[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2011 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ahh! I love this! Its soo realisitic. I think youre a amazing writer! The book stealing thing made me laugh haha & the michael fact was hilarious haha
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2011 02:40 am Title: Chapter 2
I love this story because it is so different. Please update soon! I also love the MJ facts, do more.
Date: Jun 18, 2011 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
I wanted to leave a review the other night when you put this up, but the site wouldn't let me. I LOVE the concept. Something new, and interesting. Different from the usual FFs out right now, and that's what I've been waiting/looking for. You're a great writer and I can't wait for Michael and Annalise to fall in love. Update soon (:
P.S. Love the facts (:
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2011 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like this! I think youre doing a great job, at first i didnt think i would like it but surprisingly i actually do haha :) cnt wait for the next part
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2011 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol when i got done reading this i didnt relaize i wasnt logged in to review :/ but then i actually really liked the story so, decided to log in and give you some of my thoughts. Haha
Great job :)! I like your word choice and the imagery you use. It makes everything really easy to picture ! Cnt wait to read chapter 2!
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2011 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love please do more. It is sad that Michael got whipped already. Wonder what happens next.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2011 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting story. I hope you will update soon. And the picture you have of Michael in the suit is beautiful.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2011 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it please continue, and update!
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2011 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your story. Please Continue and update at the end of the day. I have a feeling this is going to be good.
Date: Jun 18, 2011 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello there =)
Very, very interesting! I've waited for so long for a fanfiction from this era, so thank you very much for coming up with this idea ^^
The picture of Michael with the uniform and everything caught my attention immediately .. extremely handsome by the way =D
But really now, a very promising beginning you have there! I hope you'll update soon ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2011 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the concept, and the first chapter is very intriguing. I do hope you continue. :)
Date: Jun 17, 2011 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very interesting I would like to read lore