Date: Jan 12, 2015 09:01 am Title: Chapter 11
Love the cat and mouse game so much fun
Hopefully that's the last of Pete
Hope she agrees to move in at the ranch its the best thing to do and that could be fun too
Author's Response:
its fun writing the cat n mouse game. thanks for reviewing as always your loyality means alot
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2015 06:25 am Title: Chapter 11
cute chapter loved the cat and mouse play going on between them looking forward to reading the next chapter to this story keep up the great writing
Author's Response:
thanks for your continued support. i love hearing what you think
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2015 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm very happy that Michael allow Megan to tell him about her situation before he pushed her away. I knew she was in state of desperation and against the wall and only did it because she had no choice. I also feel that Megan is proud woman and she won't just take Michael's money even if they are beginning to date each other.
I know Michael's kind heart and he will pay off her medical bills. Michael will do it without her knowing because; I think he senses that Megan won't just won't let him pay her bills. Megan is a proud woman and even without sight she is also very independent.
I would like for Michael to talk to his lawyers to see if they can investigate her former job firm and double check to see if indeed she was let go do to budget cuts or is it just straight up discrimination because of her condition and if Megan really wasn't eligible for severance package.
I'm sure Michael will offer her to stay at neverland but, I'm not if Megan will accept right off the bat.
I love the ending after all the sadness, hurt & bad luck tale off her life. She let him know she like his kisses and she defenectly wants to feel the THRILLER (well she kinda did went the camp out on the floor but, I guessing she wants a deeper feel ;). I love it when Megan makes Michael tongue tide is soooo cute.
As for Michael he was honest with Spunky he likes her body, finds her sexy, desirable and thinks she is beautiful. He also admitted HE wants to giver the THRILLER ;) lol
How sexy is a piss off Michael?? (VERY 😘). He put Chris in his place..... *sshole.. Hey Chris you got Knock the F*ck Out!!!!!!!!
Please update soon cause I love this story 💖💖💖💖 IS ALL FOR L.O.V.E..... Lummi 💖💖💖💖💖💖😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2015 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
im gad the secret is finally out now they can finally move on and be together looking forward to the next chapter of this story
Date: Jan 11, 2015 09:14 am Title: Chapter 10
Forget the (crappy) apartment there are enough bungalows on the ranch right? And as rent or whatever she could help with cooking and cleaning and stuff right? Just an idea
They're so cute together love the fact she makes him stutter so cute can totally picture that
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2015 08:20 am Title: Chapter 10
Damn - I couldn't see Michael laying his hands on another person, but he did.
I think Michael will pay her medical bills. Maybe she can help with his music? She could also assist with cooking.....
I love this story. One thing I'd like to see is a little more description of where they are in time and space, to fill out the dialogue. Give greater context. What I mean is, what are their facial expressions like? Does he reach out to touch her hand in the middle of something she shares? Etc. I think that would add another layer of richness to this. <-- take that for what it's worth. Trash it or incorporate it. Either way, I'm reading :)
Author's Response:
I know what you're saying but I really suck at being descriptive. I have ideas up to the wazoo but so so writing skills. I'm certainly no novelist and am the first to admit it. Thanks for the suggestions tho...glad you're liking it.
Date: Jan 11, 2015 05:50 am Title: Chapter 10
Finally the truth is out... But I still think she should have told him more about her dad. He may come back and really aggrevate her! Hopefully Chris will come around and quit being a jerk. I love Megan and Michael as a couple. Great Writing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2015 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh gosh, that was such a powerful chapter. I'm so shocked that she took extasy but, I see why she would; she just wanted not to be in a present state of mind to do what she did. It must it so hard for Megan. To go from being a college graduate, having a successful career, a great apartment and what she though a great boyfriend to losing her sight, her home, her job and the cherry on top to have her boyfriend walk away and call you names like ugly because of something that you have no control over it.
With her illness not a lot of opportunities to find a job either and she's drowning in medical bills. Defenectly Megan's life has a lot of pain, sadness and a lot of bad luck. Megan is desperate and I honestly feel her pain. I been there; not as far stripping cause lord knows even if I had the body I've be to embarrassed and way to shy to ever do that. But sometimes you get stuck and bills get behind and you got no groceries home so it happens to best of us.
Michael needs to cool down and let her explained and talk before he blows. Is so obvious how he feels towards Megan, he so protective towards her and already warn Chris to lay off. I would be so hot if Chris took another cracked at Megan and MJ shoves the hell out of Chris. Please update soon I need to know when they finally talk. Remember we are all human and we make mistakes.
L.O.V.E is the message :)... Is all for LOVE Lummi <33
Date: Jan 10, 2015 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 9
It's true, he can't really make up his mind until he hears the whole story.
And I must say, there's a story here, a veeeeeeery big and long story at that.
Date: Jan 10, 2015 04:39 am Title: Chapter 9
Things have got to work out if he is thinking of paying that large hospital bill! Chris better let up or next time he will be seeing Mike's fist. Hopefully no more clubbing for Megan anymore
Date: Jan 10, 2015 01:46 am Title: Chapter 9
Forever a gentle man so sweet (I swear we need more of those nowadays)
They make such a sweet couple
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2015 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awww, so sweet! I hope Michael can be understanding once he hears everything in the morning. Then again, we all know he'll forgive her in a heartbeat. The boy has got it bad! lol
Date: Jan 08, 2015 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Reading about the strippers and what they were doing, just makes me mad. I just can't believe that women would stoop this low and let men use them for their own pleasure.
This makes me feel very sad. I really can't blame Michael for doing what he did.
Good job Michael!!!
Date: Jan 08, 2015 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
She's not really a nun. She's a hore playing a nun as rollplay.
At least, that's the way it seems to come across to me.
Author's Response:
Ouch. She's someone who's made some bad choices to survive the crappy cards she's been dealt
Date: Jan 08, 2015 03:46 am Title: Chapter 8
Bravo! Mike must have died...lol...poor Megan...now hopefully they can start fresh