Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2015 07:43 am Title: Chapter 24

Not trying to put a damper on romance, but I've experience a sprained ankle a few times and if anyone tried to touch that swollen ankle even with a fingertip I would have blasted them to hell from pain. Plus sex was the farthest thing from my mind - I was more interested to get my hands on as many painkillers as I could find....

Sorry, trying to be an honest reader. That sprained ankle killed the truthfullness of the scene for me...

Author's Response:

well everyone has their own pain tolerance level and it depends on the level of pain.  I hiked on a bone chip all day so everyone is different.  Not saying you're wimpy but its different for everyone.  The point was she was lost and paniced.  I appreciate the honesty though and thank you for reviewing.  I'm still sticking to my chapter decisions.  Hopefully it didnt turn you off.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2015 04:38 am Title: Chapter 24

This was an awesome climax (pun intended) to the story. Mama Pearl is a trip, lol!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  Glad you like it

Reviewer: janina1974 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2015 12:46 am Title: Chapter 24

Yessss... great chapter, I liked it so much. And the previous one was perfect to, the Michael´s and Ben´s shopping in sex shop.

Author's Response:

thanks so much.  I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2015 06:22 am Title: Chapter 23

Well I must say that each chapter gets better & better.  Quite the adventure for Michael & Ben as they go on the hunt for as mama Pearl likes to call them "raincoats" lol.  That store clerk she was quite the character.  1st she assumes that they are a couple, then when she knows they are not and Michael tells her his size for "raincoats" (Magnum XL 😉), her attitude completely changes and she unashamedly begins to hit on Michael.  (Not that I blame her) A Michael J with some facial hair; can we say S.E.X.Y. LMAO, curious I wonder why Lummi was out and about looking for this kind of item (vibr*tor) so early in the morning and who is it for??  I can only imagine Michael's face when he saw Lummi walk in.  I'm looking forward to their 1st L.O.V.E making 💏💖💖.

My Suggestion: 💏💖💏💖💏💖💏💖💏💖

The 1st time I would 💖 if they had a romantic picnic by the lake during sunset.  Trees all around.  Two big soft blankets: one to placed on the floor the other to cover their naked bodies.  A nice bottle of wine, fruits, whipped cream, cheeses and crackers to nibble on.  As they enjoy each others company and the sun begins to set Michael describes it to Megan how the sun dips away into the horizon, all the beautiful colors in the sky: orange, pink, red.  He finally looks at her removing her sunglasses which she tries to stop him; Michael please and he replies baby girl your eyes are beautiful.  He kisses her deeply and they slowly start undressing.  They finally get make LOVE.  He takes his time making sure Meg is satisfied.  They lay in each other arms.  She's asleep and Michael wakes up and throws on his boxer briefs.  He walks closer to the lake, a feeling of joy fills him and he begins to hum that familiar tune.  Dam dum dam dum for you and I to cuddle close together all through the night with a big smile on his face dam dum dum I'll make you see.  Michael starts doing his iconic dance.  Can you picture it; Michael just wearing a pair of red boxer briefs dancing.  Doing the thriller " monster " breakdown 👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😜.  I can wait, please update soon.... Is all for L.O.V.E. Lummi💗

Author's Response:

MJ is so sexy with facial hair in my opinion.  thats funny the thriller lyrics.

 

thanks for your long reviews...I love them.

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2015 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 23

That was so funny. Poor Michael. He was so embarrassed having to buy condoms, and having that lady hitting on him like that. I could just picture his face. 

Author's Response:

poor mike indeed.  whats not to hit on though?  Shes just doing what we all would do.

 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2015 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 23

Loved it. It was hilarious when Michael and Ben went in the sex store to look for condoms.

The interaction with Michael and Mama Pearl with the condom and the size was so much fun.

Author's Response:

thanks.  glad you liked it.  I try to put humor in my stories.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2015 11:24 am Title: Chapter 23

Not long before they finally could take it further 

Lol the trip to the sex store, but seriously that woman was practly drooling all over Michael im surprised she didn't recognize him

 As for the right moment with Michael and Megan

 A romantic set up with those candles that have different scents like roses or something like that, a romantic dinner that they cooked together and the bed (if that's the place) covers with roses like this 

Author's Response:

she didnt recognise him because she wasnt looking at anything above the waist..lol  thanks for the review and your suggestion for the moment

Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2015 10:19 am Title: Chapter 23

Ha! Thaty was beyond funny! The trip to the sex shop I mean. Being cockblocked for the 3rd time in a row is not funny at all. Poor Mike....I hope he gets some action soon.

Author's Response:

he will no worries.  they will get their reward soon enough.  thanks for reviewing