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Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2015 07:23 am Title: Chapter One

This was definitely an interesting start to a great story, you got me wondering if Nicole and Michael will have a secret affair ;) Hahahaa well yeah this was a very descriptive chapter and I can't wait to read more! :D update soooonn 



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Thank you for commenting and we'll see ;)<3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2015 11:31 pm Title: Chapter One

I love it So far. You should really continue with it. It's great. 



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Thank you for commenting<3

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2015 08:49 pm Title: Chapter One

I like the first chapter. Natalie seems to be spoiled. Wonder what Nicole is like?

Cant wait for the next chapter

 



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Thank you for commenting. We'll see what hes like very soon 

Reviewer: lovemichael4 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2015 08:18 pm Title: Chapter One

Just that last sentence, "Damn." it's priceless XD. Great first chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you for commenting!! <3 and lol i had to add that.

Reviewer: QueenKyra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2015 06:40 pm Title: Chapter One

Welcome fantasiesMJ. Nice start to your story <3



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Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2015 06:35 pm Title: Chapter One

More, please!!!!!



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Thank you for your comment<3

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