <333
Author's Response:
Larry is a pin dick. I can't stand him. Haha. Isnt it funny how invested we become in stories. I think he isn't connecting it to Larry because he's not really thinking that anyone that close to him could be guilty. He would think that he is a decent judge of character, so he's totally overlooking Larry. And maybe from Diane's side, Larry has already come up, but she is thinking too close; in terms of Michael.
Hahaha. I haven't gotten very far with BEB, yet. But I have to admit, I am really mild with sex scenes because I feel almost too embarrassed to write them. Maybe I'll have to read yours for some encouragement hahaha.
I heard your threats, and I've updated! Don't hurt me!
Now update your newbie, or else I'll hurt you.
Date: Sep 06, 2015 11:46 am Title: Chapter 55
This was sooooooo good. Please keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks BJ :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2015 10:21 am Title: Chapter 55
Didn't Michael leave Casey alone with Larry at some point. I feel like I remember that happening in the period Diane was away. I'm so angered by that man and yet I know so little of his story yet. Ugh. I'm hoping with all I have that Greg pulls out all the stops and catches people lying through their teeth come Tuesday.
I'm with Kaito on this. The evidence is so contrived that it almost seems like a set of some kind.
I'm not really surprised that Mak feels she wants to have sex with Michael. I'm not entirely sure she is strong enough to go through it. Then I'll be showed if she does. I'm glad she has Raia as an outlet it seems to be helping her a great deal.
Cant wait to see what goes down next.
More soon <333
Author's Response:
Thanks for the thoughtful response, Tut. And yep, you're right... he has left Casey alone with Larry on a few occasions plus there's been situations where there's been clues that he's had access to Casey without either Diane and Mike knowing. (tip: earlier it was mentioned the last person to stay in the guest room beside Casey's was actually Larry) There's a lot of lies happening and moments that people aren't thinking about. Because Larry is a person who was very close to Michael at a moment in time, Michael is probably overlooking him massively because he thinks he knows him.
If you think about 93 and 03, all the charges were based on was a single allegation without much "evidence"-- that's apparently all it takes!
Ummm as if you wouldnt want to have sex with Michael! Who knows if she'll get through it or when they're going to get the chance.