Date: Jun 16, 2015 02:09 am Title: Chapter 10
I thought she lived in New York? How did she get to Neverland in 2 hours? Thank u for updating! It's my birthday today im turning 20 I feel so old. Finally he says why he decided to come over and comfort her:) loved how he said you make me feel normal and likes that he can be himself around her without her treating him like he's 'Michael Jackson'. Finally the sexual tension is going somewhere!This is literally one of my favorite stories on here. Please update more I love it! Wait when u said god u look so beautiful he was so quoting the intro monologue to I just can't stop loving you. Love the reference.
Author's Response:
Let me start off by sayin HAPPY 20th BIRTHDAY!!!!!! Lol I had a feeling you'd question about the travel distance! So Autumn does live in New York but there's NO way in hell it would take her only 2 hours to get to Neverland, I just made up the 2 hour thing lol And yep the sexual tension between them is THICK!!! They're finally gonna give in to each other ;) Btw when Michael was talking about how beautiful Autumn was I never knew it was the 'Just can't stop lovin you' reference lol It does sound a lot like the intro! I'll upload more for sure!!!! Glad you're enjoying the story and once again HOPE YOU HAVE AN AMAZING 20th BIRTHDAY!!!!! :D
Date: Jun 14, 2015 02:02 am Title: Chapter 7
Loooovvvve it! Could you like update by tomorrow? Yes I'm that impatient. I get what she was giving him the cold shoulder like come on its hard to believe someone that famous, or any celebrity would just come over to your house because you're not ok and not do it out of pity or charity. Is he sure he wasn't bothered by what she said at the signing? ;) damn he should've stayed and made her feel better like I know she expects him to just read her mind and just get that's she's not ok, she's embarrassed and doesn't get why he came over in the first place. The suspense is killing me what did he say to her sister!?!!!! What's her job again? And why is she doing it if she hates it so much. Thank u for describing what she looks like! She sounds like she's gorgeous inside and out. He needs to man up and call her back or better yet just come back over & they have hot, angry passionate sex. Yes my mind goes there. ;)
Author's Response:
Lol girrrrrll I'll try to update soon ;) And ikr?! He never did explain to her why he came over.....you'll def find out what Mike said to Nadia in the next chap!!! Glad you're enjoying it so far! It makes my heart happy :)
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2015 01:08 am Title: Chapter 5
sad chapter glad to see that michael did not leave her in her time of upset great chapter i cant wait to read so much more of this amazingly awesome story keep up the great writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)
Date: May 25, 2015 12:56 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow. Just wow. I did not see that coming. That was hilarious how horny she was getting from seeing him half naked and then hearing him shower in her bathroom:) i hated that he was psychoanalyzing her then took her phone away until she told him the truth but I get why he did it he ended up being right about her. I love how cute and shy he is about asking to take a shower. Totally spot on with his personality overall:) you definitely captured PTSD accurately. I hope he makes it up to her big time for saying she deserves to be cheated on and wasn't mature enough to let her ex'a clothes go. I missed this story!! Please update more often and happy belated birthday by the way:) hope u had an amazing bday:)
Author's Response:
Awie thank you!!! I had an awesome 18th bday :) And Michael was right about Autumn....he knew there was more to the story between her and Justin. He'll deff make it up to her for sure :) Glad you're enjoying the story!!!
Date: May 12, 2015 02:04 am Title: Chapter 4
That's hilarious that, THAT is the first thing he says to her, is ask where her clothes are. I love how you made him convinced that he was going to convert her to being a moonwalker. Does he expect to eventually fangirl over him like her sister does? Way funny. Is he really that chill with her having totally bashed him or is there more to it? You could also put in there that it's refreshing for him to see someone be themselves around him, and not so call 'fangirl', kiss his ass etc or you could put in that he's heard so much worse and she's entitled to get opinion but he hopes to prove her wrong. Are you going to explain why he decided to come over to check on her and why he gave her his number? Does he just want sex, does she intrigue him? Anyway love what you have so far it's really funny. Also if she does end up liking his music it should be because she relates to it on some level like the messages they portray. Say have you ever read King by InLoveWithMichaelJosephJackson? It has a similar premise to it, your story reminded me of it but that one is unfinished which is awful cuz it's soo good:) please update more often I LOVE this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! I'll def try to take all the things you mentioned into consideration :) Glad you're loving the story so far!!!! Btw u posted ur review on my bday :) lol
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2015 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
lol dang great story and chapter looking forward to reading more of this great story
Date: May 06, 2015 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow I love this story it is creative and it is soo funny how she calls him drunk, and his reaction 2 her I just could not stop laughing! Will u keep the story going if u plz! An anti fan? Wow lol. I can't believe he said that. I simply had the best laugh I have ever had in a long time.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I was actually cracking up myself while I was writing it! Lol is that weird?? :)
Date: May 05, 2015 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ok another thing I loved how Michael wasn't completely pissed off at her for basically trashing him to another fan. You should totally go into more of why he wasn't mad at her. Besides the fact that he's an all around awesome and forgiving person. I loved that he was teasing her by calling her an anti fan 😉
Author's Response:
Awie thank you! I'm actually am gonna go more in depth in the next couple of chapters as to why Mike was so chill with Autumn practically throwing shade at him that day at the Invincible signings lol .....Stay tuned! :)
Date: May 04, 2015 01:46 am Title: Chapter 3
Ahhh I loooooovvvve this! god I hope autumns ok she's ha the worst day of her life. And then she drunk calls him even though it's awful that she's in pain it's pretty hilarious that she decides to call him :) please write more I am so in love with this:) I totally feel for her. By the way I LOOOVE your other stories too😍
Author's Response:
Aw that's so sweet!!! Thank you so much gurl!!! And I agree, it was a good thing for Autumn to finally give Michael a call even though she's BEYOND wasted lol and awww I'm glad u loved my other stories too! :)
Date: May 02, 2015 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please write more! I'm totally in love with this story!! It's hilarious, unique and just downright awesome😀😍😍please write more ASAP
Author's Response:
Awie thank you so much for being my first reviewer!!! I didn't think anybody liked this story lol I definitely try to update now more :)