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Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 16

Michael: She is not my girl, she is just a friend. 😊😊😊😊😊

Oh my sweet Michael De Nile, is just not a river I'm Africa.  You are in L.O.V.E with Ms. Meg and she is Ying & Yang and you deserve a good, trustworthy woman in your life.

I'm so glad that any doubt that Megan had is out the window and that she hears from someone outside of Michael's circle of trust, that he is a caring, loving and giving person.  Alright Thriller behave and don't come out of that coffin yet. Lol😜😜😜😜😜

Please update soon... Is all for LOVE 💗💗💗😘..Lummi (PS: Tweak to Perfection 😉)



Author's Response:

thriller stay in the coffin..thats hillarious

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 16

They're so cute. I can't wait to see what happens when Meg moves in with him. :)



Author's Response:

well you'll just have to wait and see.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

Omg I love this story. It's so cute especially Megan.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 07:45 am Title: Chapter 16

such a beautiful chapter looking forward to the next beautiful chapter



Author's Response:

thanks..i keep trying.

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 04:30 am Title: Chapter 16

With Michaels feelings the way they are , he definately needs to let Meg make all the first steps. Her knowing that he did that for the homeless will move their relationship forward quite a bit! Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2015 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 16

Im sure this opens a door for them,  she finally sees how much he cares about her 

Won't be surprised if she spends the night in his bed but does her own thing during the day in her own bungalow 

It was so nice to check on her 



Author's Response:

we will have to wait and see when she makes the move to the ranch..thanks for the consistant reviews.

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2015 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 16

I knew she'd ultimately come around. The level of risk around her was ridiculous. I mean, I could get it if she was close to people in the neighborhood, but she isn't.  Now, the question goes to where she will want to live at Michael's place....will she want to eat alone? She's use to being solo...too much change at once can be suffocating.



Author's Response:

time will tell..but she probably wont want to be alone..thanks

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2015 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 16

That was so sweet! I'm glad that she changed her mind and realized that the way she was living was awful. 



Author's Response:

yea she certainly lived in the slums or what i pictured a slum to be like.  thaks for always reviewing

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2015 01:19 am Title: Chapter 15

Wow, things are getting a little more intimated between Michael & Megan 💏. Even after such a personal moment they find time for their sassy, witty, sexy banter.  But in the mist of it all, Michael said he kinda wanted for Megan to be his girl💗💗.

Lol 😄, I can't believe she took his shoes and said she would sell them on ebay.  Poor Michael had to get Ben get him shoes and Ben got him sneakers. I've seen that Michael always wore his loafers, boots and slippers.  I only remember Michael wearing sneakers once for when he did a commercial for when I believed Nike had come out with MJ shoes and NO not MJordan 😜

Michael kindness is beyond measure.  Yea he will accept to take her rent money to make her happy.  He would either open for her a savings account or with her share + a big difference keep paying off her medical bills. So by the time she graduates and gets a teaching job her medical bills will be completely paid off. 🌈😊

As for the end of this chapter you had me in tears; Michael's heart is so big. He most certainly would be that giving, his humanitarian side is so wonderful.  I really wished that more people would be this way.  His love message we must always remembered and do our best to continue to carry on the message.  I 💗 U, Michael 💗😘😊.  Is all for L.O.V.E..Lummi 💗c6;



Author's Response:

La gears girl. Wu

ith the sexy ripped jeans and leather jacket. ;)

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2015 09:24 am Title: Chapter 15

the ending of this chapter is truly beautiful i have always loved seeing this side of michael it still hurts me that he is no longer with us i loved this beautiful chapter the ending had me nearly tearing up keep up the amazing writing of this amazingly beautiful story of a amazingly beautiful man 



Author's Response:

its funny how things happen.  i never intended to put that homeless bit in but did at the last moment and look..everyone loved it.  it does deplict a real view of what Michael really did so I'm glad it meant something to you.  thanks for reading

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2015 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I just love how these 2 are together.... Boy is the sexual tension rising. I love this story!  Maybe Meg wants to stay there because she too also helps this couple! Maybe they can move into her appt!!! So many things can happen....keep the updates coming

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2015 12:13 am Title: Chapter 15

Loved it glad they admitting their true feelings for each other can't wait to see what happens next 

The part with the homeless people was just beautiful 



Author's Response:

yea, they are making gains.  the homeless bit was an accident but it worked well.  thanks for reading

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2015 12:12 am Title: Chapter 15

Awww, that was such a sweet thing Michael did for that couple and their child! It's what I expected him to do, though. And I'm glad that he and Meg are opening up about their feelings to each other. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

everyone seems to agree with you   the homeless couple was an accident.  a good one I guess.  thanks for reading

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 15

I liked the piece with the homeless couple. I'm curious as to where you will take it next. What is she going to do during her last night in the apartment? Will she move into a bungalow, a room in his house, or his room? Well they slow things down or keep moving forward?

I can't help but wonder if her vision is going to come back....does she know that Michael paid her medical bills?

And a highlight of my favorite part:

She was trapped.  She didn't have any other way to make up the work so she had to agree to Michael's offer which meant she was going to be close to him over the next few days.  Just the thought of his body pressed against her made her heart beat faster.  Her insides were doing back flips.  She was terrified how quickly she was falling for him and was mortified what they almost did in the bathroom.  How would it be when they were alone in his house?

I love internal monologue. It adds tension to a story without having to rush the script, do something drastic, and allows the reader to get invested in a character. This one segment alone pulls me in so many different possible directions. Love it.



Author's Response:

Red you should know me by now.  I throw things out there and see what the response is.  if its favorable then i'll bring it back.  some things i add and weave back in at a later date or immediately or never at all.   the homeless couple was not planned it just happened.

 

I'm undecided about ther vision.  i need to do some research to see no pun inteneded if its possible.  its one of those things that i do is reasearch so some things are more believabel.

 

thanks for your reviews i love it

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 15

Their banter is the cutest thing! Things will be very interesting with her moving in while they continue to try to fight their attraction to each other. That homeless scene? My God, it nearly made me cry. See, this is what I miss the most about my angel. His generous, loving and kind nature. This chapter made my night (or, should I say morning? lol). Thank you for another amazing update. 



Author's Response:

I try to throw in their banter because i feel its an important part of their attraction.  no one has treated him like that and he likes it  the homeless was truely a last minute addition.  i had no plans on that at all it just happened.  glad you and everyone liked it.  thanks for reading

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