Date: Jan 17, 2015 01:36 am Title: Chapter 13
It's not like he's going to leave her like her last boyfriend
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2015 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awwww. They need each other
Author's Response:
i know...soon hopefully...thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: Jan 16, 2015 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awww, he's trying so hard! Mama Pearl was right; they've got to take it one step at a time.
Author's Response:
maybe too hard. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2015 08:35 am Title: Chapter 12
Great update 😀😀. I knew Megan would be stubborn and wasn't going to accept his offer to lived in Neverland right away but, what I known off Michael Jackson he is a very creative man, he will work his magic 😉.
Things are HEATING up between Mr. Big Hands & Spunky. They can't gt enough of those kisses 💏. (not that I blame her) just friends?? Nope I don'y think so; friends do kiss each other but, the don't fully make out. I know Meg is scare of getting hurt but, what Michael has done so far proves that he's NOT like other guys (lol, some dialogue from THRILLER).
I would like the next time she tries to kiss him 💋; Michael stops her and tells her; I like you Megan and I hope you like me, they way I like you (lol more dialogue from THRILLER) Megan recognizes the dialogue and she begins to laugh but, when she hears the seriousness in Michael's voice she stops laughing. Michael will ask her the famous question: Will you be my girl?? And I hope the answer from her is what most of us readers are wishing for.
Mamma Pearl, she is a riot and she's so sweet & caring. I know she loves Michael like a 2nd mama. She walked in and caught them kissing, I bet she got embarrassed & was blushing 😳😳.
Please update soon.... Is all for L.O.V.E. Lummi 💗💗💗 💏 M&M
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2015 07:30 am Title: Chapter 12
I love how you are integrating more descriptions of their movements/the scene. It really enriches your story!
This 'friends' stuff is unlikely to last long...
Author's Response:
I'm trying to be a better writer and change up my style..we'll see how long it lasts though...it's hard to change how you do things but I understand what you mean by it. Thanks for the critique.
Date: Jan 15, 2015 04:18 am Title: Chapter 12
Just friends? Yeah right lol
If she's not convinced to stay yet I don't know lol hope she stays
Just love mama pearl
Date: Jan 15, 2015 04:08 am Title: Chapter 12
ITs getting pretty HOT! I love momma pearl..I sooo hope Megan moves in. They both need that! Cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2015 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
These two are too adorable for words! Meg, stay with Michael!! Please? lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2015 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 11
Woooooo, Is getting naughty up in here 😉. I can see my Mickey is in need of some McLovin lol. I say it now and I say it again is PO'd Michael super HOTT. Michael Jackson laying the smack down on that jerk from the club. I know those 💲💵💸💰1000.00 are a blessing to Ms. Megan.
Michael is an Amazing Man. I still say Ms. Spunky is very independent and she will be a pain in the butt to try to convinced but, I know Michael he will be sneaky about it, he will say oh just stay for a night, then for a week, then they'll have projects and homework so she stays longer by the time she ask him to take her home; the moment she is there by herself in the that small apartment she call him and tell him she misses him and wants him to come get her. (MJ is a very bright fella ;).
I want to suggest that Michael speaks with one of his lawyers and checks out that firm to see if they just screw Megan out what she deserves.
Please update soon, cause I'm loving this and I can't wait for the slumber party ;).... I predict some sexiness... Is all for L.O.V.E. Lummi 🌷🌻🌹🌻
Author's Response:
trying to start on next chapter tonight..patience my friend...thanks for the review as always i love to hear what you have to say
Date: Jan 12, 2015 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter...love how she got her money back. Way to go Michael. Hopefully he wasn't recognized. She has got to move in...sexual tension is too much not to! SWEET!
Author's Response:
thanks :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2015 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
Glad Megan got her money that that slimeball owed her. Now she never has to go there ever again. Hmmm, I wonder how Michael will convince her to live with him at Neverland?
Author's Response:
no more stinkey pete..mikey took care of him and his lady :) thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2015 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yay!! They are so cute the way they flirt with each other. I love it!
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2015 10:41 am Title: Chapter 11
Nice chapter. So glad Meg got all her money and the boss got his good. Trying to keep Meg's mney.
Author's Response:
he was a scumb but what would you expect? he runs a strip joint...thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2015 10:41 am Title: Chapter 11
Nice chapter. So glad Meg got all her money and the boss got his good. Trying to keep Meg's mney.
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2015 09:59 am Title: Chapter 11
"thriller awaken" <-- I'm still laughing
I still can't see Michael as the aggressive type, encouraging physical threats and whatnot. Maybe legal action? IDK.
With the tension in the kitchen, I totally thought something was going to happen. You did a great job at conveying the tension.
Author's Response:
i try to kep it entertaining.
i know mean mike is out of charecter but we all sexy protective macho mike.
thanks for reviewing
no worries somethings gonna happen eventually ;0